Raghvi ff: The Sky to her Heart // ch 2 pg 6 (3rd Aug) - Page 3

Originally posted by: Me000w

There is indeed a huge difference between bahu and beti..well described 👏

Fab prologue. Look forward to FF. PM for updates please 👍🏼

Tannu 🤗 Thanks girl ❤️ Just updated part 1... sending you a pm 😆

Originally posted by: Jiarao

Superb prologue 👏. Plz update soon.

Uh.. usko kyun tag kiya? Likh to main rahi hoon 😆

Thanks though ❤️😳 Part 1 is here!

Originally posted by: Avneel07

Wonderful start. Please continue soon

Thanks, um, what's your name? 😛 I'm guessing that UN is a play on Avneil from NK 😆

Part 1 has been updated! Please read and leave your thoughts 🤗

Originally posted by: Radiant_Eyes_

I love this plot already

Yay! I love it too.. hope I can do justice to it.. I'm nervous 🙈

Part 1 update ho gaya, jao batao kaisa laga 😛

Originally posted by: lucinamaza

Amazing prologue👏

Thanks dear ❤️😳 Part 1 has been updated now!

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

You had already started this FF, 🐝 and I didn't know. 😲 How did I miss it? 🤪

At last you fell into your own trap. 🤣All the best. I'm still refraining myself.. So bye.

I'm so eager to read this 🐝. Do give fast fast updates. ❤️

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Chalo you also miss stuff then 🤣 Yeah 🗝️ I got trapped finally 😭😆

Fast updates ki umeed mat rakho 😆 Abhi abhi bas part 1 update hua hai, go check it out 😉

Hugs from 🐝 🤗

Originally posted by: Bee222

First update! 😛 Sorry it was short, but I want to focus on the little things behind all the relationships 😳 Keerti was my favorite character in the show, and she will continue to be portrayed that way here ❤️ None of the senseless stuff she's currently displaying onscreen

Leave your feedback, please! 🤗

Bee!!! ❤️

Update short tha, but I am not able to find words for how much I loved it. Honestly, if you could see me now- meri aankhein bhar aayi, yeh padh ke.

Kirti-Pallavi is a relationship that caught hold of my heart from their first scene, where Harish is stalking Kirti, and never let go since then. I know we've been told more than shown about the depth of their relatinship, but jo bhi scraps mile, itne pyaare mile ❤️❤️❤️

Pallavi helping her deal with a stalker. Kirti being the one she trusted with something as critical as shop accounts. When Pallavi was ousted, Kirti was the one who knew immediately where she would go. Kirti immediately taking in a homeless Pallavi. The fact that in all the drama around the wedding, Kirti was the only person (apart from Krishna), be it the Raos or the Deshmukhs, whose was thinking exclusively about Pallavi's well being and none of the other frills and drama around what had happened. The midnight gossip sessions. When Pallavi found out about Sunny, the trust and maturity with which she responded. Haan, aur bonding dikha sakte the, magar jitni dikhai, mere liye kaafi thi.

The tension between these two has been tearing me up so, so badly mein kya bataun. Breakups between the lead pair, I can happily tolerate for the angst. When these beautiful friendships fall apart, it's so hard to watch. I still have hopes they'll find their relationship again, but till they do, you gave me mere waale Pallavi and Kirti, ILYSM for it 🤗🤗

The line, "Main theek ho jaungi," oof. So, so powerful, and so very Pallavi- she isn't afraid to admit she's not perfectly alright in the moment, but she knows she'll bounce back from this. Bouncing back is what she's an expert at.

And your entire scene, it was so in character for the two girls, it reminded me perfectly of one of the scenes in the show- right after Raghav's 'proposal', while at the same time Jaya has told Kirti about the condition she set. Pallavi came home, and the two girls read in each other's eyes that something was going very, very wrong, but both had something preventing them from speaking freely, but the support was silently and effectively conveyed. Your scene gave me the exact same vibes!

I think almost chapter jitna lamba comment ho gaya, but I couldn't help it, bhavnaon mein beh gayi ❤️

What a beautiful update bee . 1 more FF to my reading list .

I loved the dynamic between Keerti and Pallavi, it will help me to forget the new change in Kirti and I absolutely enjoyed how you excluded chota bindi Mansi from her sisters list 😆.

This version of Pallavi is so hot 🔥. She is indeed a queen 👸

Eagerly waiting for next update .

A nice juncture in time you have picked to start your version of the story. 👏🏼👏🏼 And loved how you are planning to show Keerthi. A continuation of what she stood for, and how she was telling her mom that she is doing a mistake by suggesting the wedding. ❤️

Seat belts on! Waiting for this lala ride. And to see how Pallavi takes charge of her life in her terms. 👍🏼

Originally posted by: Bee222

Uh.. usko kyun tag kiya? Likh to main rahi hoon 😆

Thanks though ❤️😳 Part 1 is here!

I read the first part and all I can say it was worth waiting ❤️