ShiVi ff: Rewrite the stars (part 1 - page 2)

Basically a shivi ff..... Hope u all like it!!!

Character sketch

So let's me start by introducing our leads...

Lead character

Shiva Pandya - 3 son of pandya family

A hot headed boy.....He is just like a coconut.... Hard outside n soft inside.... For him family matters alot.....

He is a very reserve person..... He is very good bt not for everyone....

'Man with a golden heart '

Raavi - niece of prafulla

She is cute, bubbly n full of life..... She can be both sweet as sugar n hot as chilli....

She love to create happiness around her... She is little nautanki too....

' Main toh zindagi chara kar aayi hoon '

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Other character

Dev pandya - 2 son of pandya family... He is a very sweet n simple guy......

Gautam pandya - the eldest son of Pandya family..... He is a mature mam, who has made many sacrifices of the family... He is the most sensible...

Dhara Gautam Pandya - wife of Gautam Pandya - she is sweet and caring lady..... Loves her family alot

Krish Pandya - the youngest son of Pandya family.... He is a sweet heart..... He is the most funny and entertaining..

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Suman Pandya - mother of Pandya brothers...

Jagat narayan - masa paa of raavi n brother of suman...

Prafulla narayan - masi maa of raavi n wife of jagat...

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Note :

1) Everything is similar to the show.... Their characters are just like the show...

2) Prafulla n suman have solve their issues n now their are in peace..

3) Shiva still hate his mami for everything she has done...

4) Dhara is 3 month pregnant..

5) Shiva and raavi are still at loggerhead with each other

6) In the story..... Shivi are still not married

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Prologue!!

You know I want you

It's not a secret I try to hide

I know you want me

So don't keep saying our hands are tied

You claim it's not in the card

And fate is pulling you miles away

And out of reach from me

But you're here in my heard

So who can stop me if I decide that you're destiny

What if we rewrite the stars ?

Say you were made to be mind

Nothing could keep us apart

You'd be the one I was made to fly

Its up to you, and it's up to me

No one can say what we get to be

So, why don't we rewrite the stars?

Maybe the world could be ours

Tonight.....

Prafulla - raavi!!!!!!! Kaha hai tu???(Shouting)

Prafulla was irritated...... She has been calling raavi since 10 minutes still raavi was not responding..

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Jagat - prafulla kya kar rahi hai...... Abhi ke liye raavi ko chod aur jakar anita ko dekh!!!!

Prafulla - mein toh bhul hi gayi thi..

Prafulla went to anita room...

Prafulla was left Dumbstruck...... Anita was looking very beautiful in her bridal lehenga....

Today was Anita and hardik wedding..... Finally the day came when her elder daughter was getting married...... She has cursed herself that because of her, Anita had to live a miserable life for 10 long years..... Bt then today was the day, she was the most happiest in whole somnath.... Her dream of seeing her daughter marriage was not only fulfill bt her daughter was getting marry to a very good n respectful person....

Prafulla has tears in her eyes.....

Prafulla - ajj meri beti sabse zyada sundar dikh rahi hai!!! (Caring her cheeks)

Anita- thank you fui..... Lekin dheere bola agar Somnath ki sabse khubsurat ladki ne sun liya na phir toh...... (Laughing)

They both laugh...

Anita - waise fui yeh raavi kaha hai??

Prafulla- yeh ladki mujhe ek din pagal kar degi..... Kab se bulayi ja rahi hoon, sunti hi nahi!!!! Room lock karke beti hai 🤦‍♀️

Anita - lekin kya huwa fui??? (Concerned)

Prafulla - usse baraat ke saath aana tha..... Meine kaha ki teri di ki shadi hai.... Tujhe yaha par rehkar unka sawgat karna chahiye..... Phir kya yeh ladki mu phula kar room mein lock karke beti hai...... Baat bhi nahi kar rahi..... Pata nahi app mein usse akele kaise handle karungi (annoyed)

Anita - fui app bhi na budu hoon.... (Prafulla gave her a weird expression) ... Abb raavi ko jante nahi hoon kya.??..pata hai na agar zid karle toh phir usse manana impossible hai..... Woh room mein nahi hogi... Paka gayi hogi Pandya house mein... (Chuckle)

Prafulla expression changes...

Prafulla- yeh anita asa mat bol..... Yeh ladki bhi na.... Abhi jakar dekhti hoon.. (Fearfully)

Telling this prafulla went to see raavi.....

She try to open the room.... Bt couldn't so at last she went to see her window ..... A long sawl was hanging down the window..

Prafulla - yeh ladki ka kya karu mein..... Baat hi nahi sunti!!!! (Irritated)

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The Pandya niwas was beautiful decorated...... Since the wedding was announced , dhara was super excited for her brother wedding..... She has been doing everything she could to make the day special...

