Shivi TS- trouble in paradise part 3 updated on pg 7( complete) - Page 7

Originally posted by: Pixiepadhi

Thank you kshama ❣️

Hope I fos your heart with the last update 😉

It got fixed percectly !! 🙈❤

The way they got themself in the situation and how they come out of it was fab.❤

It was for the first time Shiva did not give up instead wanted to fight and make her stay with hime - loved that part😍❤

Their sorry, their confession - all was awesome ❤❤

Originally posted by: Kfof

It got fixed percectly !! 🙈❤

The way they got themself in the situation and how they come out of it was fab.❤

It was for the first time Shiva did not give up instead wanted to fight and make her stay with hime - loved that part😍❤

Their sorry, their confession - all was awesome ❤❤

Thank you so much kshama ❤️

Shiva never explains himself nor complains about his pain. I wanted him to pour out his heart in front of raavi.

I was a bit nervous about the dlgs and how it would come out because I wanted to think from both of their POV .i am glad you liked it ❣️

'Tujhe baho mai liye bina mujhe neend nahi aati.'

Haayyiiiii Chit ye kya kiya tune Pixieee?

Mera dil le gayi tu. Dil. Le. Gayi. Pura ka pura.

This was breathtaking. I almost thought he would take his time to recover and then do something or basically lash out at her like always but the way he handled it all was something so pure!

Maturity max.

Raavi lashing out was unexpected so out of character and it was a treat to read.

An insecure/scared Raavi, something that has never been explored is a BOMB thing I tell you.

A terrific piece. I am so overwhelmed. Them apologizing has my heart and Shiva's confession made me go all awwwwww.

Aur likhti ja tu.

Tu likhti rahe main padhti rahu bas ❤️

Originally posted by: Pixiepadhi

Updated part 3 ritu🤗

Padhke bata kaisa hai

Pata nahi kya soch ke thread khola maine aaj...maano pehle se pta tha aaj update ayega 😆

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

'Tujhe baho mai liye bina mujhe neend nahi aati.'

Haayyiiiii Chit ye kya kiya tune Pixieee?

Mera dil le gayi tu. Dil. Le. Gayi. Pura ka pura.

This was breathtaking. I almost thought he would take his time to recover and then do something or basically lash out at her like always but the way he handled it all was something so pure!

Maturity max.

Raavi lashing out was unexpected so out of character and it was a treat to read.

An insecure/scared Raavi, something that has never been explored is a BOMB thing I tell you.

A terrific piece. I am so overwhelmed. Them apologizing has my heart and Shiva's confession made me go all awwwwww.

Aur likhti ja tu.

Tu likhti rahe main padhti rahu bas ❤️

Thank you so so much Ritu ❤️

I am so glad you loved it so much 😍

When the insecurity track of shivi started I was hoping to see heartbreaking angst ending with realisations and beautiful conversations.the potential it had!

Shiva lashes out in anger but he always contemplates his action. That's the original shiva for me.deep and thoughtful.and he was too deep in love to let go.he had to make things right.

Shivi have so much to talk about.raavi as a character has so much to be explored.she is also scared and insecure.she is also a human after all.now that she is in love, it came out stronger.this is my small attempt to fulfill all my wishes through writing 😆

Read it in a go!

The misunderstanding part was so well built with shiva planning surprise for raavi

And the final conversation, is so good...they cleared every damn issuewhich we were waiting to get addressed in the show!

Loved It❤️

Originally posted by: Priyal_10

Read it in a go!

The misunderstanding part was so well built with shiva planning surprise for raavi

And the final conversation, is so good...they cleared every damn issuewhich we were waiting to get addressed in the show!

Loved It❤️

Thank you so much priyal ❤️

That is exactly what I intended to do.make them talk about all the issues that are unfortunately brushed under the rug on the show.i am glad you liked it ❣️

Pixie, loved it so much! ❤️❤️❤️

This is the first thing I read this morning (my time), can’t explain in words how happy I am to read this. You have written everything that I wanted them to ever talk about. It is time for them to communicate if they are serious about their relationship especially if they want to be together for lifetime.
This is exactly tje kind of conversation we want from them in the show but instead both are doing BhabiMa jaap😕

Originally posted by: mpks1

Pixie, loved it so much! ❤️❤️❤️

This is the first thing I read this morning (my time), can’t explain in words how happy I am to read this. You have written everything that I wanted them to ever talk about. It is time for them to communicate if they are serious about their relationship especially if they want to be together for lifetime.
This is exactly tje kind of conversation we want from them in the show but instead both are doing BhabiMa jaap😕

Thank you so much premaa ❤️

I am glad you liked it. We all want shivi to communicate and have heartfelt conversations about their issues and marriage.but kaand aur bhabijaap se unhe fursat mile, tab to apne baare mai kuch baat kare 🤔

Pixie, phirse dil leli tune. Lagta hain Dev-babu ko competition degi tu. But DW, I love you more🤗❤️

This was very emotional and heartwarming. I loved that ShiVi had a proper conversation. Both Shiva and Raavi's insecurity were talked out and cleared. This was the main closure I wanted from the show and you have given me exactly or even more than what I was expecting.😆

Author, you did a very excellent job.🤗😆