Take my breath away: ShiVi FF - Page 15

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

This one

https://www.indiaforums.com/fanfiction/842

Is it complete??

I will check it out

Originally posted by: evilxbalaa

Is it complete??

I will check it out

Nope still ongoing!

Thank you! But no pressure 😅

What would you guys like to read next?

Shiva getting caught out on his lies, or Raavi getting a dose of torture from Shiva? 😳 😆

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Oh she was! She very much was! ☺️

But I think Raavi’s torture stems more from emotional longing than sexual longing. They’re both halfway there. All it needs is a little push! 😆

give it den.......

🤣

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

What would you guys like to read next?

Shiva getting caught out on his lies, or Raavi getting a dose of torture from Shiva? 😳 😆

Raavi getting tortured 😉

Originally posted by: Foxii

Raavi getting tortured 😉

raavi tortured definitely

Arrrrghhh, I wrote a long comment and it got deleted due to some server issue I can’t believe I missed this update! It’s amazing! And hilarious! The whole scene from meeting the Parsi lady to Shiva describing everything was just crazy and funny 🤣 The Chipkali and Gadheda lines were just 👏 They made me burst out laughing, especially in your description of a classic Tulsi Mihir from Kyunki Saas Bhi reunion kinda scene 🤣🤣

And Raavi making sex noises ☺️ Oh my, that was hot and suggestive! No wonder Shiva had a tent in his pants 🤣 I bet he didn’t sleep that night at all 😆

You did such an awesome and funny twist to the classic “sharing the bed” sequence. I loved it loved it loved it! ❤️

Second one! I want to see Shiva torturing Raavi with some *ahem* stuff

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

What would you guys like to read next?

Shiva getting caught out on his lies, or Raavi getting a dose of torture from Shiva? 😳 😆

Originally posted by: gurl-enchanted

Arrrrghhh, I wrote a long comment and it got deleted due to some server issue I can’t believe I missed this update! It’s amazing! And hilarious! The whole scene from meeting the Parsi lady to Shiva describing everything was just crazy and funny 🤣 The Chipkali and Gadheda lines were just 👏 They made me burst out laughing, especially in your description of a classic Tulsi Mihir from Kyunki Saas Bhi reunion kinda scene 🤣🤣

And Raavi making sex noises ☺️ Oh my, that was hot and suggestive! No wonder Shiva had a tent in his pants 🤣 I bet he didn’t sleep that night at all 😆

You did such an awesome and funny twist to the classic “sharing the bed” sequence. I loved it loved it loved it! ❤️

Aww thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed this one! And I'm so bummed your comment got deleted!

I tried to include every cheesy Hindi movie trope in Shiva's nonsensical story- the only one I couldn't squeeze into it was the 'mele mein bichde' trope! 😆

Oh yeah, Shiva wasn't getting any that night (sleep, that is! 😉🤣)

Do continue...

So amazing👍