Hey guys i am back again with a Story after watching the Sbs segment. I am fond of Raavi's character personally but the way the makers are representing her i don't like that and i think she deserves better.
So just wanted to write an OS on the same to represent Raavi's feelings in a serious manner rather than making fun of her in front of everyone like the makers are doing error as shown in sbs segment.
Please ignore the grammatical error. And bear me with that.
All your suggestions are welcomed here.
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Scene: Raavi is pouring her heart out while Rishita and Shiva are overhearing her.
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Raavi was hell exhausted cause of all days event. She was finished with cleaning the kitchen counter and wind up all the work. She was disturbed to no end so she went to terrace to take some fresh air. She looked towards the nightsky and saw two stars together. From the beginning whenever she felt lonely and sad it was her habit to talk to her parents as she believe in souls becoming stars. She was staring at the this scene was witnessed by Rishita and Shiva.
"Aapko pata hai ajj kya hua"
She said to the stars confusing Rishita and Shiva.
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FLASHBACK
Anita said "Raavi ko shakk hai kii main gautam par doore dalti hoon."
Shocking everyone to which Raavi replied
"Anita dii maine aapko range hath pakda tha aur maine aap par koii iljaam nahi lggya maine apko warn kiya tha massimaa apko bhi pata hai na maine aisa kyon kaha "
Raavi looked expectantly at prafulla, Prafulla looked at anita and than replied reluctantly
"Raavi yeh tu kya bol rahi hai anita teri badi bhen hai tu uske bare mein aisa kaise soch sakti hai"
Raavi looked at both anita and prafulla in disbelief but before she could react Suman said,
"Ae tujhe itni bhi sharam nahi aayi apni bhen par naam lgate huye isse pata lgta hain ki tune sirf isse naam ki bhen mana hai na kii asal mein"
This broke Raavi more and she said,
"Par Kaki main jhooth na........ "
Raavi was cut mid sentence by dhara
"Bas kar Raavi anita ne meri jaan bachayi hamari itni madad kii aur tu hai kii mujhe tujhse yeh expected nahi tha'
"Dhara dii aap logg samajh kyon nhii rahe ho" Raavi said
"Ae bass kar mujhe aur kuch nahi sunna tune toh mere ghar ke sabhi tyoharon ko kharab krne ka theka le rakha hai har baar koii na koii kaand krti rehti hai acha hua tu chale jaengi jo dusri ladki aayengi na aake na ghar mein khushiyaan degi sabko tere jaise nahi kii hogi usse rushto kii kadar hogi tujhe toh ehsaan manana chahiye enhone tujh anaath ko pala aur tu in par hi bhale hi prafulla achi nahi hai par isne tujhe aur anita ko pala hai abb mujhe aur kuch nahi sunana"
Suman said coldly and Raavi was taken back by every word. She heard the whispers in the crowd,
"Apna khoon toh apna hi hota hai"
"Dekha kaise iljaam laga rahi hai "
"Anath hai rishton ki kadar kaise hogi'
Dhara came in front of Raavi and said
"Raavi anita ko sorry bol"
Eaavi looked down unable to meet her eyes to anyone she simply went to Anita with lowered head and said
"Sorry diiii..... "
Her voice was choking and she went back Pradulla was sad at this as she loved Raavi but she had to do this cause of Anita.
"Chalo abb sab puja krte hai aur tu kagdi ki beti aur koii tamasha nahi"
Suman said and Raavi nodded and left for kitchen.
FLASHBACK ENDS........
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PRESENT TIME
"Kisi ko mujh par yakeen nahi hai par maine jhooth nahi bola maine dekha tha anita dii ko dekha tha gaumbi ki photo ko kiss karte huye"
Raavi said looking at the sky with soft sobs coming out.
