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Posted: 3 years ago
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Interesting update👏

Loving the mystery👏

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Episode 4 :

Episode started with Dhara left some envelop on Shiva's dressing table

after half an hour :

Shiva comes back after taking bath and wiping his hair with towel...

mean while his sight catches the glimpse of envelop... he pick it up, open it and take out stuff from it ... saw it and smrik and shook his head...

suddenly his fone rang and Shiva pick it up...

Shiva : Helo.. han aman..

Aman : Sir ap n jesa kaha tha bilkul wesa mn n sara intazam kar lia hai...

Shiva : thats great... kisi ko shaq to nai hua na...

Aman : kisi batain kar rahe hn sar kisi ko kano kan khabar nai hoge...

Shiva : bs isis bat ka khuyal rakhana jb tk mn na kahon kisi ko kuch pata nai chalna chahiye...

Aman : ap befikar rahiye sir ... r dekhtay jaye asa chakar chalaya hai is bar k sanp bhi mar jaye ga r lathi bhi nai tootay ge...

Shiva : han Aman is bar hum har nai man sktay...

Aman : sir ap bs jaldi s ajaye yehn p ..

Shiva : han mn bs nikal hi raha hun ghr s

Aman : ok sir g bye

Shiva : bye...

Shiva disconnect the call ... and dressup for office... in black pant, white shirt and black coat on it... pick the envelop and left from room...

Shiva whistlingly comes down stair ... and surprised to saw the pooja arrangments going on with full swing ...

Dhara comes shiva touches her feet and Dhara gives him blessings ...

Dhara and Shiva talk smilingly

Dhara : khush raho... kesi lage pooja ki decorations..

Shiva : bhabhi .. yeh kia ho raha hai ... pooja achanak s ... kesay ?

Dhara : han mn n socha kuch dino s hamre ghr mn buht ajeeb mahool tha to socha sb ki shanti k liye pooja rakhwa loon.. kun? sahi nai laga tujhe..

Shiva : nahi nahi bhabhi buht acha ki... buht acha kia... pooja rakhwa k ... mn bhi ek acha kam karnay ja raha hun aj... to achay kam s pahle pooja to banti hai na... acha abhi mujhe office s calls a rahi hn thora kam hai ... mn sham mn ajaon ga..

Dhara : yad s a jana pooja warna tere baghair adhori re jaye ge..

Shiva : han bhabhi zaroor...

before leaving he holds Dhara hand and put envelop on it smilingly ... Dhara felt uncomfortable.. and Shiva left from there

Dhara comes to her room and through the envelop on the table and cries..

Gombie comes from washroom and notice Dhara crying ...

Gombie : Dhara kia hua.. ro kun rahi hai tu ase...? abhi tk to theek the tu?

Dhara hugs Gombie and cries...

Dhara : wo kun nai smjhta Gombie k hum sb us ka acha chatay hn... kb tk ase khud ko hm s door rakh khud ko chupata rahe ga wo... kab tk ase jhoti muskan r jhoti khushi ka makhuta charha k rakhay ga wo... tum to bhai ho na us k tum kun nai smjhatay use..

Gombie : Dhara tujhe nai lagta k hmn use kuch time dena chahiye... r Shivangi bhi to hai na us ki zindgi mn ... to kia wo Shivi ko peechay chor paye ga..?

Dhara : mn nahi chati Gombie k wo Shivi k chakar mn apni life r barbad kare .. ab use move on karana hoga... kuch bhi karo Gombie Shiva ko is beetay kal s nikalo .. tb hi ja k us ki zindgi mn khushian phr s dastak dain ge... use k sare makhotay utrain gaye... r mera heray jesa Shiva mujhe waps milay ga...

Gombie : acha abhi tu relax kar mn dekhta hun age kia karna hai...

Gombie wipes her tear and hugs her to make her comfortable...

here Shiva was running toward the main door from his mention suddenly he saw something , shocked and took his steps backward... as a weave of emotions ran into his body... he was unable to move further .. he felt someone frozed him ... he didn't know how to react.. a string of tears start falling from his eyes...

precape : Shiva sitting in dark place holding wine bottle and through stones in lake ...


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Posted: 3 years ago
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Interesting update👏

What is Shiva's past🤔

Who is Shivangi

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shivi_forever

Interesting update👏

What is Shiva's past🤔

Who is Shivangi

Thanks dear ❤️❤️❤️

Wi8 for the next 😉

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Thanks a lot 😊😊😊❤️❤️❤️❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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That was tha story

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Posted: 3 years ago
#37

Interesting. Please update soon.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: sandrasheron

Interesting. Please update soon.

Thanks alot 😇😇😇

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Posted: 3 years ago
#39

Scene 1 =

Episode started with


Main taan jiya na maraa..

Haaye ve das main ki karaa..

Dil jude bina hi tut gaye

Hatth mile bina hi chhut gaye

Ki likhe ne lekh kismet ne..

Baar baar rond akhiyan

Tainu jo na vekh sakiyaan

Khole aaye aaj kudrat ne..

