ShiVi mini Drabble: Dil Pe Patthar Rakh Ke Maine...

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Mini drabble

Typed on the phone, so please ignore the typos. You know my history!


Imagine about a month into their (re)marriage:

Shiva walks into the room frustrated for the lack of some personal time with his wife because she (rightfully) wants him to put equal efforts in to the marriage as she did to get them married. A way for his repentance for all the hurtful things he said along with showing mistrust. He loves her too much and curses himself for being an idiot sakth launda while Raavi was making all the advances the past month and half.


Raavi, on the other hand, is really melting from inside seeing his efforts. She is having difficulty staying away from him/his touch and purposely refuting all of his advances to take the next step in their relationship. Their one month anniversary is approaching, and she had planned to give him a green light then. However, punishing him meant punishing herself as well. And after his romantic gesture earlier in the day, him taking her side against Dhara, and him helping her out with all her chores/ responsibilities- not giving a hoot to suman & family's patticoat chaap jokes-, she doesn't think she can last a day away from him.


As she's thinking this, she enters their room. Seeing Shiva, she gets an idea to punish him for a couple more days without completely torturing herself.


She proceeds to their bed and lies down beside him. A moment later, she scoots next to him and places her head on his chest while circling her arms around his torso. As Shiva's about to wrap his arms around her, she looks up with an evil smirk and says, "Not so soon baby. Mere bandar ki punishment abhi bhi jhari hai. Par usme tumhari chipkali ko kyun saza mile? Tumhari Chipkali Hoon toh tumse toh main chipkugi. Waise bhi tere kandhe toh mera permanent pillow hai. Hain na, baby? Uss waqt dhakela tha na tune mujhe tere khatiye se? So no touching for now."


She proceeds to give him a kiss on his cheek before telling him, "Sweet dreams, my love."


While red, flustered Shiva looks at Raavi with an open mouth in bewilderment and at loss of words. After few minutes, as her words and actions sink in, Shiva groans in frustration and curses himself for the nth time for being an idiot.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Love this😍

For what all Shiva put Raavi through since the IVF kaand, he deserves to get no action. I am glad Raavi decided to punish him😆 Now he has to earn it 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: mpks1

Love this😍

For what all Shiva put Raavi through since the IVF kaand, he deserves to get no action. I am glad Raavi decided to punish him😆 Now he has to earn it 😆


We just have to jheli this dukh as well. Mujhe SR chaiye, par yeh bhi chaiye 😭😭🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago
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It's awesome..and satisfying to see Shiva going through this sweet and torturous punishment. 😆.I want them to be together but not so together until shiva shows the same crazy love like ravi and earn his right on her..❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Best punishment for Shiva🥰🥰

Raavi needs to do some nakhra🤩🤩

Loved this❣️❣️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This was so cute!! ❤️

Raavi is totally capable of doing this, the Chipkali that she is and teasing Shiva to her heart’s content. 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: deeps07

It's awesome..and satisfying to see Shiva going through this sweet and torturous punishment. 😆.I want them to be together but not so together until shiva shows the same crazy love like ravi and earn his right on her..❤️



https://youtu.be/TSnMb4YTY98


Ok, I'm gonna go hide now.


🤣🤣🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Odette_delusion

Best punishment for Shiva🥰🥰

Raavi needs to do some nakhra🤩🤩

Loved this❣️❣️

Yes!!!


Her motto should be the song I posted in the earlier response. 😂😂😂😂

Edited by Mountains_Lakes - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: VNuts

This was so cute!! ❤️

Raavi is totally capable of doing this, the Chipkali that she is and teasing Shiva to her heart’s content. 😆



Haha, thank you!! So true.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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He deserves no action for another year tbh 😂😜 I wish you made it longer 🥵 I still loved it tho! Love seeing Raavi torture Shiva hehhe

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