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Posted: 3 years ago

Chapter 9


It's about us...

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"Shiva tu kya kar raha hai kitchen me, bahar aa na, dekh ye design kaise hai?"


"Aa raha hu, tere liye hot chocolate bana raha hu, tu ruk."


"Ab kya kaand kiya tune? Kuch to kiya hai jiske liye maska laga raha hai tu!"


After that fateful day, when Shiva & Raavi finally confessed to their feelings, they decided to give each other another chance. This time without holding back, without any insecurities & miscommunication. And that was probably the best decision they ever took.


Of course they were Shiva & Raavi, so they disagreed on some points, faught, took out their anger on each other but always found their way back to each other. It's been three months after that day. Raavi's project was finally on completion & it became a huge success. She asked Roshni mam that she would like to stay in Somnaath only & she helped her making contacts to start her own small clothing line startup. She started working on her brand side by side with collaboration of Shiva's factory. So they were now business partners as well. It was going too good & she sometimes thought how she got this much lucky.


"Aye chipkali, kidhar kho gai, ye le teri hot chocolate." Shiva revived her from her thought process.


"Shiva, sach bata kya kiya tune? Itna sweetly kyu behave kar raha hai subah se? Itna meetha suit nhi karta tujh pe.. Ab bol kya hua hai."


"Aye gadhedi, ek to isko pyar karo, usme bhi ye taane marti hai! Chal uth tujhe ek jagah lekar chalna hai."


"Dekha, mujhe pata tha! New invester se jhagda kar liya na tune, ab sambhalne mujhe le ja raha hai, hai na!" Raavi said, enjoying her hot chocolate.


"Tu apne akal ke ghode zyada mat dauda, aisa kuch nhi hua hai, ab chal jaldi, mene unhein bola hai hum bas aane hi waale hai." Shiva took her by hand and make her sit on the bike.


"Shiva kisko kya bola hai? Kuch to bata! Kaha ja rahe hai hum? " Raavi said as Shiva started the bike.


"Tere hone wale sasuraal."


"Kya?? Shiva tu pagal hai kya? Kya bola tune unhein?mujhe to bata deta.. Me kuch dhang ka pehan leti, he somnaath! Shiva tu bhi na! kya bola tune sabko!"


"Ab tu shaant baithegi? Gaadi chalaane de mujhe, aur mene bas yahi bola hai ki sab ghar pe rehna, kisi se milaana hai sabko. Un sabke liye bhi surprise hi hai."


"Gadheda hai tu Shiva." Raavi was getting panicked. She was not at all prepared for this. Suddenly bike stopped & she could see Pandya Niwas in front of her.


Raavi suddenly started getting flashbacks, this house has given her many bitter memories. She started remembering how Suman kaki humiliated & insulted her & blamed only her for entire divorce fiasco, how Dhara di told her she desreved whatever happened to her because she didn't accept her gift, how she made everything about her and blamed Shiva & Raavi for her suffering when in real it was them who were suffering the most. She didn't want to start this new beginning with bitterness. Finally she was entering in that house for the right reason, for her love, nothing else.


But it was intimidating and scary.


"Shiva tu sure to hai na?" Raavi whispered as they approached the front door. Everything felt a lot more real now, and even though secretly she'd been waiting for this, she was suddenly panicking. "Shayad ye sahi time nhi hai."


"Sab sahi hai," he responded immediately.


"Shayad unhe mera aana, humara saath hona pasand nhi aayega."


"Me pasand karta hu na tujhe. Pasand kya, pyaar karta hu."


"Ek baat nhi hai Shiva."


He looked at her sharply. "Kabhi na kabhi to ye din aayega hi Raavi. You are non negotiable for me."


She bit her lip, still unsure.


"Sun," he said more quietly this time, arms sliding around her waist and tugging her closer. "Me Itni raaton se jaag jaag kar is din ki planning kar raha hu, ye sab to phir bhi theek hai, Maami ke liye to mene alag se planning ki hai…" He smiled sheepishly. "Agar usne kuch chu chapar ki na, to usi din tujh se bhaag ke shadi kar lunga."


Raavi laughed, and in that moment, she believed him.


"Waise bhi koi kuch bhi kahe, koi fark nhi padta," he assured warmly, kissing her at her hairline. "Ye kisi aur ke baare me nhi hai."


Shiva entered the house. Everyone was seated after he called them. They eagerly wanted to know who Shiva wanted them to meet.


"Aye chipkali, gate pe hi khadi rahegi ya andar bhi aayegi?"


He went back to the door and clasped his hand with hers & led her inside the house.


"Ma, bhabhi," he said confidently. "Raavi... meri girlfriend, aur is ghar ki hone wali bahu."


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The end :) Thank you so much for reading this, all. It honestly makes me so glad that you enjoyed this story. Hopefully you liked the ending.


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Posted: 3 years ago

Loved it Darshi ❤️

Their journey was very well written from their awkwardness of meeting after 2 years to being happy together as life partners and business partners .

Do write more 😳

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Posted: 3 years ago

I loved the whole story.........,..

Would love to read your more work😘🥰😍

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: VaishnaviG

Loved it Darshi ❤️

Their journey was very well written from their awkwardness of meeting after 2 years to being happy together as life partners and business partners .

Do write more 😳


Thank you so much❤

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Odette_delusion

I loved the whole story.........,..

Would love to read your more work😘🥰😍


Thanks a lot ❤

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Posted: 3 years ago

Darshi! Such a phastam phast update! I really loved how Shiva assured her that she was the most important thing to him. He wouldn't care about his family disagreeing, and neither would he let his hatred for her Maasi come in between them. I think that this is what Raavi really needed to hear on the show too after the Disha track. But we have them aankhon main communicating instead, and they don't seem to have reached this point yet. 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Darshi! Such a phastam phast update! I really loved how Shiva assured her that she was the most important thing to him. He wouldn't care about his family disagreeing, and neither would he let his hatred for her Maasi come in between them. I think that this is what Raavi really needed to hear on the show too after the Disha track. But we have them aankhon main communicating instead, and they don't seem to have reached this point yet. 😆


Hahaha thank you so much❤.. That's why I didn't show any of the family's reaction, bcz that's the point, it doesn't matter. I don't know what's going in the show. Just wanted to finish this story to give closure to my shivi ❤

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