Moments that break (PART- III pg 11) - Page 7

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Love, This was heartbreaking yet beautiful❤️ And yes, i want another part🤗

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This was one hell of a rollercoaster

Broke my heart but fixed it towards the end ❤️‍🔥

Originally posted by: hapakalanoodles

AmaZingg ❤️❤️
This was one hell of a rollercoaster

Broke my heart but fixed it towards the end ❤️‍🔥

I hardly ever get emotional while reading any story but this one brought tears to my eyes ❤️

You are amazing ✨

Please continue soon

Originally posted by: StarLord_Owen

I hardly ever get emotional while reading any story but this one brought tears to my eyes ❤️

You are amazing ✨

Please continue soon

Beautiful..it was emotional too.. but awesome. Please update next part soon.

Originally posted by: sandrasheron

Beautiful..it was emotional too.. but awesome. Please update next part soon.

Love Love Love it!

Truly emotional story.

Keep writing more.

PART-III

The morning rays made their way towards the sleeping figures still were each others embrace. Shiva's eyes felt uneasy due to the rays he opened his eyes to see the most serene sight he had ever seen Raavi was slept in his embrace like a little child. He was admiring her when her eyes opened her head was heavy due to all the exhaustion of last night. She looked straight and found herself in Shiva's arms clinging to him and she remebered all what happened last night they had deep eye lock Raavi was the one to break it and said while moving out of his arms hesitantly,

"Sorry woh kal pata nahi chala kab so gayi........... Tu thak gya ho ga na ................tym bbhi kitna ho gya hai.............."

Raavi kept blabbering Shiva knew she was consious after all the happenings and there position and to be precise she tried to escape from their to avoid a conservation. He replied while pushing her into same position,

"Raavi tujhe awkward hone ki jaroorat nahi hai kal raat jo kuch bhi huya vo bilkul sahi huya aur ikk aur baat tyaar ho ja ajj puja ke liye bhut sari tyaariyan bhi krni hai"

Raavi looked at Shiva with teary eyes,

"Shiva Kaki ne mana kiya hai mujhe aane ke liye......... Main kaise"

Shiva replied firmly and then caressed her cheeks with his thumb he just want to make her feel loved, loved by him to no ends and all the hesitation should not be their in between them like it was before.

"Maine kaha na Raavi ajj tu aayegi, aur yeh sab sochna band kar theek hai.........aur.........I lovee youu...."

Hearing his last words Raavi gave him a little smile but her eyes were full of hopes yet a tinch of reluctance visible as she wanted to reply his I love you but she do not want to let her feelings out yet again to be expoloited. Before she could say anything they Suddenly heard someone clearing the throat,

"Vese, main yaha Raavi bhabhi ko bulane aaya tha puja ki tyariyon ke liye par mujhe lagta hain ki tym lag jayega chalo koii baat nahi........ . .. "

Krish said to ehich rishita added teasingly,

"Haa agar tumhe tym please kehna hai toh koii problem nahi hai, hum manage krr lenge.....kioo krish.. . .. "

They both woke up instantly Shiva stood holding her hand Raavi tried to free her hand and said,

"Nahi aisi koii baat nahi hai main aati hoon na"

Saying this she left hastily. Krish went after her and Rishita spoke to shiva,

"Shiva, kaisi hai vo abb kal toh bhut upset thi."

"Bhabhi vi bhi mujhse bhut oyaar karti hai par darr gayi hai kii fir fit na toot jaye mujhe uska vishwas jeetna hai aur aisa kuch krna hai ki wo fir se vaisi hi ban jaye jaisi thi"

shiva replied to which rishita said

"Shiva, hope sab theek ho jaye, best of luck meri help ki jaroorat ho toh bata dena"

.

"Vese kal raat neend bhut achi aayi hogi na...... "

She added non chantly and left humming a song

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PUJA PREPARATION

Rishita ,krish and Raavi were decorating everything Raavi looked cheered up than before she loved doing all such decorating stuff and now she knew Shiva loved her gave her another light.

"Krish Raavi ho gya sara kaam ab chale tyaar bhi hona hai"

Rishita said

"Ha bhabhi ho gya"

Krish replied and raavi added

"Ha main ikk baari dhara dii aur maa ko dekh kar aati hoon"

She went to dhara and gave her fruits to eat then she entered Suman's room and her medicines

"Ae markundi gay mujhe mere kapde de ajj shaam ke liye"

She gave her cnahi and help her wear them.

"Ajj toh main Shiva aur Disha ko sath mein puja krne ko kahungi Shiva toh vese bhi meri baat nahi talega dekhna tu.. . . .. . .. . . Kitne pyaare lage ge dono..........aur tu kal ki tarah gadbad mat krna bichari Disha ke kapde kharab krr diye the.............aur puja se dur hi rehna ".

Raavi stood their dumbfounded unable to process anything so she left the room and straightaway went to kitchen.