Gautam n suman suggested that all the functions should be held on pandya niwas as hardik stays alone...

Gautam - dhara thora toh aram karle!!!!

Dhara - nahi gombi.... Ek baar shadi katam ho jaye phir jitna aaram karne ko bologe mein aaram karungi par abhi nahi.....

Dhara was making the arti ka tal...

Gautam- waise tere teen bandar kaha par hai???

Dhara - teeno ready ho rahe hai.... (Smiling)

Hardik sit on the chair...... Dhara did his arti....

Dhara - mein bohot khush hoon bhai apke liye..... (Hugging him)

Hardik - mein bhi khush hoon ki finally mein mama bane wala hoon (smiling)

Dhara - (breaking the hug) ajj apka din hai..... Ajj se apka naya safar shuru hone wala hai... Ajj toh apne baare mein sochiye.... (Smiling)

Hardik- apne hi baare mein soch raha hoon..... Bohot khush hoon mein (blushing)

Gautam- dekho kaise sharma raha hai!!! (Teasing)

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Krish was arranging his hair while dev was wearing his shoes...

Krish - kaafi ajip nahi lag raha..... Anita weds hardik!!! (Making weird expression)

Dev- kya ajip hai..... Dono ek dusre se pyaar karte hai aur shadi karna chahte hai phir kya ajip hai!!!

Krish - tujhe toh kuch ajip nahi lagega.... (Irritated)

Dev - Tu bhi na bohot baat karta hai.... Chup chap se ready ho ja (smiling)

Boy - ajip toh hai!!!

Dev n krish turn

Dev- Shiva.......

Shiva came out wearing his silver color sherwani...

Shiva - mujhe bhi kaafi shock laga jab hardik bhai ne apne aur anita ke rishte ke baare mein baat kiya..... Woh kaise bhul sakte hai jo bhi unhone kiya... (Angrily)

Dev- shiva woh sab passed mein tha..... Abb dekh maa, gombi n dhara bhabhi ne mami, mama aur anita ko maaf kar diya hai.... Dono parivaar kitne khush hai..... Phir tu kyu khush nahi hai.... (Calmly)

Shiva- mein uss mami ko kabhi maaf nahi karne wala...... Mein usse nafrat karta hoon aur karta rahunga....

Krish - raavi......!!! (Shock)

Shiva - uss chipkali se toh humesha hi nafrat karta hoon aur kabhi bhi nafrat karna nahi chorunga....

Girl- toh mein konsa tujhse pyaar karti hoon ....

Shiva heard her voice n was irritated.....

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Nice start

Seems interesting

Nice start 👌👌 loved it ❤️❤️

Waiting for next update 😊😘

Seems interesting waiting for next one

Interesting concept, good start👏

Waiting for next

Part 1 : mission joote -churao /bachao !!

Shiva pov

Girl - toh mein konsa tujhse pyaar karti hoon!!!!

Yeh chipkali firse aa gayi..... 🤦‍♂️

Yeh apne ghar mein kyu nahi rehti ...... Sirf Pandya niwas mein aana hai usse..... Ghadheri!!!! 😒🙄

Krish - raavi Tu??? (Shock)

Dev- tumhe toh apne ghar mein honga chahiye na....

Raavi- woh kya hai na mujhe bhi baraat mein dance karna hai.... Isliye aa gayi yaha par!!! (Excitingly)

Shiva - apne shadi mein dance kar lena..... Abhi ja.... (Irritated)

I turn to look at her....

Yeh chipkali ajj chipkaliyon ki beauty queen kaise dikh rahi hai !!!!! 🤔🤭

First time chipkali was wearing a saree.... Like I m not saying that she looks beautiful.... Na na asa bilkul nahi hai..... Bt ajj atleast itni buri nahi dikh raha, churail nahi dikh rahi 🤭

She was angrily looking at me....

As if I care!!!! 😏

Krish - raavi Tu ajj kaafi achi dikh rahi hai (teasing)

Dev- pehli baar saree pehana hai na..... Kaafi sundar dikh rahi hoon (smiling)

Raavi blushes.....

Yeh dev aur krish ke aankhen toh thik hai na???...... Sundar woh bhi chipkali...... Bilkul bhi nahi ...... Ha different dikh rahi hai.... Par sundar!!!!!! 😒

Raavi- thank u so much (blushing) ...... Aur tum log bhi kaafi handsome dikh rahe hoon (dev n krish smile)

Dhara - tum log ready ho gaye...!!!!!! (Shouting)

Dhara Bhabhi came shouting ... Then she saw raavi

Dhara - raavi Tu!!!! (Surprise)

Raavi- ha di...... Mein bhi app logo ke saath baraat mein jaogi (smiling)

Dhara - par mami???

