Shivi TS- trouble in paradise part 3 updated on pg 7( complete) - Page 8

this is sooooooo cute yaar.......I love it 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

Superb🥳

As always you nailed it👏

Their dialogues...the portrayal...everything😳

I cud see them b4 me

Loved it🤗

Originally posted by: PoohNotFound

Pixie, phirse dil leli tune. Lagta hain Dev-babu ko competition degi tu. But DW, I love you more🤗❤️

This was very emotional and heartwarming. I loved that ShiVi had a proper conversation. Both Shiva and Raavi's insecurity were talked out and cleared. This was the main closure I wanted from the show and you have given me exactly or even more than what I was expecting.😆

Author, you did a very excellent job.🤗😆

Thank you so much pooh for your lovely words❤️

I am honoured you love me more than dev babu.thats a big achievement 🤣

I too want them to talk on the show.ekdum dil se dil tak wala 😒

Originally posted by: virangna2005

this is sooooooo cute yaar.......I love it 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

Thank you dear ❤️

Originally posted by: Radhi12

It was amazing.

Thank you dear ❤️

Originally posted by: Paru95

Superb🥳

As always you nailed it👏

Their dialogues...the portrayal...everything😳

I cud see them b4 me

Loved it🤗

Thank you so much paru for your support ❤️

Means a lot 🤗

Thanks for the lovely update. ❤️

Pixy🤗🤗

I am so glad I waited to read this with a title like that. But if you were choubeys I would have come after you with 🔪🔪 for bringing MU in their life after 5 freaking months of torture and durdasha.

I couldn't fully enjoy mush in part one because of the anxiety of what bwss about to come. Was so nervous on how this would end too.

But all my nautanki aside, I liked Suman for once after the durdasha track. That scene was emotional. And Mami, arghh.. Glad Shiva told Durdasha a crystle clear no.

And the last part was just ❤️❤️❤️❤️. My mush heart was going dhaj dhak. Loved how Shiva went after Raavi and they had conversation. Not just confession, but full blown conversation of everything that went wrong and everything that bothers them. Including repurcussions of mute Shiva during Durdasha time. It was all beautiful ❤️. Lovely story. Can't wait for you to write more!

Ahhhhh Pixieeee 🤗

Now my heart can rest in peace knowing my two gadedhas are happy 😆

When Raavi was lashing out at him at first, I was like 'oh no, what're you saying you, quit it!' 😭

And then when Shiva let her go without explaining, I was like 'oh boy, here we go again!' 😭

Then I thought maybe Pixie's inner sadist woke up and decided to torture us 😛 But noooo, I was wrong, sowwii 🤣 You made him go after her and spill out his heart, and then they had a much-needed conversation which I absolutely loved reading!

It was cute that despite practicing in front of his mirror, our silly boi was struggling to put out his feelings 😆

His way of confessing was just so Shiva-like 😳

Absolutely loved that you inserted some actual dialogues from the show in there!!😉

And then ofc, Raavi taking charge and showing him how it's done when she jumped into his arms, fully accepting her love for him, awww man, I want to see this in the show so badly!!🥺 (especially the kisses she gave him 😭)

The whole visual played out so smoothly in my head!

You indeed served me with khushiyaan!❤️

Finally found it

Loved it 🥺❤️

This is what i wanted in the show but chaubeys🔪🙂

The dialouges, the entire conversation. It was just perfect.❤️