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Posted: 3 years ago
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Inside Pawar's house


"Anjali Vahini, Kahaan ho aap? Pawar...Kya hua hai Pawar ko?" Malhar was panting when he entered Pawar's house through an already open door. Inside it was pitch black.


"Vah...Vahini? Pawar?" Malhar was feeling a strange restlessness today. Was he going to lose Paw...No.


Then suddenly the room got bright with a choir like singsong- "Happy Birthday to you! Happy Birthday to you! Happy Birthday Malhar Sir! Happy Birthday to you!" Pawar's son and daughter were jumping with joy holding a cake together.


"Kya badtameezi hai ye Pawar?" Malhar's anger knew no bounds, "Isliye tumne Anjali Vahini se phone karwaya tha? Aur mujhe laga ki tumhe...Dimaag kharaab ho gaya hai tumhara. Tumhe pata hai aaj mujhe naye DM ko bhi receive karne jaana h. Ye time h ye naya naatak karne ka?"

Malhar was going to storm out when Pawar's daughter started crying, "Baba kya Malhar Kaka mujhse bhi gussa ho gaye?"


Pawar had no words to console her. Then he told Malhar, "Theek hai Sir. Mat khaiye aap cake par agar apne aaj ye cake nahi khaya to main, Anjali aur ye bacche aaj poore din bhookhe rahenge."


"Pawar!" Malhar gnashed his teeth.


"Nahi Sir. Main aage kucch nahi sunoonga."


"Theek hai," Malhar said bitterly, "Ab to tumhara junior hoon main. Tum bhala meri baat kyon maanne lage?"

Pawar got emotional on hearing this, "Ye kya keh rahe hain Sir aap? Vaqt ke saath bahut kucch badalta hai, magar har cheez nahi. Kucch cheezein hamesha ek samaan rehti hain. Aap mere bahadur Sir the, Sir hain aur hamesha mere sherdil Sir rahenge."


Malhar had to cut cake. If anything, in these five years, Malhar had learnt, not every relation is grand, sentimental and expressive and has that raabta, but it is these subtle, earthy, often ignored relationships like him and Pawar, which become the only reason for a lost soul like his to be alive. He had received the letter of his Babdi today, along with her lock of hair and her hate for him. But can he blame his sister? He too wanted to beat the person in front of him lifeless when he looks at the mirror. If it were not for Pawar, he would've killed himself a million times in these five years. Even when everyone including himself thought him to be a wife's murderer, Pawar refused to believe his Malhar Sir could do any wrong.


Anupriya humming a song very quietly. She didn't know how could she hide her happiness. She thought to herself, "Aaj itne din baad vo lautegi. In 5 saalon mein apni har chitthi aur phone call me maine use bhanak tak nahi lagne di ki yahaan kya ho raha h. Bas, Malhar naam ke bure sapne ko uske aas paas bhi nahi bhatakne Dena kyonki agar is baar meri bacchi ko Malhar ne zara bhi dard diya to Aai shapath, main use..."And with anger, Anupriya broke the coconut by smashing it against kitchen walls.


Malhar was driving the car with the ACP sitting on backseat when he suddenly stopped the police Jeep.


"Are ye Jeep kyon roki tumne? Tumhe pata hai na DM..." Malhar crossed the road running. A group of hooligans were teasing a girl.


"Aap dariye mat madam, main dekhta hoon inhe," Malhar said without even looking at the girl, "Kya chal raha hai ye? Ek jhaapad parega saari jawaani utar jayegi tum logon ki."


A boy tried to hit Malhar but Malhar blocked his fist. All boys attacked Malhar together, and Malhar was efficiently fighting them when he saw the face of the girl. "Kalyani!" He whispered.


Meanwhile the ACP was growing impatient, "Are yahaan DM mam aane wali Hain aur is sub-inspector ko hero banna hai."


All memories before five years flooded before Malhar's eyes after seeing that face and he lost his balance and the hooligans took the advantage and attacked Malhar. One was going to attack Malhar with a knife when he was attacked on his throat by a hairpin. He cried in pain when suddenly the pepper spray caused them all temporary blindness. Kalyani supported Malhar to get up.


"SI Rane," the ACP got out of the car, but when he saw Kalyani, he saluted her and said, "Ma'am aap yahaan? Ham aapko lene hi aa rahe the ki yahaan ye sub inspector..."


"Aapke department ka ek police officer ek ladki ko eve teasers tak se protect nahi kar sakta," Kalyani said sharply, "Poore sheher ki security ke kya haalaat honge ye to isi se pata chal jaata hai."


"Kya karein madam. Ye sub-inspector...bina kucch kiye dhare inhe bas free ki salary chahiye hoti hai. Kisi kaam ke nahi hote aise nakaabil officer."


