Shivi TS- trouble in paradise part 3 updated on pg 7( complete) - Page 6

Originally posted by: Paru95

Oh Noooo

Ye tho bohoth complicated ho gayi😭

Jaldi jaldi theek kijiye naa

Reallly LOVE your storiess❤️ they have always been amazing😳

Waiting for the next part

Thank you for your encouraging comments and support paru.inspires me to write more. ❣️

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Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Itna sad tha yeh 😭

My poor heart.

I mean yeah I don't mind him being aloof because obviously he's hiding stuff but haan..Raavi is correct in her stance too.

her reaction is just as natural!

Hope they get everything sorted out soon.

Waitingggg for the next one

I hope I fix your poor heart ritu ❣️

Her reaction is natural.silence can often be misjudged.

Originally posted by: Luvs_SanIsh

Fabulous update, hope this misunderstanding get cleared soon🥰💕

Thank you dear ❣️

Originally posted by: virangna2005

it's scaring me as if it actually happening in the show🥺🥺

this was so to the point👏 grt dear

waiting for the next.....do update soon...please🤗🤗🤗

Thank you dear ❣️

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Originally posted by: PoohNotFound

Yaar, Pixie dil le lo meri🤗❤️ How I so damn wish something like this had happened in PS. 😒 Of course, PS makers don't have your big brain.😆 This was so beautiful.❤️ Shiva and Raavi never ever had an open conversation. And I'm so glad you are going to give me that.

Waiting patiently for the next update ☺️

Thank you Pooh for your lovely comment ❣️

Updated the next part.the conversation. ❤️

Originally posted by: mpks1

Pixie, what do I say about this update! My heart goes out to both of them. They hardly talk about their relationship and there is always miscommunication between them. It is bound to happen with the way things are going between them and Raavi is feeling now what Shiva used to feel during Sneha kaand and Diary kaand😕

You promised me a positive ending, so with that hope I can’t wait to read the next update❤️

I have updated the last part premaa.a much needed conversation between shivi ❣️

Originally posted by: Kfof

Oh no!!! I loved how you have developed tge stroy and all the misunderstanding...❤❤ But my dil toots!!💔

Waiting to know what shiva will do!!

Loved it ❤❤

Thank you kshama ❣️

Hope I fix your heart with the last update 😉

Originally posted by: Odette_delusion

I was hookked up from starting to end...........

update soonish...........

🥰😍❤

Thank you dear ❣️

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I've never wanted a conversation to happen in the actual show as much as this conversation you've written in the final update!

Originally posted by: MamiKBehenKBeti

I've never wanted a conversation to happen in the actual show as much as this conversation you've written in the final update!

Thank you dear ❣️

I wanted them both to pour out their frustrations and complains.