Raavi- masi maa ki chinta maat kariye.... Mein unhe handle kar lungi (smiling)........ Waise mein kaise dikh rahi hoon??? (Blushing)

Chipkaliyon ki beauty queen dikh rahi hai!!!! 😏

Dhara- kaafi sundar dikh rahi hai.... Bilkul pari jaise (caring her cheek)

Pari !!!!! 🥴

Dhara - chalo tum sab niche aa jao nikal na time ho gaya hai (smiling)

Then dhara bhabhi went...... Follow by dev n krish........ I was wearing my shoes..... N that chipkali was staring me....

Shiva pov end

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Raavi pov

I saw Shiva was wearing his shoes

Iss Bhootnath ko isse acha moka nahi milega pareshan karne ke kiye!!!! 😅🤣

I know exactly how to irritate him..

Raavi- Shiva waise ajj toh kaafi handsome dikh raha hai.... Yeh silver color tujhe bohot suit karta hai!!!! (Smiling)

He look at me Irritatingly...

Plan work!!! 🤭

Shiva- chup zyada bol mat...... Aur ja yaha se!!!! (Rudely)

Raavi- Shiva!!!! Tu mujhse itna kyu gussa rehta hai.... Tujhe mein pasand nahi?? (Innocently)

He look at me angrily...

Shiva- bilkul ..... Tujhe mein pasand karunga..... Aise galat femi bhi maat palna!! (Smirking)

Iski toh mein!!!! 😠

Dhara - shiva raavi jaldi aao humein nikalna hai (shouting)

Is bhootnath ko toh baad mein dekhti hoon!!!! 😤😠

I look at him angrily n left the room

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We all were dancing in the baraat..... Really it was a joyous time...... Waise bhi mujhe toh bass nachne se matlab hai!!!! I was dancing with dhara di n krish!!!!

Then I saw shiva standing in a corner. So I went towards him...

Raavi- oi bhootnath asa yaha par kyu khara hai.... Chal dance kar !!! (Smiling)

Shiva - Tu na zyada na udd maat...... Chup chap se dance kar..... Mere aas pass maat aa!!!! (Rudely)

Raavi- itna rude!!!!! Kya subha dhara di ne karele ki sabji khilaya tha ki tu itna karwa bol raha hai!!!! (Making an angry pout) ..... Chal

I hold his hand n drag him in the middle..... He look at me angrily.... Bt I dont care

Meri anita di ki shadi hai sabhi ko nachna parega!!!! 😏

Then I hold his hand n dance with him.....

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After sometime we reach the wedding venue....

Raavi isse pehle ki masi maa tujhe dekhe bhaag yaha se!!!! 😬

I was look here n there making sure that no one is looking at me .... Thankfully all were busy in their own world....

Yaha sahi time..... Sab log apne app mein busy hai bhaag yaha se!!!! 😏

I started walking faster bt then someone hold my hand.....

Abb yeh kon hai!!!! 🤦‍♀️

I gasped.....

Kaha bhaag rahi hai????

I was relief....

Thank God .....yeh Shiva hai!!!! 😧

I turn to see Shiva holding my hand...

Raavi- Shiva tum log adar jao mein abhi aati hoon!!! (Nervously)

Shiva - kyu???? Saath mein aaye hai you saath mein hi andar jayenge...... Akir tujhe bhi toh pata chale ghar se bhaag jane ka natiza kya hota hai!!! (Sarcastically)

I look at him with wide eyes...

Shiva- Tu chahe kisiko bhi bewakoof bana sakh thi hai par mujhe nahi bana payegi!!! (Laughing)

Raavi tu toh gayi hai!!!! 😬

Raavi - kya bewakoof bari baatein kar raha hai...... Chal aur mujhe jaane de (nervously laughing)

Shiva - nahi chal tu mere saath!!! (Smirking )

Then Shiva drag me with him!!

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Masi maa was doing arti of hardik bhaiya n everyone...When me n Shiva enter she look at both of us..... Then she saw that Shiva was holding my hand n glare at me angrily.......

Jagat - raavi Tu yaha par?? Tujhe toh anita ke pass hona chahiye tha na (shock)

Raavi- woh masa paa.... (Shiva interrupted)

Shiva - teri beti ko toh bahana chahiye pandya house mein aane ke liye..... Baraat ke bahane aa gayi!!!! Samal apni beti ko!! (Rudely)

Gautam- Shiva!!!! Tameez se mama hai woh humare!!!! (Sternly)

Shiva gave an irritated look

Dhara - aur waise bhi raavi tho meri bachi hai , woh jab chahe aa sakti hai (caring my cheek)

I smirk at Shiva..... While he gave me an irritating look

Phir masi maa ne phoolon ki mela sabko pehanayi.... While Shiva just grab the mela n put by himself...

