The devil beneath: JasFa SS COMPLETE (update page 8) - Page 4

awesome story.

it is even better than what ud makers can think in their 7 lives..

bechari simran dii😭

Originally posted by: SilverBell

Awesome Jasmine Deserves This. I Don't Feel Sorry For Her One Bit.

Devil Fateh Is Awesome

Only Tejo Can Calm Him Down.

But She Left.

That's Good.

I don't feel sorry for her, she's evil. When she brought Jass back, it showed to what extent she can stoop.

However my conflict with writing this was, it might get too dark or f#cked up, Because F is really dark here and he won't hesitate hurting her in any way.

Originally posted by: 08_maria

for a family show it might be a little but for us it's very less (atleast for me😂)

My reactions were for Fateh asking J to undress😬🤣

You have completely pulled out the dark shades of Fateh , matlab bande ko pura nanga kardiya , which makers can never do hence you are seeing these mixed reactions!!😂😂😂

We are replying with emojis cuz you have left us SPEECHLESS !!!🔥

The writing is on point ! In real life people like jasfa would actually end up like this ! It's a tv show hence Fateh still has learnt his lesson too fast , he is shown to have a good heart , but that's for T and his family (which I don't see true cuz he has effed up his family too all the time!)

I beg you , don't stop this🙏🙏🙏

I don't like abuse , but J deserves this , especially from r bringing in Jass , J needs to go through this mental torture where she has none to help her ! Let her miss Tejo during these troubles 😏

But don't stop this , I'm waiting for part 3 ❤️🔥

That's where the conflict is.. It's not just emotional pain. This F will get abusive in every way, physical, mental... And I'm kinda hesitant to explore that area.

Originally posted by: Bluekohl

That's where the conflict is.. It's not just emotional pain. This F will get abusive in every way, physical, mental... And I'm kinda hesitant to explore that area.

Don't be hesitant , but ya itna bhi mat excite hoja ki people get triggered reading abusive Fateh 😁I can see how ur stories are gonna go , this F is gonna give her both mental and physical pain ,aur iska level will keep increasing. Aur as usual u'll leave us all SPEECHLESS!!

I absolutely love this!

Please tag me in future updates

I am in awe with your writing. Please do continue. This is the jasfa we thought we didn't need.

I can seriously picture Fateh pulling off this stunt. There is a darkness in him which he keeps under control. Bt we cd just hv a glimpse of it when he meticulously n in a very sadistic fashion planned the entire fake shaadi n the canada trip to take revenge frm Jasmine. Due to the constraints of itv being a famy television many of the shows cannot explore the dark side of characters. Bt here in the forum we hv the liberty to do so.

Do continue. Just a suggestion do mark ur ff as Mature, so that readers can use their discretion to read or skip the parts.

Originally posted by: jhankarbeats87

I can seriously picture Fateh pulling off this stunt. There is a darkness in him which he keeps under control. Bt we cd just hv a glimpse of it when he meticulously n in a very sadistic fashion planned the entire fake shaadi n the canada trip to take revenge frm Jasmine. Due to the constraints of itv being a famy television many of the shows cannot explore the dark side of characters. Bt here in the forum we hv the liberty to do so.

Do continue. Just a suggestion do mark ur ff as Mature, so that readers can use their discretion to read or skip the parts.

Yep, while I was writing this Fateh, I really didn't think I am taking any liberty with the character. He's the most complicated character in the show, and he does have this darkness. If it was a character on a webshow, he'd most certainly do it.

Since you visited, give it a go if you've got time

res

will read it tomorrow!