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Originally posted by: Nicky-nish

Your story is quite intriguing. Excited to read further😍

Thanks for the tag.

Thanks dear hope in coming parts you should hook to the story 😇😇😇😇

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🥰🥰💕Very intrigued, can’t wait for your next update 👍

Thank you for tagging me🥰

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Originally posted by: Luvs_SanIsh

🥰🥰💕Very intrigued, can’t wait for your next update 👍

Thank you for tagging me🥰

Tomorrow most probably

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Episode 5 :

Episode started with shiva offers some money to aman as a reward for his lie and he happily accept that..


Shiva : tera inam.

Aman : thank you sir ... I m greatfull to you for this reward.


Shiva noded... and Aman left the spot..


Shiva come back hom


Dhara : a gaya tu Shiva ... Kb s wait kar rahi the... Tu freash ho ja mn khana lagati hn.

Shiva : han bhabhi buht bhook lage hai... Bhabhi wo ... Ek request karni the ap s

Dhara : han han bol na shiva ..

Shiva : bhabhi aj methi k parathay bana do na.. buht man hai mera ..


Dhara surprised and jump with happiness... ( Its had been monthsqnd years that shiva touches methi parathas


Shiva : bana do ge na bhabh

Dhara: han han zaroor kun nahi... Mere bachay n itnay arsay bad mujh s farmaish ki hai to zaroor banaon ge.... lakin shiva..

Shiva : lakin kia bhabhi..

Dhara : r u sure


Shiva moves 1 step forward and holds dhara's shoulder... Reply smilingly.


Shiva : i m 100 and 1 present sure bhabhi... Shaq ki koi ginjaish hi nahi hai ..

Dhara : mn bs yun gai r yun ai... jb tk tu change kar le..

Shiva : theek hai bhabhi... Mn freash ho jata hin tb tk ab banao..


Shiva left for his room to getting fresh and dhara went to make parathas.


After 15 minutes .


Dhara calls shiva while making parathas


Dhara : shiva tu freash ho gaya kia..

Shiva : han bhabhi ... Bs aya..


Shiva comes back to kichen and dhara serves him.. and he start eating without break ..


Shiva : waha waha ... Bhabhi kia parathay banati ap..


Door s khushbo s bhi mi mn pani a jata hai..


Dhara smiles..


Dhara : han han sb janti hn mn ... Wesy aj mujhe makhan kun lagaya ja raha hai..

Shiva : makhan nahi babhi mn to sach bol raha hun ... kia mast parathay banati ho ap.... Jis ka koi jawab hi nahi... Lajawab.


Dhara sits beside him cups his face in her palms...

Dhara : Lajawab to mere bachay ki yeh muskan hai... us ki khushi hai... Waja nahi bataye ga apni bhabhi ko is ki


Shiva holds her hand in his .


Shiva : bataon ga zaroor bataon ga ... Ns sahi wakt anay do ek dafa... Ap ko nahi bataon ga to kahan jaon ga ? Kis ko bataon ga..

Dhara : Theek hai phr mn intzar karon ge tb tk ka..


At night.


Shiva silently peak into the kitchen and steal some parathas from hotpot and hide it in shopper... And slowly he was about to leave suddenly dhara catches him stealing dhara with widen eyes in unbelievab


Dhara : shiva yeh tu kia kar raha hai..


Shiva thought

Mar gaye yar... Ab bhabhi ko pata laga kn kun chupa raha parathay yo ghr mn bhakhera khara ho jaye ga.... Jhoot mn bol nahi skta bhabhi s... Kia karon... Haye bholenath kahan phas gaya..


Shiva : bha... bhabhi.. wo mn .. wo na mn ..

Dhara : kia wo mn wo main kar raha ... Jawab de seedhay sedhay.

Shiva : wo na bhabhi mera ek dost hai us ap k hath k methei k parthay buht pasnd hn mn na us k liye le k ja raha tha... Us n buht insist kia mujhe in k liye is liye..

Dhara : agar asi bat hai to pahle batana chahiye tha na mn zyada bana deti ... Ab bana doon .

