Shiva-Raavi OS: Fierce - Page 2

Le lo… mera dil lelo behen ❤️ It was SO GOODDDD AHHHHH 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰

OMG where do I even start? From the very beginning to the end, I was so hooked to this piece! I am in love with your writing style! Everything you penned down went straight to the heart! The dialogues in this piece should have a seperate fan base ☺️ I JUST LOVED THE DIALOGUES!!!

“Iss Shiva ko sirf uski Gauri bahar la sakti hai”

This dialogue is so true. Only Raavi has this power over Shiva and nothing in this world can match her power over him. Not even Susu or Dhara.

Raavi was so on point! I love this Raavi and I want more of this Raavi!! She’s just everything I’ve always wanted Raavi to be. Fierce. Determined. Aware of her value. Ready to FIGHT for herself!! oh god how I enjoyed this version of Raavi! The way she explained her hurt had me experience the dreadful year once again… omg even reading about Disha makes me scared to this day 😭😭😭 Raavi’s POV was written supremely well!! I’m so happy that you didn’t make her melt as soon as Shiva proposed to her!

And Shiva?? Wowie! I loved this version of Shiva as well! I just loved how he became a sponge in this piece, soaking in Raavi’s complains, anger, hurt, and regret. And I’m glad that he’s willing to fight for his relationship! Aakhir ladka dheet hai 😚 loved how the proposal happened in front of the whole family!! Now they will remember that Raavi Pandya will ALWAYS be the first priority for Shiva Pandya 😳

Also, I’m so glad you chose to keep the family dynamics intact! I have always loved the bonding between the Pandya members! But now the show has completely ruined everything. Reading about Rishita offering logical advices to Raavi, Gautam and Dhara being mature and Krish adding some fun jokes here and there (that are appropriate) was so nice!


AND yes, Susu, you should definitely go on that tirth yatra 😃👍🏼 please contact me if you want any sponsors for your trip 🥰

Thanks for this wonderful OS! Also, thanks for tagging ❤️

It was beyond awesome 🥰🥰

Loved the confrontation each and every word was so true.........

Shiva and the realisation was something we all were looking for so far and it not only included tge recent deeds but also everything he did from tge startinh.....

Loved rhis😘😘

OMG, V🥳🥳

This was AH-MAZING!!!! Omg, I absolutely loved this OS very very very much.❤️❤️❤️😆 After a long time, I love the kaandya family.😆 You nailed everyone's character traits. Honestly, This should've been shown in the show. The audience would've definitely loved this. This OS had everything I wanted and more.

Thank you for taking the time to make this fantastic piece and Thank you for the tag😳

PS: Mujhe Sequel chahiye😆

Vandana, thanks for tagging!❤️

First of all this is a fantastic OS! 👏 I am glad you wrote this because we will never see this in the show. Raavi’s feelings are never addressed and as a character she is taken for granted by every single person in Pandya parivar.

Finally Shiva had to hear what all Raavi went through because of him for the past year. He almost ruined her life and continues to be oblivious to his wrong doings and justifying it all saying she deserved better, Raavi rightly said, who the heck is he to decide what’s right for her.

Raavi has been truthful and sincere about this marriage ever since the kidnapping misunderstanding was cleared in Mukteshwar. Even before that she defended him against Mami’s and Anita’s taunts and later against her own friends. But for him her life has been a bargaining chip where he thought could get his way. She us also right about him not standing up for her against his family members. She has always been made a scape goat and every single family member took out their bhadas on her especially Shiva, Suman and Rishita.
Anyway I am glad Raavi got it off her chest and firmly believes Shiva doesn’t deserve her love and sincerity.
Shiva has made too many mistakes, one life time is not enough to rectify it all. This time he is determined to win her over because he finally realized he has wronged her big time. I am curious to read what he is going to do to make it upto her (No pressure to write part -2 of this OS😆)

As for the family, finally they are all going to be spectators of this war between Shiva- Raavi, especially Suman, Dhara and Rishita, all 3 interfered a bit too much.
Both are dheet- Raavi is determined to get divorced from him and Shiva is determined not to let her go this time.

All the while ,when I was reading it I was expecting to find a 'saabit kar shiva saabit kar'😆..it never came..and how beautifully u made it all workout...😍..

I simply love ur writing..it was very detailed and nothing was left out..I never realised how much this show has affected me until I was crying reading all the hurt ravi spoke out finally..and I laughed near the end reading suman all alone worried about the impending doom that she is sure to fall on her..😆..I loved it vannu❤️..it took me long to complete reading it..I have been reading it in oarts since yesterday..sorry for replying this late..please write the sequel too...I want to see how Shiva woos her..I want to read more from you..

Love

Love this raavi so so much❤️

Would love to read more.. How shiva will rectify all his mistakes

How shiva will win raavi's trust

I want to read all

Originally posted by: Pritha_31

Vanduuu❤️❤️😭😭

This is sooo soo sweet, I don't know how to appreciate this enough.

This is the Shiva I love, jealous for his girl, can't withstand her ignorance and ready to fight the whole damn world for his precious wife.

Raavi, my heart goes out for the girl, I'm so happy for the way you explained her feelings, how she knows if she lets out her pain, she'll forgive everything. There are so many beautiful things in this os, the way Raavi expressed all her dissatisfaction in the relationship, all the feelings that had bottled up in her heart and the way Shiva understood all the pain beneath the anger.

Shiva assuring her was the undoubtedly the best part, but but but the cute essence of Shiva - Raavi that you put between that has whole my heart, it made me laugh between the sobs and it's so Shivi, the pout queen Raavi and the ever so cute Shiva

As much as I loved the Shivi conversation, I also liked the cute family reaction, because this was the PS dynamics we all hoped for.

See how long comment your os made me write, and there's still more of it ❤️❤️

Thank you so much!! 🤗

I am so very glad that Raavi's pain, Shivs's reaction to it and finally his decision came across with all the feels. And the ShiVi essence, I tried to stick to it and am happy it came out well.

I just thought including the family's reaction to this Shiva would be interesting. 😆

Bold: Looking forward to the rest of it! ❤️

Originally posted by: Yahvi

Wow wow wow.. Truth bombs pe truth bombs.. Kaash kaash humein aisa kuch mil pata😭

But go Raavi🤪

& yes this Shiva I accept.. Only for this Shiva.. Go Shiva🤪

Thanks, Yahvi Di! ❤️

And I'm glad you liked this Shiva. 😃

Originally posted by: Sparklesparkle

Ugh sooo soooo sooooooo goooddddddd. Loved it soooo muchhh😭😭😭😭😭😭❤❤❤❤❤ dheet shiva is everythinggg 😭😭😭😭❤❤❤❤

Ive waited for saabit kar shiva for tooo longgg 😭😭😭😭❤❤❤

Thank you!! ❤️

I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I hope it was worth the wait! 😃

Originally posted by: mkc12345

This was so amazing 👏 ❤️. I have wanted for Raavi to really go to town on Shiva after all that he has put her through, so reading this was so satisfying.

Thank you so much!! ❤️