Udariyaan | Episode Discussion Thread #53 - Page 87

Originally posted by: Bluekohl

Idk if there's another one... But in this one I imagined he'd use a curtain as a drape and call buzo. Who'll bring clothes from mahi. But now the siblings know🤪

Try it if you'd like. Sometimes change is fun. And you're a naturally great writer.

It's awesome. Like just so perfect... Lil details you added, and especially the characters. I mean I know F would behave like this, that's his character. But I so wish T would have this retributive streak, at least a lil bit. Even for a moment where she would just hurt him. God that'd be great! But your characters were on point. ♥️🔥

wait, there's curtains in auditorium's??

Okay 👍🏼

It's the angst yaar. Angst. Sometimes I'll go on a tangent and forget the necessary plot details and it's a mess. So my humour is more dark/dry.

Again, thank you. You make me blush 😳

T is such a blank slate at the moment. Like a repurposed canvas. Core values are still there but there's no additional layers added. So it kind of makes it easier/harder (depends) to adapt her into your plot. She could go either way.

Originally posted by: Bluekohl

Are take care. What happened? You ok? Baad mein dekhna writing, first take care of yourself and be well ♥️

I guess... sat with bad posture. Hip pain. Got a jap for that so it's even worse. On painkillers for the week.

Will do, thank you 💚

Originally posted by: Bluekohl

Yes something has happened, he's really upset, she's trying to cheer him up. It's visible.

But scooty ride ki kya zarurat thi? Wo coffee ke liye car mein bhi nachta hua aata🤪🤣

Like scooty doesn't make sense. Ek to pahad jaisa aadmi funny lagta hai, like the only time someone choses to ride a bike with someone else, even when they have a car, is just to get close. Lol seen enough guys around doing this

That car is of Fateh’s, Tejo has Scooty…😆 she is asking him out for coffee so it’s her mode of transport…I normally do this when I take someone out for dinner/lunch, it would be always my car 😆

Originally posted by: SaoirseRZ

wait, there's curtains in auditorium's??

Okay 👍🏼

It's the angst yaar. Angst. Sometimes I'll go on a tangent and forget the necessary plot details and it's a mess. So my humour is more dark/dry.

Again, thank you. You make me blush 😳

T is such a blank slate at the moment. Like a repurposed canvas. Core values are still there but there's no additional layers added. So it kind of makes it easier/harder (depends) to adapt her into your plot. She could go either way.

There's a room kinda thing attached in our college audi and there were curtains there.

Are it happens. Like when you are writing something, just a sentence or phrase comes up and changes the entire story.

You do write angst very well. But I'm sure you'll be great at other stuff too. Oh dry humor would be actually great, and realistic. Like this isn't a tv show with ott antics, and i like writings where the core character remains same.

Originally posted by: Mink

The longer version of bike ride upcoming scene with flashback . I knew she would be the bold one now

https://www.instagram.com/tv/CZE5Ch_hVbG/?utm_medium=copy_link

This is the balance they didn't have previously. This give and take. Tejo has been only giving and giving and even during fake engagement Fateh had been unknowingly taking her peace of mind. Now she thinks he's deserves a hand held out to him because he worked on a good version of himself.

And the song. Mera dil 🕺💃

Originally posted by: Bluekohl

Same. She's acting like a chaalu guy who just wants a girl to get closer. Car mein kya hi problem thi😶

And yess... Why's she asking to hold her? Brake laga toh dono giroge. It's so funny to see this hulk of a man holding her for support 😂🤪🤣

He'd crush if she sudden brakes. Inertia. He's going to fall into her. Break his nose on her helmet and they'll got to hospital, not coffee shop.

Originally posted by: Aniash

I noticed everything ' green'.🤣🤣🤣

Clothes, scootie and background ( trees)

That was actually quite... unpleasant. The aesthetic of this was a big NO. Maybe some yellows or browns would've added something more.

It didn't take much away from the scene but a bit bland. Her pink helmet clashed so bad with the green tho 🤕

Originally posted by: Bluekohl

Yes something has happened, he's really upset, she's trying to cheer him up. It's visible.

But scooty ride ki kya zarurat thi? Wo coffee ke liye car mein bhi nachta hua aata🤪🤣

Like scooty doesn't make sense. Ek to pahad jaisa aadmi funny lagta hai, like the only time someone choses to ride a bike with someone else, even when they have a car, is just to get close. Lol seen enough guys around doing this

Her terms her mode of transport. It's kind of her independent streak. Tejo doesn't have car so scooty it is. It's a feeling of empowerment kind of thing that she's in control basically and fateh has always admired and been ok with this side of her. He tried coming to her rescue in initial days of marriage but she told him off coz she's not bechari. One of the reasons he thought she might not be that badly hurt with ema coz she's strong enough. J always behaved like damsel in distress so that gave him that macho feeling but with T he never got that. Now that he's a better man and has understood the meaning of love he's totally fine with her taking charge. But that doesn't mean he won't protect her. Tejo ko kuch bhi hua fateh hi pehle aag main koodega savior banke😆

Originally posted by: SaoirseRZ

He'd crush if she sudden brakes. Inertia. He's going to fall into her. Break his nose on her helmet and they'll got to hospital, not coffee shop.

As long as she's taking him, he's happy to go. Be it a cafe, hospital or a cemetery.

Originally posted by: Bluekohl

There's a room kinda thing attached in our college audi and there were curtains there.

Are it happens. Like when you are writing something, just a sentence or phrase comes up and changes the entire story.

You do write angst very well. But I'm sure you'll be great at other stuff too. Oh dry humor would be actually great, and realistic. Like this isn't a tv show with ott antics, and i like writings where the core character remains same.

I haven't had a classroom with curtains since primary. Then it was open windows because there was a hill...? Next to our secondary classes. College and uni have blinds instead. Other classes invested in curtains tho. They made the ambience so tacky sometimes with the clash of colours between curtain and walls 😂

And sometimes you write sth so beautiful but it doesn't fit the scene anymore and you scrap it. Oh that one actually hurts. 😭

I read angst a lot too so maybe that affects it 🤔

I don't mind OOC characters but only in fanfics. If the original media retcons the character then it's bye from me.

What if in the future they start making sitcoms with ott stuff.... 🤯