Shivi TS- trouble in paradise part 3 updated on pg 7( complete) - Page 9

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Pixie🤗!!! Loved the last part and we all got our happy ending too! Raavi did go a bit overboard initially, and i think I would've preferred her questioning him with an already biased mindset as opposed to outright accusing him, but this also felt truer to Show Raavi, you know?

Loved how Shiva realised he couldn't let her go this time, loved that she apologised, and then told him that he HAD to be more open with her, atleast until she learnt to truly understand him. Loved that she admitted to that, to not being able to understand.

They both explained themselves and admitted to their mistakes... And THEN they confessed and it was all the more beautiful just for it! ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pixiepadhi

Aloo 🤗

This story was difficult for me to write too.i tried to see both their perspective and hot this down.i have updated the last part and I am skeptical about it.do give it a read and tell me how you feel about it ❣️


you updated part 3? Off to read.. expect my comment in a minute! 😉

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Pixieee.. this was such a lovely ending! I loved how Shiva expressed all his pain in front of Raavi and pointed out where all she went wrong, Raavi's realization and apology smiley27 I really want to see this in the show (sudhar jao chaubeys smiley14)

Their reunion, confession and kiss was so nice smiley42

Finally everything is sorted in paradise smiley27

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Posted: 3 years ago
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💕🥰💕Amazingly written update 👏👏💕💕💕

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Posted: 3 years ago
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It was beautiful💕💕💕 shivi ka confession itna asani se hogaya toh voh shivi kaise honge kuch bawal hona toh banta hai🤣🤣🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago
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WOW!!!

pixie, This was amazing. ❤️

The way shiva poured his heart out was so good.

The way there world got completed was so dreamy!

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