"Sahi kaha aapne," Kalyani said, "Naakaabil hi sahi, magar at least itna moral compass to hai Officer Rane ke paas ki unhe pata hai ki agar koi ladki beech raaste museebat me ho to uski madad ki jaati hai na ki police Jeep me baithe baithe tamaasha dekhna hota hai."


The ACP laughed nervously, "Madam, ye to aapka badappan hai jo itni Kam age me IAS exam top karne ke baad bhi is mamooli sub-inspector ko aap appreciate kar rahi hain varna..."


"ACP, kya breakfast me thoda butter Bach Gaya tha jo aap yahaan makkhan laga rahe hain?" Kalyani smirked.


Kalyani went towards her car when Malhar stopped her. He held her arms"Tum Zinda ho Kalyani? Itne saal kahaan thi tum? Tumhe pata hai..."


Kalyani said bitterly, "Kyon shock laga aapko ki apni jis patni ko aapne apne haathon se goli maari thi vo zinda kaise Bach gayi? Revolver to abhi bhi h aapke paas. Fir se try kar lijiye. Kya pata is baar main mar jaaon." Kalyani pried Malhar's hands away from her.


"Kalyani..."


"In 5 saalon me apni boss ko address karne ke manners bhi aap bhool gaye, Officer Rane?"


"S...s...sorry, mam," Malhar said and saluted Kalyani. Kalyani shut the car door with force and her car went leaving Malhar in dust.


Meanwhile in Ahalya Niwaas


Aau Saheb thinks watching the news of new DM of Aurangabad on TV, "Main jaanti hoon ki tum yahi manaa rahi ho Anupriya ki tumhari beti Malhar se door rahe. Par agar Kalyani Malhar se door rahi, to Mera badla aur Malhar ki barbaadi kaise hogi?"


Swara thinks to herself, "Ab Malhar Dada ko is nark se tumhi chhutkaara dila sakti ho Vahini "

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Pragyu meri jaan wahhh kya start ki and thank you iss acp ko include karne kein liye 😳

Main humesha aise hi scenes sochti thi aur abb mujhe pata hai next chapter main kya dena hai thank you ....🤗

Abb dekhna malhar aur kalyani ko kaisa badhiya romance anger sein bhare vala likhti hoon oh god main itni filmy 🤣

Anupriya ka to patta saaf karna hai mujhe 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Phlo004

Pragyu meri jaan wahhh kya start ki and thank you iss acp ko include karne kein liye 😳

Main humesha aise hi scenes sochti thi aur abb mujhe pata hai next chapter main kya dena hai thank you ....🤗

Abb dekhna malhar aur kalyani ko kaisa badhiya romance anger sein bhare vala likhti hoon oh god main itni filmy 🤣

Anupriya ka to patta saaf karna hai mujhe 😆


Waiting for your chapter so much Vanshu Rani!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Pragya... You have started off very nicely..

👍🏼👍🏼

Vanshu, I would love to read your update..


I'm excusing myself from this FF my dears because I already am still writing an after leap story. Tashan and simmering romance is not something I am good at.


So I am planning to be a reader.. And encourage you all to continue.


Hope you all don't get upset.. Sorry girls.❤️❤️ ❤️❤️

Edited by rekha_crm - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Promo chapter :-2

Kalyani entered in her office and sits there angrily ..foot tossing on the floor and a paper weight tossing by her hand on table is clearing telling the staff about new D.M. anger issues ...

All the new and old officers who know her just pray to god to save the person from her anger who is going to be prey ...

Suddenly malhar entered and all the noise left the room suddenly leaving everybody eyes closed in fear

Malhar about not knowing about the situation enter into the officer and salutes her

Kalyani::" dekhiye sab log kon aaya hai ...acp shikhar ...aarti ki thaal ready haina ... kyunki koi itne pehle aagaya ki lag raha hai yahan kein best officer vahin hai ..kyun mr.rane .." she said with gritted teeths making him rolled his eyes ..

Again her taunting started

" Waqt pein aana bhool gaye hai aap ..yaad bhi hai aapko ki aap ek police officer hai jahan jo duty ka time hota hai vahan pochana hota hai .." she said by standing up from her chair

" Wahin naa ..dekhiye kalyani madam kaise si hai yahan kein kuch ata pata hai hi nhi ..maine to malhar rane ko khoob samjhane ki.." before he could complete kalyani turned to him angrily and glares at him

" Meri baat poori huien bina yahan koi kuch nhi bolega ..understood mr.jaiswal aur haan naahi ye school hai aur naa hi main principal ko aap mr.rane ki complaint leke mere pass aarahe hai ..so just shut upp.."

