Raghvi ff: The Sky to her Heart // ch 2 pg 6 (3rd Aug) - Page 5

Originally posted by: Amnnaa

What a beautiful update bee . 1 more FF to my reading list .

I loved the dynamic between Keerti and Pallavi, it will help me to forget the new change in Kirti and I absolutely enjoyed how you excluded chota bindi Mansi from her sisters list 😆.

This version of Pallavi is so hot 🔥. She is indeed a queen 👸

Eagerly waiting for next update .

Thanks Amna 🤗

So glad you liked Pallu-Keerti, hopefully it can keep it going the same way in spite of what the show Keerti turned out to be I loved their original dynamic

Yes she is a queen and she is here to slay 😎

Next update is here! Read and comment 🤗

Originally posted by: Bee222

Likh diya! 😉 Part 2 padho ab 😆

Thank you so much for the tag! 🤗

I loved the update and now i am super intrigued to read next one. I so wanted to have this scene on the show as well, Raghav and Amma talking right after the marriage and she being the catalyst to at least the initial phase of the marriage.

What you mentioned Raghav giving his 100% to every relationship is so accurate to his character. He would definitely give her the respect and dignity of being Mrs. Raghav Rao even if he the MU wasn't cleared.

Beeeeeee, I loved the update 🤗

Pehli baat toh Thank You for giving the original Keerthi-Pallavi bond. Hopefully, you'll continue to keep it that way here too cos I would love to have a small snip of their OG Camaraderie in some ways atleast through this SS❤️

Loved how you described about the symbolism of the small bowl of mustard seeds for Raghav. The dialogue session & the whole scene between Amma & Raghav reveals so much about their relationship but in a very subtle way. Going forward I would love to see, how we're developing these tracks.

The last line makes it look scaryyy. Iss baar jaldi update dedogi na😛

Beautiful update

Let's see how will Pallavi and Raghav's life be..

I was waiting for you to update this story for the longest time!

It was soo nice to see Raghav finally being so close to getting back with his family. And Amma trying her hardest to be strong in front of him🥺

Are you planning to change the dynamics of Raghav, Pallavi and Keerthi like they did in the show or would you keep it the same?

Absolutely amazing update

Bee🤗

I am so glad you got your inspiration to finally write and i am very happy you are continuing this FF

this was something I expected to see in the show but koi na I am happy that I read it here

and the one pair of eyes is Pallavi right? she will mend the relationship

I cant wait for your next update