Iss bhootnath ka kuch nahi hi sakta!! 😤

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The wedding rituals started ,hardik bhaiya was doing the rituals..... Masi maa took me in a corner

Prafulla - tujhe kitni baar bolu uss Shiva ne dur reh!!! (Strictly)

Raavi- masi maa mein toh bass pandya niwas gayi thi..... Woh toh bass woh Shiva ne!!!

Prafulla- mujhe teri waha jaane se aitraaz nahi hai..... Parbass tu Shiva se dur reh.... Woh mujhse itni nafrat karta hai ki mujhe daar lagta hai ki sayad mera gussa tujh par na nikale... (Concerned)

Raavi- nahi nikalega...... Agar nikalna hoga toh pehle hi nikal deta na..... Masi maa ha hum larte hai par woh sab harmless fights hoti hai.... App chinta maat karo...... Mujhe abhi jaana hoga , app anita di ko bulane jao!!! (Smiling)

Prafulla - kaha ja rahi hai???

Raavi- joota churane (winking)

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I call all my girls to a room...

Raavi - abhi hardik bhaiya puja kar rahe hai...... Toh unke joote churane ka time is se acha toh nahi ho sakta!!(smirking)

Sai (raavi friend) - par raavi meine toh sunna hai ki hardik bhaiya ke joote pandya brothers ne chupaya hai!!

Raavi- yeh toh aur bhi acha hai!!! (Smirking)

Anokhi (raavi friend) - tu itna hass kyu rahi hai (thoughtfully).....tere dimag mein kya chal raha hai ??? (Fearfully)

Raavi- tum log na dev aur krish ko busy rakhne ki koshish karo, they are easy target...... Mein Shiva ko distract karni ki try karti hoon, woh thoda difficult hai.... (Annoyed)

Sai - thik hai.... Par isse kya hoga!! (Thoughtful)

Raavi- sai Tu na krish se pata laga ni ki try kar ki joote kaha chupaya hai .... I m sure woh baata dega.... N then we will steal the shoes!!! Ya bt make sure ki hum un teeno par nazar rakhe.... I m sure gombi joote nahi chupayenge !!!! (Smiling)

Sai & anokhi - k...

Raavi- plan on..... ' Mission Joote Churao'

Then we have hifi to reach other

Plan on!!!! 🤭😁

Raavi pov end

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Shiva pov...

We all were enjoying the function.... Bt I was a little tens...

Yeh mami ki behan ki beti kaha hai??🤔

Ok before u guys assume anything wrong let me clear my self...... I m searching her because I m sure yeh ladki ke dimag mein kuch khurafati plan ban raha hai.... Woh itni shaanti se rehne wali ladki toh nahi hai.....

Before she do anything stupid..... I have to check her!!!! 🤨

I got up from my sit n was leaving bt then my brothers...

Dev - kaha ja raha hai??

Shiva - kahi nahi woh toh sab...... (Krish interrupted)

Krish - bhuk lagi hai na!!! (Smirking)

Dev - subha toh itna khaya tha.... (Fearfully)

Shiva - krish Tu na chup bet..... Aur dev Tu bhi kaha krish ki baatein sun raha hai (annoyed)

Krish - (pulling me down to sit) bet yaha par..... Joote bachana hai humein!!!!

Shiva - tum log yeh faltu se kam karo.... Mujhe maff kardo mein nahi karne wala!! (Irritated)

Krish - Shiva yeh joote bachaye toh paise milenge aur hum party kar sakte hai .... Par agar raavi ne chura liya toh usse paisa milega!!! (Making a pout)

Us chipkali ko toh ek paisa bhi nahi lene dunga !!! 😤

Money was not a problem..... Bt I can't let that girl win..... Nahi yeh mujhse bardaasht nahi hoga !!!

Dev- paisa chor..... Hum ladke walo ki izzat ka soch Shiva!!!

Yes agar woh jeet gayi toh pure somnath mein bolte firegi ki Shiva se jeet gayi😒.... Mein yeh bilkul nahi hone dunga😬.... Plus agar woh har gayi toh chehra dekhne layak hoga!!!! 🤭😏

Shiva - thik hai.... 'Mission joote bachao' on!!!

Then we brothers give hifi to each other

At that time I saw that chipkali looking at us n smirking....

Tujhe toh jeetne nahi dunga!!!!! 😏

Raavi - (thinking) aur tujhe toh harakar hi manugi!!!! 😏

Shiva pov end

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It was hilarious update😆

Loved Shivi's banter😆

This was really amazing…

Cant wait for the next chapter.