Shiva-Raavi OS: Fierce - Page 4

Originally posted by: deeps07

All the while ,when I was reading it I was expecting to find a 'saabit kar shiva saabit kar'😆..it never came..and how beautifully u made it all workout...😍..

I simply love ur writing..it was very detailed and nothing was left out..I never realised how much this show has affected me until I was crying reading all the hurt ravi spoke out finally..and I laughed near the end reading suman all alone worried about the impending doom that she is sure to fall on her..😆..I loved it vannu❤️..it took me long to complete reading it..I have been reading it in oarts since yesterday..sorry for replying this late..please write the sequel too...I want to see how Shiva woos her..I want to read more from you..

Thank you so much, Akka! 🤗

I though the effect of Shiva trying to prove himself without Raavi having any expectations from him would be more impactful. So I left it out. 😆

I do have a couple of ideas of a sequel, so maybe something soon. 😉

And thank you for your comments on my writing. ❤️ 😳

Originally posted by: Prizi

Love

Love this raavi so so much❤️

Would love to read more.. How shiva will rectify all his mistakes

How shiva will win raavi's trust

I want to read all

Thank you!! ❤️

I'm glad you enjoyed it so much! 😃

A sequel, maybe. 😳

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

RES

UNRES

Oh My Worlddddd!!!

Oh how this was worth every day I've waited since I read the first sneak months ago. Though I didn't know the context or anything and I've only had a little taste of the portion where Raavi flinches but I have been hooked to this ever since then. God knows you've made me wait for it.😆

To be honest the start intrigued me, made me want to open up the can of worms too fast too soon. WHY - is he being loathed by everyone? WHAT - did he actually do to achieve this hate? and HOW - did Raavi chose not to put her MS and Sindoor after fighting night and day for it?! The preset was terrific, it made me curious just as it should have and kept the show running.

As I kept reading my heart went all awry, up-down, side-to-side because the suspense was revealed, steadily at that. Shiva actually trying (and succeeding) to kidnap Raavi to marry her off to someone else was the ultimate breakdown we'd all been waiting for back in the day. I had very mixed feelings about it not taking place, happy-because they didn't stoop Shiva lower and sad-because we didn't get a venting out.

The holi scene was very well written. I felt it all, after SO LONG, the haq and intensity. EVERYONE knows how I long for these two things in a fic. I'm surprised Shiva didn't kill the guy lol.

Their confrontation or if I am allowed a little leeway here I'd call it Raavi's Outburst for the very sake of how is panned out. She was fierce, bold and above all truthful for the first time in years. Raavi as a character had been wronged too many times and all she does is forgive and forget. I've been very public about how I wrong I feel Raavi was in the Jabariya-Shaadi scheme that Bhabhi bought, simply because she agreed to scam the man she loved. I might have been the handful of people who called her out on it, so seeing her change her perspective always made me sigh in relief. Here happened the same. She said all the right things and all the right words for it. LOVED HOW YOU PUT IN A TAD BIT OF JELLY AAG BOI SHIVA when she was berating him for the pappi.

The highlight for me would totally be Suman Mummy deciding to go to Teerth Yatra lmao. Isse Acha kya hoyega??!!🤣

PETITION TO CHANGE THIS INTO A SHORT STORY OR FAN FICTION!!! ❤️😭

Thank you so much!! 🤗

Considering this one was written majorly for you, I'm glad it was worth the wait. ❤️

But dekho, Ritu, aise baar baar yaad nahi dilaate that I made you wait for it. 😆

Remember we kept discussing what the point was of the ridiculous Raavi-NRI shaadi plan?! Itna to discuss kiya tha humne, I decided to use it here. Plus, like I said, Shiva's behaviour in the last few months made it possible for us to believe that he was capable of something like this.

It was Raavi's outburst, and while I was a little worried that there were to many dialogues, I though she had to say all those things to Shiva for him to realise the torture through which he put her. Plus, her going against the jabariya shaadi plan fit in with her character. Raavi thinks about others before herself. (I remember discussing how the writers keep making Raavi the better person. 😆)

Wouldn't it be a better highlight if Suman Kaki was in the line of fire? 😉

Petition has been reviewed and is under consideration. 😎 😆

WOW WOW JUST WOW...

I absolutely loved it❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Ufff !!! Shiva, jitna tumne Raavi baby ko hurt kiya hai na usse do truck zyada mehnat karni hogi to get her back🤧🤧🤧

Rectify your mistakes sooner and live happily forever ♾️

Susumaa better you go on teerth yatra okay!!! And baaki ki family members se I don't have any issues because they are not going to poke their nose.😁

Suriiiii !! Me lambe comments nahi likh sakti but have my chotu sa dil ❤️❤️

Vanduuuuuu🤗

Aaaag laga diya tuneee🔥🔥🔥...