She was in deep thoughts and thinking about rather to go or not in puja as she knew Shiva cannot deny his mother's words and if he will do puja with someone else she can't bear that also but then shiva came and encircled his arms around her hugging her from back Raavi breathe hitched but the comfort his warmth provide her was unbeatable so she just leaned and Shiva said,

" Tu tyaar nahi huyi abhi takk. "

"Shivaa.. . .. Kaki ....Ne.....disha...." Raavi replied

" Raavi ikk baar bharosa kar aur meri baat maan le ajj puja mein tera hona bhut jaroori hai "

"Shiva meri wajah se phir puja kharab ho jayengi.. . .. . .. . . Please rehne de"

Shiva replied Possesively and his tone was firm he do not want her to feel low.

"Raavi teri wajah se kuch nahi huya aur khabardaar agar tune aisa socha toh ajj tu aayegi baki mujh par chod de ...... "

Raavi just noded her head in yes and Shiva murmurred in her ear,

"I love you............"

Shiva knew she won't reply as he have to earn this so he just went out and meanwhile Raavi got ready for the puja.

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DURING PUJA,

Everyone arrived in the hall all neighborhood, family and disha also. Raavi was looking breathtaking. She stood with Rishita and Dhara.

"Dhara, gaumbi sab aa jayo puja krte hai"

Suman said everyone walked towards her Rishita dragged Raavi along but were stopped midway,

"Ae patraani tujhe puja krni hai na toh chup chap aa ke yaha khadi ho ja aur tu markundi gay tu kya agge aa rahi hai maine kaha tha na puja se dur rehna, aur vese bhu teri jaroorat nahi hai yaha Disha hai na Shiva ke saath puja krengi.. . .. . .. . .. . .. . . Kal ki tarah sab kharab mat kar dena"

Raavi knew something would happen she was prepared she didn't protested and was about to turn when she felt Shiva entwined her hand with his. She was dumbfounded as everyone was present. She looked at Raavi and assured her with his eyes. Shiva bring her infront of goddess sculpture still hands intwined shocking everyone Krish and Rishita hooted. Shiva said,

"Mere saath puja krne ka adhikaar Raavi ka hai Dhara bhabhi puja ki thali dijiye"

Dhara gave thali happily suman looked amused. They both performed Puja Raavi had tears when she looked at Shiva as she never expected that Shiva will go against his family for her sake Shiva looked at Raavi and drank in the sight she was looking pretty but at the top she looked painted in his love and now blossoming trust was also visible in her doe eyes. And he whispered

"Teri ankhon mein ansu nahi hone hone chahiye Raavi.. . .. . .. . . Aur aise mat dekh mujhse control nahi hoga puja chod kar tujhse lipat jaunga"

Raavi averted her gaze and blushed heavily as the mere thought give her jolts. Puja was done they both headed towards maa for blessings.

"Maa, ashirwaad nahi degi"

Shiva said suman averted her eyes elsewhere. And said

"MUjhse kya puch raha hai tu apni maa ki ijjat ko toh uchal diya iss ke sath puja krke aur ab ashirwaad chahiye tujhe. "

"Maa, maine aisa kya kiya jo tu aise bol rahi hai apni biwi ke sath puja ki hai "shiva replied

"Ha vohi biwi jis se talak ho rha hai"suman said

"Ho raha tha maa ho nahi raha hai yeh dekh"

Saying this Shiva showed some papers Gaumbi started reading and was delighted and announced happily,

"Maa shiva ne talak ki arzi wapas le li hai abb yeh dona ka rishta nahi totega"

Suman looked at his son as he betrayed her and said,

"Mujhe aisi ladki ki koi jaroorat nahi hai apne ghar mein. Tu iss ladki ke liye apni maa ki baat talega .................isne tujhe apne app ko nicha sochne ke liye majboor kiya tujhe thappad mara..... ............ Ae kagdi ki beti kya jadu kiya mere bete par tune"

Shiva sat on his knees and said

"Maa, usne mujhe nicha kabhi nahi dikhaya aur na hi vo aisa kabhi krengi hua tha kuch jisse mujhe aisa lgga par abb mujhe asliyat ka pta hai aur rahi baat usbe mujhe thapad mara tha toh maa kya maine usse kuch nahi bola tha maine toh uske charitr par swaal uthaya kya yeh sahi tha sab ke samne uska tamasha banya uske badle usne mujhe sirf ikk thappad mara mujhe toh isse bhi buri saza milni chahiye thi"

Suman added furiously and pointed at Raavi and said

"Yeh kya rishto ki ahmiyat samjhegi dekha nahi kaise apni bhen par iljam lagaya.. . .. . .. . .. Areee anath hai yeh yeh rishte kya nibhaegi.. . .. . .. . .. Yeh disha bhut achi ladki hai tere sath bhut jachegi Shiva"

This made Shiva furious he stood up and looked at Raavi who was having moistened eyes but was not letting out a tear and she lowered her head, shiva came near her and encircled his arm around her shoulder and said proudly,