"Mumma papa ajj pehli baar mujhe lag raha hai kaash aap hote apko pata hai massi ma ne bhi mera saath nahi diya unko sab pata tha phir bhi unhone mera tamasha bana ke eakh diya sabke samne"
She said and Rishita Shiva went numb listening all this she looked like a broken kid complaining. she wept her tears and started giving giggles filled with sorrow
"Tamasha hi toh hu main jisse dekho mujhe bol kar chala jata hai koii puchta hi nahi kii maine aisa kyon kaha kyon kiaa mumma papa agar ajj app hote na toh log mujhe utna kuch nahi sunate par mujhe jutna akela mehsoos ho raha hai na utna kabhi nahi huya koii na koi mere saath hota tha parr ajj nahi sab log mujhe galat samajh rahe hai Dhara dii bhi maine aisa kya kiya hai jo mujhe sazza mil rahi hai"
She sat down and curled her knees upto her chest still looking towards the stars
"Sab log mujhe anath bolte hai kehte hai kii mujhe rushto kii kadar nahi hai, apko bhi yehi lgta hai kya? Kii main aisi hu"
"Main aisi nahi hu, mujhe sab ne aisa bana diya mujhe sab ne aisa bana diya"
She said with uncontrollable tears in her eyes. She then laughed dishearteningly
"Aap log bhi has rahe ho ge na mujh par mujhe pata hai sab log has rahe hai apne bhi mujhe chod diya na issi liye kio kii kisi ko bhi aisi ladki nahi chahiye jo unki khushiyaan tabah krr de suman kaki ne mujhe kaha main paida huyi aur apki khushiyaan khatam krrdi, main hoon hi aisi"
"Sirf yeh hi nahi ajj na ikk aur cheez bhi huyi main jab bhi apne tutte dil ko ikatha krti hu kuch na kuch ho hi jata hai kii sab phir se bhikhar jata hai..... Pata hai kya hua"
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FLASHBACK STARTS
Raavi went to kitchen after anita drama she didn't want to attend as she felt her presence will ruin everything than rishita came,
"Raavi tumhe puja mein nahi aana"
"Rishita tum jao main yehi thik hu sab kharab ho jayenga"
Raavi replied
"Raavi mujhe pata hai tum bina kisi reason ke kuch bhi nahi krogi par abhi tym tumhare sath nhii hai bss "
Rishita said and Raavi hugged her
"Thank you rishita main jhooth nahi bol rahi parr.... "
"Koii baat nahi abb chalo puja mein"
Rishita dragged reluctant Raavi towards hall. Puja started but Raavi was not allowed by suman to participate in the family puja she stood at the corner not wanting to talk to anita who was already smirking at her and prafulla was hell ashamed to talk to her. Meanwhile, girl entered in the house wearing traditional lehanga and was looking very pretty suman introduced everyone to her and said,
"Yeh hai Shiva ki hone wali biwi"
Raavi looked at Shiva who was looking at her but averted his gaze. Suman continued,
"Yeh Dhara, Gaumbi, Rishita, Dev, krishh... .. . "
It was Raavi's turn and suman made a face while Shiva said,
"Yeh Dhara bhabhi ki care karne aayi hai"
Raavi looked at Shiva with teary eyed as she didn't expected him to introduced her like a maid she felt humilated and alienated and so so upset that no one opposed him which means everyone just consider her as a caretaker only.
FLASHBACK ENDED
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"Mujhe Shiva ne aise introduce kreaya jaise main ikk maid hoon bas meri yehi aukat hai sab ki life mein Dhara dii ko maine apni badi bhen mana aur unhone bhi kuch nahi kaha,mujhe ajj lag raha hai jaise main sirf ikk bhoj hu sirf ikk bhoj.. . .. . . "
She cried harder Shiva wanted to come to her but was stopped by rishita, rishita whispered,
"Shiva use bol laene do uska dil halka ho jayenga"
Shiva nodded and again resumed overhearing Raavi
"Meri sabse badi galti pata hai kya gai kii main na chahti thi kii sab mujhe pyaar kre par main bhul hi gayi main pyaar deserve hi nahi krti jis se bhi pyaar kiya sab dhokha dete hai sab ke sab galti na actually meri hi hai main kaise expect krr sakti hu kii koii mujhe pyaar kre main jaha hoti hu waha sab ki khushiyaan ko nazar lag jati hai"
She breathed heavily and said
"Sirf yehi nahi aur bhi bhut kuch hua.. . .. .