Malhar stood their seeing all her angry avtar and that jaiswal getting scolding by her for a change he is enjoying his kalyani's new avtar ...

Holding her tightly by her waist he whispered in her ear

" Tumhein jitni dm giri dikhani hai dikhao ..agr tum pehle vali Kalyani nhi hoon to main bhi pehle vala malhar nhi hoon ..abb mujhe kissi ki baaton sein koi fark nhi padta ..agr naukri sein nikalna hai nikal doon ..."

Aur haan ..vaise iss saree main kaafi achi lag rahi hoon...firozi jachta hai tumhein kalyani ra... Deshmukh he said huskily leaving her in shocked state as he winked at her and left her cabin...

Ye...malh..arji hi ha..ina...she said in whisper

To kaisa laga ye idea pragyu bolo doon update iski ...

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: rekha_crm

Pragya... You have started off very nicely..

👍🏼👍🏼

Vanshu, I would love to read your update..


I'm excusing myself from this FF my dears because I already am still writing an after leap story. Tashan and simmering romance is not something I am good at.


So I am planning to be a reader.. And encourage you all to continue.


Hope you all don't get upset.. Sorry girls.❤️❤️ ❤️❤️

it's ok di i understand..par phir bhi agr aapka kissi bji chapter ko likhne ka maan kare to pls humein update dena ..aur humein aapkein guidence aur idea ki bhi jarrorat hai..🤗
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: rekha_crm

Pragya... You have started off very nicely..

👍🏼👍🏼

Vanshu, I would love to read your update..


I'm excusing myself from this FF my dears because I already am still writing an after leap story. Tashan and simmering romance is not something I am good at.


So I am planning to be a reader.. And encourage you all to continue.


Hope you all don't get upset.. Sorry girls.❤️❤️ ❤️❤️


It's OK Rekha. I love how your stories are grounded, realistic and emotional. Even I'm a noob at writing romance, that's why I feel more pulled towards MalMoksh, Malhar-Pawar dynamics.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#8

Originally posted by: Phlo004

Promo chapter :-2

Kalyani entered in her office and sits there angrily ..foot tossing on the floor and a paper weight tossing by her hand on table is clearing telling the staff about new D.M. anger issues ...

All the new and old officers who know her just pray to god to save the person from her anger who is going to be prey ...

Suddenly malhar entered and all the noise left the room suddenly leaving everybody eyes closed in fear

Malhar about not knowing about the situation enter into the officer and salutes her

Kalyani::" dekhiye sab log kon aaya hai ...acp shikhar ...aarti ki thaal ready haina ... kyunki koi itne pehle aagaya ki lag raha hai yahan kein best officer vahin hai ..kyun mr.rane .." she said with gritted teeths making him rolled his eyes ..

Again her taunting started

" Waqt pein aana bhool gaye hai aap ..yaad bhi hai aapko ki aap ek police officer hai jahan jo duty ka time hota hai vahan pochana hota hai .." she said by standing up from her chair

" Wahin naa ..dekhiye kalyani madam kaise si hai yahan kein kuch ata pata hai hi nhi ..maine to malhar rane ko khoob samjhane ki.." before he could complete kalyani turned to him angrily and glares at him

" Meri baat poori huien bina yahan koi kuch nhi bolega ..understood mr.jaiswal aur haan naahi ye school hai aur naa hi main principal ko aap mr.rane ki complaint leke mere pass aarahe hai ..so just shut upp.."

Malhar stood their seeing all her angry avtar and that jaiswal getting scolding by her for a change he is enjoying his kalyani's new avtar ...

Holding her tightly by her waist he whispered in her ear

" Tumhein jitni dm giri dikhani hai dikhao ..agr tum pehle vali Kalyani nhi hoon to main bhi pehle vala malhar nhi hoon ..abb mujhe kissi ki baaton sein koi fark nhi padta ..agr naukri sein nikalna hai nikal doon ..."

Aur haan ..vaise iss saree main kaafi achi lag rahi hoon...firozi jachta hai tumhein kalyani ra... Deshmukh he said huskily leaving her in shocked state as he winked at her and left her cabin...

Ye...malh..arji hi ha..ina...she said in whisper

To kaisa laga ye idea pragyu bolo doon update iski ...


Haiinn? Behen last me to tune shock de diya bilkul....Malharji me Shera ki aatma aa gayi kya. Tera suspense is literally jaanleva...

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Nice promo Vanshu..

Jyada intezaar mat karwana

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Autumn09


It's OK Rekha. I love how your stories are grounded, realistic and emotional. Even I'm a noob at writing romance, that's why I feel more pulled towards MalMoksh, Malhar-Pawar dynamics.


Thank you for understsnding Pragya..

I'm going to love you girls writing

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