Katta main ki ve din teri sonh tere bin

Main taan jiya na maraa..


Shiva sitting near the bank of river holding wine bottle ... He was drunk fully ... Through stones in the river ...


Chhan se jo toote koi sapna

Jag soona soona lage

Jag soona soona lage

Koi rahe na jab apna

Jag soona soona lage

Jag soona soona

Hai to.. yeh kyon hota hai

Jab yeh dil rota hai

Roye sisak-sisak ke hawayein

Jag soona lage

Chhan se jo toote koi sapna

Jag soona soona lage

Jag soona soona lage

Koi rahe na jab apna

Jag soona soona lage

Jag soona soona re..

Soona laage re...


Shiva self talk :

Kia shiva ... Tu bhi kia pathar phenk raha hai pani mn ... tujhe to khud ko isi pani mn doob k mar jana chahiye ... Tu hamesha s akela tha ... Hai r rahe ga... Wo kia kehtay hn chulu bhar pani mn doob marna chahiye... Kia mu dekhaye ga tu bhagwan ko... Bhabhi ko... R...

Fb :

Shiva reaches the main door of his mention he saw a girl coming toward the mention all smiling

Shiva shocked and took his steps backward... as a weave of emotions ran into his body... he was unable to move further .. he felt someone frozed him ... he didn't know how to react.. a string of tears start falling from his eyes...

Shiva : no... No.. no...... Asa nahi ho skta asa mn honay nahi doon ga ...

Shiva start approching the girl emotionally he comes near her ... She was all smiling at him ... He turn his back toward her took out his hanky

Shiva self talk :

I m sorry...

And put the hanky on her nose and she falls unconciousn he took her in to his arms sat in car and drives off to unknown place...

Scene 2 =

Back to present

Its 2am

Dhara waiting for shiva and he still didn't arrive yet..

Gombie sleeps ... And dhara awake for shiva she was sitting beside gombie on bed in her room ...

Dhara : aj kal pata nahi kahn reh jata hai yeh larka na ise din ka pata na ise raat ka... Pahle to asa nahi tha mera shiva...

Gombie in partial sleep :

Gombie : so ja tu dhara ma... Shiva ab koi chota bacha thori na hai jo tu us ka intzar kar rahi ... Wo ab bara smjhdar larka bn gaya hai ... Para nahi tu yeh bat kab smjhe ge...

Dhara : bachay jitnay bhi bare ho jain gombie maa k liye bachay hi rehtay hn ... R shiva to mere jigar ka tkra hai ... Use kesay bhool jaon mn

Gombie side hugs her ...

Gombie : acha baba... Theek hai tu kar intzar bs mujhe sonay de aram s ....

And gombie again doses off and finally dhara also sleep beside him...

Scene 3:

Next morning :

Dhara trying to calls shiva and his number was unreachable...

At last she called aman ...

Dhara : hello aman ..

Aman : g mam ... Hw r u?

Dhara : hn mn theek hn... Aman shiva kahan hai ... Kal raat s nahi aya ghr wo...

Aman : han mam wo actually...

Dhara : actually kia ?

Aman : mam wo actually sir ..

Dhara : aman tm mujhe dara rahe ho ... Sir kia...

Aman : mam darnay ki koi bat nahi sir actually shehr s bahir gaye hn ...

Dhara : shehr s bahir gaye hn ...? Kahan gaya hai shiva ?

Aman : utti...

Dhara : utti... Wahn kia karnay gaya hai.. wahn to us k business ki koi branch bhi nahi hai.. r ase bina bata k janay ka kia matlab hai... Kitnay dinon mn wapas aye ga ..? R r us ka nmber kun band hai..

Aman : actually mam sir ko emergency basis p jana para hai ... 2 3 din lag sktay hn ... R un ka nmber shyad islye bnd hai kun k shyad wahn network ka issue hai .. mera jesay hi contact hota hai sir s mn ap ka keh doon ha ap s contact karain sir as soon as possible...

Dhara : emergency the... Asi kia bat ho gai ... acha theek hai tm use bol dena k us ki call ka mn wi8 kar rahi hn ... Rakhti hn ..

Aman : bye mam apna khayal rakhe ga..

Dhara hang up the fone...

Dhara self talk :

Mujhe shiva ki chinta ho rahi hai asi kia bat ho gai k raat ko hi jana para use... Anay do khoob khabar loon ge us ki..

Dhara : krish... Krish ..

Krish : qya bhaibhi... Han bolo..

Dhara gave him his bag...

Dhara : yeh tera bag hai nashta table p laga dia hai nashta kar r ja college ... Dair ho rahi hai..

Krish : ok bhabhi...

He took his bag do breakfast and leave for college

..

Scene 4 :

Its dark...

Aman turns and face shiva there ... He patted his cheek n smrik...

Shiva : well done ...

Aman smiles

Aman : th... tha.. thank you sir thank you ...

Precape :

shiva slaps aman hardly...

Shiva : aman how dare you ..

Shiva holds his collar...

So sorry for late ... I will try to update this story time to time now ...

Edited by aimmyangle - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Tagging you guys in my story

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