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FLASHBACK STARTED
After introduction, Suman ordered Dhara to take rest and Rishita to bring some drinks for guestbut Rishita wanted to go and dance so she passed the work to Raavi and Rishita and Krish left to dance to join Dev ,Gaumbi and Anita.
Raavi went to bring drinks she felt humilated but decided not to ruin her mood as she liked Navratri night a lot but her thoughts invaded her as when she returned she saw Shiva and Disha dancing it made her fume in anger and continue ti serve drink Suman hold her hand and said,
"Dekha tu Shiva ke liye kya mayne rakhti hai usne tujhe kaise milvaya aur abb dekh kabhi dekha hai usko itna khush jitna vo disha ke saath hai"
Raavi looked at Shiva and found him and disha giggling, Disha gestured towards Raavi as if she was a waiter, Raavi was pushed by suman to go towards her, Raavi went there and Disha said
"Yeh juice mujhe dedo Shiva app kya lenge"
Raavi looked at Shiva and he took a glass but accidently Raavi tripped on Disha's lehanga and the rest of glasses were spilled at her lehanga,
Disha screamed on Raavi and Raavi kept on saying sorry than Shiva said,
"Kya krr rahi hai tu dikh nahi raha tujhe "
"Sorry main saaf krwa deti hoon app aa jao yaha"
Raavi replied Disha cutts her off and says rudely
"Nahi mujhe ghar jaana hai vese bhi tym ho gya hai."
"Main aapko chod deti hu"
Raavi said but was cutted off by suman
"Koii jaroorat nahi hai Shiva jayenga usse chodne"
Raavi looked at Shiva one part of her wanted to protest but one part held her back as she remembered how shiva have introduced she was no one to protest and Shiva left with Disha meanwhile Raavi cleaned everything all the guest went but taunts of suman made her more guilty and lonely at same time
"Tune jaan bhujhkar kiya na Bichari Disha ka lehnaga ganda kar diya tujhe kaha tha puja se dur reh jaha hoti hai waha gadbad toh hogi hi na"
"Sorry Kaki... "
Everyone retired to their respective rooms cause of such a tiring day. And Raavi went to wind all the decoration and everything.
FLASHBACK ENDS
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PRESENT TIME
"Koii mujhe pasand nahi krta mumma papa koii bhi main kisi ke liye mayne nahi rakhti bhu aasan hai sabke liye mujhe chodna toh main kyon nahi chod pa rahi sabko. "
Mujhe na pehle hi samajh jana chahiye tha kii pyaar meri kismat mein nahi hai apne bhu mujhe warn kiya tha pehla par maine nahi suni apki ikk baar bhi........ Mujhe na Shiva par yakeen tha kii vo aisa nahi krenga main usse apni feelings batana chahti thi par ussee toh main chahiye hi nahi kitna khush tha vo Disha ke saath meri wajah se uski khushiyaan bhi sab khatam ho gyi aur mera pyaar phir adhura reh gya main sure nahi hoon ki main kya feel krti hoon par main Shiva se dur nahi reh sakti"
She cried harder ,hearing her confession Shiva was shocked and fuilty as he had hurted Raavi a lot looking her this vulnerable made him uneasy Rishita felt really bad for Raavi as this naive soul have beared too much than anyone can think.
"Mujhe aapke paas aana hai.............
Mujhe nahi rehna yaha jaha nafrat ho nahi saha ja raha yeh sab...................
Apko pata hai anath hone se bura kya hai unchaha hona aur iss waqt mujhe wausa hi mehsoos ho rha hai please mujhe apke paas aana hai......... Please........... "
She said and sprawled down crying.
Rishita festured Shiva and said
"Ja shiva usse rok le warna vo khatam ho jayengi. Vo tujhe pyaar karti hai mat de usse yeh saza. Jaa"
Shiva nodded already in tears and went to approach Raavi.............
TO BE CONTINUED
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