ShiVi story- Queen and her pawns BONUS CHAPTER UPDATED - Page 15

Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

this was beautiful! ❤️

Thank you🍫🍫

Originally posted by: katheriene

Beautiful update 👏

Both Shivi are crazy made for each other❤️

Finally Shiva realized his feelings for Raavi❤️

Shiva knows the truth about Raavi's plan😊

Let's see how they will sort the mess

Waiting for next

He knows a little not everything though🤣

Thank youu🌹

Beautiful!! Finally Shiva realized his love for Raavi!! Yayyyy!!! Plz update the next part soon!!❤❤

Originally posted by: Scribbled_tales

Raavi's madness for shiva is something no one could have imagined. glad at last shiva realized his love for raavi. im worried about family members how will they react when they will get to know the entire truth.....

awesome chapter❤️

Yeah she needed to be crazy in this fic. Thank youuu🌹🌹🍫🍫

Originally posted by: Shivi.forever

Wow what a pair.. i have no words.. it made me completely speechless. What madness s this.

Do write more. U r an awesome writer.. happy writing..

Really appreciated the emotions expressed in this story...

This Raavi was supposed to be as crazy as they come. Welcome to the train of Mad hatter🤣

Thank you🌹🌹🍫

Originally posted by: Swastika34

Beautiful!! Finally Shiva realized his love for Raavi!! Yayyyy!!! Plz update the next part soon!!❤❤

Thank you. I dunno when I will upload the next part🤣 when I begin typing I do it in hste but the inspiration needs to strike.🌹

Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace

Ugghh I love it !
I love how the crazy Queen planned to trap her King ♥️

She would sacrifice everything in a blink of an eye just to get him to finally realise his love for her. No matter how much his words hurt her, she was determined !!

You did such a wonderful job, from the beginning depicting to us the steady level of crazy Raavi has become and in just one chapter you balance it out with the equal amount of crazy from Shiva's POV !

Please give us Shiva's PoV also going forward ! Love to see the emotional turmoil he's going through. How is he going to face his brother with the fear that they both love the same girl. How is going to come out to his family that he loves the girl his brother is about to marry. And Raavi ! Maami is going to get a heart attack one of these days because of this girl. But thank God at least Maami's stance regarding Shiva had shifted 😂😂

This was beautiful! I loved the fact that it was trishul there. I always wanted a scene in future where Shiva gifts Raavi either his bracelet or Necklace as a promise for always being there for her. But this was beautiful. Though lost in reality, it would be nice if gifting a part of his bracelet would play out.

And Raavi is indeed crazy. But so glad that finally, both have confessed to each other (well technically, Shiva still has to, but his actions showed his feelings). Just hope he learns of Rishita soon. And the two can set records straight asap. Looking forward to what's next.

This was so beautiful and passionate.

Trishul was a nice touch. And Raavi's madness for him lighting the canopy on fire - oh my ..at least her madness is reciprocated by Shiva ..their conversation on her bed was so beautiful..it was realistic kind if exactly like they would behave

Krish was a sweetheart trying to prepare his family that it is Shiva Raavi not Dev Raavi.

And I really really want one scene where after Rishita Dev and Raavi Shiva relevation where Rishita complains that Dev did not even open his mouth about his wedding Krish did more for their wedding and without Raavi there would have been no wedding 🤣🤣

Such a beautiful update😳

I loved it fully❤️

Please continue soon🤗