Just Superbb👏🏻

You addressed everything we wanted to be addressed and the dialogues of Raavi were just🔥

I cud literally see the dumbstruck expression of Shiva while the confrontation hapnd😍 He needed the Reality Check👍🏼

And I loved how Raavi didnt budge since the remarriage and refused to accept the marriage👍🏻 Her not wearing the marriage symbols were POWERFUL and it did give a blow to Shiva's ego and that made him do the talking👏🏻..Just loved it🥰

Now coming to Shiva...How cud the man be sooo clueless...but iam sooo happy that atlast he did rise up and decided to prioritize her🥳

I loved his confession♥️ It came right from his heart and that will be the start of his redemption👏🏻 i hope Raavi will not give in soon😅

And iam sure his confession wud hv given a small HA to both his MAAs🤣... and they need it TBH...i loved how Suman was worried abt him falling into the Raavi's spell🤣🤣🤣 and how the family us preparing themselves😂....just loved those parts

Vanduuu...suchhaa good OS and you penned it soooooo beautifully♥️

Originally posted by: Saakshi2k

WOW WOW JUST WOW...

I absolutely loved it❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Ufff !!! Shiva, jitna tumne Raavi baby ko hurt kiya hai na usse do truck zyada mehnat karni hogi to get her back🤧🤧🤧

Rectify your mistakes sooner and live happily forever ♾️

Susumaa better you go on teerth yatra okay!!! And baaki ki family members se I don't have any issues because they are not going to poke their nose.😁

Suriiiii !! Me lambe comments nahi likh sakti but have my chotu sa dil ❤️❤️

Thank you so much! ❤️

Originally posted by: Paru95

Vanduuuuuu🤗

Aaaag laga diya tuneee🔥🔥🔥...

Just Superbb👏🏻

You addressed everything we wanted to be addressed and the dialogues of Raavi were just🔥

I cud literally see the dumbstruck expression of Shiva while the confrontation hapnd😍 He needed the Reality Check👍🏼

And I loved how Raavi didnt budge since the remarriage and refused to accept the marriage👍🏻 Her not wearing the marriage symbols were POWERFUL and it did give a blow to Shiva's ego and that made him do the talking👏🏻..Just loved it🥰

Now coming to Shiva...How cud the man be sooo clueless...but iam sooo happy that atlast he did rise up and decided to prioritize her🥳

I loved his confession♥️ It came right from his heart and that will be the start of his redemption👏🏻 i hope Raavi will not give in soon😅

And iam sure his confession wud hv given a small HA to both his MAAs🤣... and they need it TBH...i loved how Suman was worried abt him falling into the Raavi's spell🤣🤣🤣 and how the family us preparing themselves😂....just loved those parts

Vanduuu...suchhaa good OS and you penned it soooooo beautifully♥️

Thank you so much, Paru!! 🤗

I'm so glad you loved Raavi & Shiva' reactions. ❤️

Well, BhabhiMa is in shock seeing her baccha's avatar, but Suman Maa did have a minor attack. 😆

Vandanaaaa! THIS WAS INCREDIBLE ❤️❤️❤️

My heart is so full reading this! Omg

I loved Raavi's outburst, her pointing out everything that Shiva hadn't done for her. Loved Shiva and Raavi's "tennis match" as you call it 😆

The writing was soo good man! This is called progress and clarity in a relationship! I mean, we always wanted ShiVi to be able to communicate their thoughts and feelings to each other and never got it to this extent. So glad you penned this one down ❤️

It was earnest and sincere from Shiva. He was always a clever, witty guy with his comebacks!

Are we gonna get a continuation of Shiva would achieve this? 😆

Oof such a satisfying os ✨

❤️ After a long time got something good n different to read

Its amazing , do continue I'll be here waiting✌️😉

Originally posted by: nolee3097

Vandanaaaa! THIS WAS INCREDIBLE ❤️❤️❤️

My heart is so full reading this! Omg

I loved Raavi's outburst, her pointing out everything that Shiva hadn't done for her. Loved Shiva and Raavi's "tennis match" as you call it 😆

The writing was soo good man! This is called progress and clarity in a relationship! I mean, we always wanted ShiVi to be able to communicate their thoughts and feelings to each other and never got it to this extent. So glad you penned this one down ❤️

It was earnest and sincere from Shiva. He was always a clever, witty guy with his comebacks!

Are we gonna get a continuation of Shiva would achieve this? 😆

Thank you so much, Namrata! ❤️

I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and my writing. 😃

I have got a few ideas for continuation, so maybe something soon. 😆