Take my breath away: ShiVi FF - Page 17

Hayeeee☺️ Raavis gutter thoughts

I wish this was longer

Kuch hua hi nahi yahan to🤣

Pausing my reading mid way to insert this expression which I remembered after reading the lines where Raavi calculates. 🤣🤪

DAAAYUUUMM GURRRL!

This was exhilarating.

What lovely flow...Imma SO LIKING THE CHEMISTRY here.

Plusssss she already have hots for him and not Dev.

Total win win.

Also eargasm? eargasm.

Originally posted by: Miss.M

Riya.. You are mind blowing!! I've just read both updates and they were amazing!! I loved loved loved them!! I hope you keep going with this because now I want to know more... It's getting me curious; do they kiss? Does she match either or both hist lists? (i think both) how do they end up? Brilliant!! ❤️❤️

OMG! Thank you so so much! You are very kind, but I'm sure I have a long way to go in terms of my writing! 😳

Does she match one or more of his lists? Hmm, what do you think?? 😉

Btw, what do I call you?

Thanks again for your words of appreciation. They mean the world! ❤️

Originally posted by: IshqKaRang

Go Raavi! Go!! Go Raavi! Go!! Get that devil and show him two can tango!

This is going to sound awful but I almost want this entire series to be them torturing each other. Over and over again till all hell breaks loose!! And that.. that would be a sight to behold (Errr.. words to read?)

loving loving loving this series. It has a touch of everything rom-comy yet it’s so edgy. Please keep this one going! Pretty please? *insert puppy dog eyes and pleading look*

We've found one cheerleader for Raavi's tharkiness! 😆

Torturing each other is my forte - I like writing about the almost moments and the build-up more than the actual moments. So I guess you'll be seeing (er, reading) more about creative ways of torture in this series! 😆

I'm so glad you're loving this. Rom-comy and edgy! Hmm, I've never heard my work described like this before! 😆

And I'd love to write more ShiVi if people here wanna read! 😳 (Psst, letting you on a secret - puppies are my weakness. You have to know I'm a terribly indulgent doggie mama! 😆)

Thanks again for reading and your enthusiasm! 🤗❤️

Originally posted by: Kfof

Riya, dont stop it here!!!😆

Please do continue it, I really want to know what will happen - will they kiss, proceed further or wont!!!

This update was awesome☺️

What happens next? Hmmm, since these are all one-shots you may never find out! 😆

Thanks for the comment, I'm glad you enjoyed this!

Btw, are people finding the English dialogues weird? I'm sorry, I try to translate into Hindi but I find they just don't have the same impact. Or I don't find the right words.😕

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

What happens next? Hmmm, since these are all one-shots you may never find out! 😆

Thanks for the comment, I'm glad you enjoyed this!

Btw, are people finding the English dialogues weird? I'm sorry, I try to translate into Hindi but I find they just don't have the same impact. Or I don't find the right words.😕

They are perfect in English❤️

Originally posted by: mpks1

This time it was Raavi's turn to get tortured🤣 looks like they are taking turns. Shiva indeed has an effect on her and I hope she is not one of the girls that he has a fling with but actually her soulmate. They can torture each other as much as they want but it should never be a fling.

I can't wait to read what Raavi is planning next😆

They are (and will be) taking turns indeed! 😆

Right now, I think Raavi's mental state is such that she'd be willing to accept a fling as well from Shiva. But there's more to Shiva than meets the eye, than meets the stories he tells about himself. One would almost think he's trying to push Raavi away 😉. Perhaps he's afraid of what she might do to him- very, very afraid! 😆

Thank you for reading! ❤️

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Oh my goodness!!! This just keeps getting better and better!!! I think Shiva's soul mate list is going to have a very specific description of Raavi though... He seems to be very aware of his feelings, unlike her... Hoping to read more soon!!! ❤️

PS What may I call you?

AHHHHH! THANK YOU! I find myself getting nervous each time I post, so the fact that you think it's getting better is certainly a relief!

Shiva's soulmate list (if he indeed has one) might very well include a description of Raavi. He just doesn't know it yet. Right now, all Shiva is aware of is how appealing he's finding being with Raavi (in all possible ways 😆). He's afraid of digging deeper than that right now. And Raavi is just getting in touch with her baser urges 😆which is probably very new and frightening for her too! 😳

You can call me Liz or Lizzie or Riya! Thank you for reading! ❤️

Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

Another fiery hot update ☺️

Shiva took his sweet revenge on Raavi after being tortured 😈

I loved this one!! And I would love to know more about his wish lists ❤️

Thank you, I'm so glad you loved this! 😳

More about his wish lists- Hmm, I don't know if they'll have the opportunity to delve into that more but it will be mentioned again for sure, I think! 😆