Shiva : nahi nahi sahi hai inhni s kam chal jaye ga.

Dhara : paka han..

Shiva : paka bhabhi ... Acha mn abhi chalta hun use mil k ata hun ..


Shiva left the spot hurriedly...


Dhara : acha bachu ... Mujh se hushyari... Ab age age dekho kia hota hai..


Scene 3


Here shiva in car he divided the paratha in to 2 parts...


And stops his car infront of a huge iron rod gate..


Watch man comes there.


Watchman : namastay sahab ..

Shiva : jai somnath..

Watch man : bare dino bad ap nazar aye sahab... betiya ap k bare mn bare dino s puch rahi the.


Shiva hand over the one shoper to him..


Shiva : han janta hun wo mera intzar kqr rahi hoge lakin abhi kuch kam hai islye mil nahi paon ga use..

Watchman : ap use mil letay to acha tha sahab g... Bari udas rehnay lage hai aj kal... Bolti hai meri kisi ko fiker hi nahi hai..

Shiva : mn jaldi aon ga use milnay ap bas use mera na batiye ga kn aya tha ... Boloye ga k servent k hath bhjwaya mn n ... Warna wo bura man jaye ge..


Shiva hand over him some money ... and he take i


Watch man : jesa ap ko theek lage..

Shiva : bs kb tk mn wapas nahi ata use mat batana k mn aya tha... Use bolna mn jaldi aon ga..

Watchman : theek hai.


Shiva start the car n left the place..


Scene 4


Dhara called in office


Aman : Helo , Aman speakin

Dhara : aman shiva aya k nahi.


Aman surprised on her call and his fone was about to fall bt he catches it agai


Aman : na... nahi.... mam abhi to nahi aye boss..

Dhara : ok..


And cuts the call


Dhara notice the time on clock..


Dhara : 4 ghantay ho gaye... Abhi tk shiva office nahi punhcha..... to gaya kahan.... Kuch to garbar hai.


abhi tk to wo... Kahin w.... Wo... Mn.... Jo.... Smjh.... Rahi wo...... W...wahin.... To... Nahi gaya na..


Shiva after 3 hours come back to office


Shiva : Aman janardhan seth ki file mere office mn lao abhi..

Aman : g sir... Sir wo..

Shiva : wo kia

Aman : sir w....wo... Dh...dhara mam ... K

Shiva : aman saf saf bolo... Kahaniyan mat bujhao.

dhara bhabhi kia...

Aman : sir wo mam n a...ap k..ka.. pu...pucha tha..

Shiva : phir..

Aman : mn n kaha k ap nahi aye abhi tk ..


Shiva turns toward him angerly


Shiva : what ..


And place a hard slap on his face


Shiva : kaha tha na mn n k bhabhi ko in sb s door rakhna hai abhi ... How dare you ...

Aman : sir w..wo..

Shiva : get out..

Aman : s..

Shiva : i said get out from my office right now....


Aman left the place..


Shiva took out his coat and through it sits on his chair with flood of emotions his white eyes turn to redish pink ... Tears start falling from his eyes ..


Dhara words start playing in his ears.


Dhara : wada kar shiva ... Tu use door rahe ga ...tujhe meri kasam hai .. tu apni zindgi jeeye ga r use us ki zondgi mn khush rehnay dega..


And shiva was helpless about her swear and he have to agreed with her...

Edited by aimmyangle - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#56

nice one😊😊


note: part 3 of OUR LITTLE SECRET is out do read dear😊😊

and started working on the idea you gave for shiva and maami but it'll take time😁😁

Edited by virangna2005 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: virangna2005

nice one😊😊


note: part 3 of OUR LITTLE SECRET is out do read dear😊😊

Wahin ja rahi parhnay 😂😂😍😍😍❤️❤️❤️🤞🤞🤞

Edited by aimmyangle - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#58

Interesting❤

waiting to read further❤❤

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Getting more interesting

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Amazing one.❤️

It's getting more interesting with every update.❤️

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