Take my breath away: ShiVi FF - Page 14

Originally posted by: Yooooo

Thanks for taggingg....otherwise I would have missed such a beautiful story...suchh a lovely one shot...it was just Aweeeeeesomme🥰

You’re welcome and do watch this thread. I’ll be updating anything I write here.

Thank you for reading and the lovely comment! ❤️

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Tabahi?? 😒
Thank you though!! 😳❤️

I mean freaking amazing ❤️

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

OMG!! Loved it!! This series is right up my alley! Haha the inneuendos were just 😂. Not much action but full of innuendoes. The ride was one hell of a ride and the fabricated sorry was 😂😂😂. Lol Champak Khadanahihota😂😂. Raavi got her perfect revenge for the way he bothered her by teaching her how to ride😂😂

You needed more action? 😆

Champak was my moment of triumph! That and Lapetganj! 😆

Yep Raavi got her revenge! Now will Shiva plot his? Watch this space! 😆

Thank you so much for reading and your comment! ❤️🤗

Originally posted by: Luvs_SanIsh

🤣🤣OMG👏👏…2nd part is hilarious🤣

Shiva story🤣🤣 and Raavi’s noise making skills🔥🔥🔥🥰

Can’t wait for your next update

Awww thank you so much yaar!! 🤗

So glad you enjoyed this!! ❤️

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Wow! This is high praise indeed! Thank you! I’m humbled! ❤️

When I started writing this one I felt it wasn’t as funny as the previous one. So I’m glad you felt this was better!

You know I’ve been writing my original story for over a year now and I have like 3 readers! 😆

So having you all read and comment here is a true validation for my writing skills! ❤️

Thank you again from the bottom of my heart! 🤗

Which original story??

I love to though the opportunities are rare🥺

But really can't afford it when my mom is sitting next to me, otherwise she thinks I've lost the remaining amount of sanity I had😬

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

You needed more action? 😆

Champak was my moment of triumph! That and Lapetganj! 😆

Yep Raavi got her revenge! Now will Shiva plot his? Watch this space! 😆

Thank you so much for reading and your comment! ❤️🤗

Noo, I meant it was perfect. I'm not much into reading smut, but I love these inuendoes. I meant it as I loved it as it didn't have much action.

Cant wait!

Originally posted by: evilxbalaa

Which original story??

This one

https://www.indiaforums.com/fanfiction/842

Originally posted by: RainbowChaser

I love to though the opportunities are rare🥺

But really can't afford it when my mom is sitting next to me, otherwise she thinks I've lost the remaining amount of sanity I had😬

Aww that’s sad 🥺!

This is a problem that we as a society are conditioned to grow up with. Hide our emotions- whether it be excessive sadness or excessive happiness. Not doing so is considered an aberration, which is so so sad! As humans, we are supposed to express emotions no? That’s the whole point of being human!

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

Noo, I meant it was perfect. I'm not much into reading smut, but I love these inuendoes. I meant it as I loved it as it didn't have much action.

Cant wait!

Then that’s great because I don’t write out and out smut. My romances are dosed with a heavy amount of sexual tension but I like leaving my readers with a certain amount of anticipation!