RAIN (One shot - completed) - Page 4

Originally posted by: mistofshadows

Not Christmas buddy....it is 'Fateh is messing up and we love Tejo' Day😂😂

But honestly speaking, when I started writing, this wasn't supposed to be a Divorce OS. It was more about Tejo and her musings.

Then Fateh came in and I couldn't help bringing Amrik in. And then this happens 😅

Bold: Don't you there. I am still waiting. Post soon.

- Niki

Whatever you decided to do in the end worked in your favor. I loved it really

@bold: I will for sure, I just got an interesting idea for a twist in my fic so its release might get slightly delayed.😉

Originally posted by: Bluekohl

Oh thank you so much for associating my silly rambling with your beautiful work. I'm a novice. You're a real pro. (And if itv had any taste they'd have hired you and mayuri as writers).

Oh come on Bluekohl, your OS was just as amazing! ❤️

Originally posted by: mistofshadows

Now that I think about it...my work feels like a prequel to yours 😍😍😍

This is brilliant. Your plot actually fits right after this.

- Niki

Lol I know right?

I came to yours right after reading Bluekohl's and I swear it felt like I was reading the same thing just in different timelines 😆

Originally posted by: masin

(I typed a comment yesterday and then accidentally closed the tab without posting it... )

Boy, did I miss your angst or what!? 🤗

He lost his last chance at love. He lost his light, his happiness, his companion. He lost it all just because he couldn't get his priorities straight. I'm so glad Tejo didn't give him another chance. Even if she misunderstood his intentions, even if he didn't mean to be with Jasmin in that way, he still never put out the fire that Jasmin and Amrik created. He let them get under his wife's skin. He let them speak ill about their relationship. He let them look down upon his wife. He didn't protect his relationship and Tejo could've only shielded it so much. It takes two to uphold a marriage and frankly, what reason does Tejo have to keep fighting when he's showing no signs of wanting this marriage to work?!

I hope you're able to write a second part to this and shed light on how Fateh's coping without Tejo. Would LOVE to read more angst, especially from a perpetually troubled Fateh's perspective.

I second this. You write angst very well and I want to see a tortured fateh without tejo. Please mistofshadows... Grace us with a one shot!

Originally posted by: masin

(I typed a comment yesterday and then accidentally closed the tab without posting it... )

Boy, did I miss your angst or what!? 🤗

Haha...even I missed it😌😌

Tejo truly has given so much of herself to others, that she had nothing left for herself. She's always been a giver and naturally, everyone around her became a taker. I'm glad she finally chose herself and put herself first.

It takes a hit and a break to understand the priorities. It took breaking her to decide to place herself at the top.

Amrik's obsession over JasFa makes little to no sense to me, but you explored it really well! He indulged himself, created drama where it wasn't warranted, and yet, he's not content. That's what happens to anyone who tries to meddle in someone else's matters.

The Amrik in this fic was a delusional boy with dreams of Sandcastles unable to fathom the consequences of his own actions. He saw only one side of it and decided that he knew it all. He poked his nose where he wasn't wanted and years later is haunted by his own actions.

As for Fateh... kya hi bolun... you make me love him and his misery every single time! ❤️

Hehe. I love troubled Fateh..kya kare...him is pain is my signature now a days.

He lost his last chance at love. He lost his light, his happiness, his companion. He lost it all just because he couldn't get his priorities straight. I'm so glad Tejo didn't give him another chance. Even if she misunderstood his intentions, even if he didn't mean to be with Jasmin in that way, he still never put out the fire that Jasmin and Amrik created. He let them get under his wife's skin. He let them speak ill about their relationship. He let them look down upon his wife. He didn't protect his relationship and Tejo could've only shielded it so much. It takes two to uphold a marriage and frankly, what reason does Tejo have to keep fighting when he's showing no signs of wanting this marriage to work?!

Exactly. He might have been framed but he did put fuel into the fire and fanned the flames high.

I hope you're able to write a second part to this and shed light on how Fateh's coping without Tejo. Would LOVE to read more angst, especially from a perpetually troubled Fateh's perspective.

Bold: I will think on it. If I get an inspiration, I will try to pen Fateh again. My first work in the forum was him in 'Broken' and with it being taken off...I kinda stopped writing him. But I will try.

Replied in pink.

- Niki

Originally posted by: Bluekohl

I second this. You write angst very well and I want to see a tortured fateh without tejo. Please mistofshadows... Grace us with a one shot!

Thank you dear.

I am also thinking of penning Fateh. I last did him in 'Broken'. Let's see. When I get an inspiration....I will write.

- Niki