Moments that break (PART- III pg 11)

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Odette_delusion

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Posted: 4 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: VaishnaviG
Loved it ❤️

thanks you it means a lot🥰😍

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freebird_dd

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Posted: 4 years ago

#72

This is what we want ....

Raavi emotional outbrust is pending... For long..

I have raised the same pt if the DIL of Suman had their parents she wouldn't hav dare to do the shits to her DIL..

Shiva character is gone downfall ... Here in ur story is superb...

Nice story...

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Odette_delusion

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Posted: 4 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: freebird_dd
This is what we want ....
Raavi emotional outbrust is pending... For long..
I have raised the same pt if the DIL of Suman had their parents she wouldn't hav dare to do the shits to her DIL..

Shiva character is gone downfall ... Here in ur story is superb...

Nice story...

thanks for connecting with me..... 🥰😍

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Odette_delusion

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Posted: 4 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: Kfof
Loved it alot❤❤❤

Thank you..... 🥰😍

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sapphir

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Posted: 4 years ago

#75

That second part 🤧🥺I cried it was soo emotional, soo heartbreaking 😭😭😭

Nd finally the 3rd😍😍😍 😘😘😘

The way he points out EVeryTHing 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻

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Odette_delusion

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Posted: 4 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: sapphir
That second part 🤧🥺I cried it was soo emotional, soo heartbreaking 😭😭😭
Nd finally the 3rd😍😍😍 😘😘😘
The way he points out EVeryTHing 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻

Thanks for all your appreciation it means a lot🥰😍

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GrilledCheese

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Posted: 4 years ago

#77

Very nice chapter..glad to see Raavi's breakdown, Shiva staking a stand for her and Anita's reality coming out too ❤️

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ItsmePriya

@ItsmePriya

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Posted: 4 years ago

#78

Beautiful ending❤️

This is what I wanted to see on the show. Shiva's firm stand and support for Raavi. Loved this Shiva so much!! His dialogues were too good❤️

Thanks for writing this story❤️

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Odette_delusion

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Posted: 4 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: ItsmePriya
Beautiful ending❤️
This is what I wanted to see on the show. Shiva's firm stand and support for Raavi. Loved this Shiva so much!! His dialogues were too good❤️
Thanks for writing this story❤️

thanks ❤it means a lot🥰😍

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Nishtha

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Posted: 3 years ago

#80

Hayee! This whole piece is so pyara❤️

You have penned it down so beautifully from Raavi's emotional outburst to her yearning for love and acceptance and fear of trusting Shiva again, from Shiva's apology to his way of standing up for Raavi.

I have to say this I loved the way you write emotional parts one can feel for the character while reading it. I had tears in my eyes while reading Raavi's complaints to her parents.

Loved it 😍❤️

Keep writing more girl🤗

(P.S. -Sorry I don't know your name hence used 'girl' hope you won't mind.)