Moments that break (PART- III pg 11) - Page 8

Originally posted by: VaishnaviG

Loved it ❤️

This is what we want ....

Raavi emotional outbrust is pending... For long..

I have raised the same pt if the DIL of Suman had their parents she wouldn't hav dare to do the shits to her DIL..

Shiva character is gone downfall ... Here in ur story is superb...

Nice story...

Originally posted by: freebird_dd

This is what we want ....

Raavi emotional outbrust is pending... For long..

I have raised the same pt if the DIL of Suman had their parents she wouldn't hav dare to do the shits to her DIL..

Shiva character is gone downfall ... Here in ur story is superb...

Nice story...

Originally posted by: Kfof

Loved it alot❤❤❤

That second part 🤧🥺I cried it was soo emotional, soo heartbreaking 😭😭😭

Nd finally the 3rd😍😍😍 😘😘😘

The way he points out EVeryTHing 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻

Originally posted by: sapphir

That second part 🤧🥺I cried it was soo emotional, soo heartbreaking 😭😭😭

Nd finally the 3rd😍😍😍 😘😘😘

The way he points out EVeryTHing 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻

Very nice chapter..glad to see Raavi's breakdown, Shiva staking a stand for her and Anita's reality coming out too ❤️

Beautiful ending❤️

This is what I wanted to see on the show. Shiva's firm stand and support for Raavi. Loved this Shiva so much!! His dialogues were too good❤️

Thanks for writing this story❤️

Originally posted by: ItsmePriya

Beautiful ending❤️

This is what I wanted to see on the show. Shiva's firm stand and support for Raavi. Loved this Shiva so much!! His dialogues were too good❤️

Thanks for writing this story❤️

Hayee! This whole piece is so pyara❤️

You have penned it down so beautifully from Raavi's emotional outburst to her yearning for love and acceptance and fear of trusting Shiva again, from Shiva's apology to his way of standing up for Raavi.

I have to say this I loved the way you write emotional parts one can feel for the character while reading it. I had tears in my eyes while reading Raavi's complaints to her parents.

Loved it 😍❤️

Keep writing more girl🤗

(P.S. -Sorry I don't know your name hence used 'girl' hope you won't mind.)