"Maa yeh rishte nahi samjhegi.. . .. . .. . Yeh tu bol rahi hai tere samne mere itna kuch bolne ke bawajood, divorce tkk baat aane ke bawajood yeh ladki wapas aayi taki bhabhi kii madad krr sake unhe aaram de sake.. . .. . .. Tere taane sunke ke baad bhi isne kya teri sewa nahi kii.. . .. . Tujhe bhi pura maan diya.. . .. . .. . . Tujhe aisi ladki ki jaroorat nahi yehi ladki subah se lekar shaam tkk ghar sambhalti hai.. . .. . . Hamari sabki jarooraton ka khayaal rakhti hai aur hume iski jaroorat nahi hai?. . .. . .. . .. . Maa agar yeh ladki rishto ki ahmiyat nahi janti toh hum mein se koii bhi nahi janta.. . .. . .. . Koii bhiii nhii............iski itni bezzati ki humne kal sabke samne kya kya nahi bola par isne ikk baar bhi mudkar jwaab nahi diya kyon kii isse rishto ka maan hai...............isska dil saaf hai maa"

Raavi looked at Shiva and a lone tear drip out of her eyes Suman felt guilty and now Shiva again sat in knees and said

"Maa......... Raavi ne hamari jimmedari thi hum use ghar par biah ke laye the uski khushi ka dhyaan toh humne pehle din se nahi rakha phir bhi vo ladki koshish krti rahi......... Abb bhi kahengi jo tune pehle kaha abhi bhi.........maa tune kaha na yeh anath hai toh isse rishton ki kadar nahi hai agar maa iske maa baap hote toh kya hum isse aise baat krte iss ke sath yeh sab karte, aur agar karte toh kya vo hum se sawal nahi krte ki humne unki beti ko kaise rakha hai.............. Kio ma puchte na vo....... Kio krr rahi hai aisa kio use baar baar ehsaas dilate hai hum ki vo akeli hai usne hum sab ko apna liya par humne use nahi apnaya nahi samjha"

Suman looked at Raavi and and called her she came and saton her level next to Shiva , suman placed her head on her lap and they both cried endlessly they stayed their for few moments .Raavi craved for a motherly vibe which can provide her solace and this was happening and suman said lifting her face up

"Mujhe maaf krde Raavi maine kabhi khayal nahi kiya tera tujhe toh phoolon ki tarah rakhna chahiyetha aur maine kya kiya tujhe toh mujhse naraz hona chahiye tha par tune ikk awaz takk nahi uthayi maaf krde"

"Kaki app aise mat boliye please..... "

Raavi said and Suman wiped her years from her dupatta as she did for Shiva and all her kids and now fir Raavi she could not hold more and cried again like a baby and suman added,

"Teri maasoomiyat ka fayda uthaya maine "

Shiva hugged both the ladies and then they both took her blessings and went yo Gaumbi and Dhara and Shiva said,

"Bhabhi apko nahi lgta kii kal ikk aur cheez hui thi jiske bare mein hine baat krni chahiye"

"Konsi Shiva? "Dhara asked

"Bhabhi anita ke bare mein app jante ho na Raavi kisi par bhi aise hi iljaam nahi lagegi kuch toh hua hoga na hum mein se kisi ne uski baat nahi suni aur uss par gussa kiya kya kya nahi bola kal Raavi ne jo bhi kaha tha anita ke bare mein ikk ikk baat sach thi iss ka gawah hai mere paas Ae mami....... "

Shiva said this and called prafulla and then prafulla narreatef everythong about anita's obsession for gaumbi everyone got shocked and dhara went and hugged Raavi and said,

"Mujhe maaf karde Raavi maine tujhe itna kuch boldiya maafi tak magne mo kaha bina tujhse baat kre mujhe maaf krde"

Gaumbi caressed her head and said

"Tu toh meri pyaari c bhen hai kal jo hua aur jo bhi hota aaya hai main yeh jaroor kahinga tune mujhe dil se bhai mana aur sab kiya par maine tujhe vo manyata nahi, mujhe maaf krde"

Gaura pulled Raavi in hug and shed tears. Rishita dev Shiva and krish joined them. Prafulla came near Raavi and was about to fold her hands when Raavi stoppes her and nodded her head in no and hugged her and said

"Massi aisa mat kro please.. . .. . "

Shiva was standing and looking at them when Raavi broke her hug and came running to Shiva and hugged him and Shiva reciprocated she just chanted one thing like prayer,

"I love you shivaa.. . .. I love you.. . . "

Shiva was beyond happy for getting her trust back and he knew this was their first step they have to go a milestone toegether.

Raavi got her khushiyaan and her fear was overcomed by shiva's gesture he truly made her feel loved.

"Vese toh puja ho gayi hai agar tum logon ko room mein jaana hai toh jaa sakte ho hum mind nahi krenge."

Rishita and Krish added notoriously

And Shivi seperate and giggles felt all around in Pandya Niwas. Raavi and Shiva both looked at the stars in the sky and then at each other making thousands of promises and looking forward to their life.

THE END.. . .. .

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Originally posted by: Radhi12

Great one.