Star Commentor Award (Part 44)
Winner Khwaishfan
Runner-ups: Alamelu,Kkiran
Special Mention: NeenaDd
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Part 45
G-I am a bad influence??? You had a gun!
Maan wanted to say, ‘well you had a chainsaw’ but doesn’t say anything
G-why weren’t you picking up my calls? I was so worried!
M-I don’t have my phone with me
Geet chup ho gai
She looks down
G- I didn’t know this would happen…I thought you need your family
M- You couldn’t even stand to be with me for even a week,huh?
G-That is so not true! You don’t get me! I…was afraid...I take relationships seriously...I take heartbreaks also seriously. I was saving my heart from a heartbreak…I thought about this logically
She shakes her head
G-This doesn’t make sense...at max we will date and break up after a while...
She sighs
G-You know naa, I am not at all good at moving on
She pauses for a moment for Maan to say something, when he doesn’t,she continues
G-Have you had any long-term relationship? Can you promise me any different?
Maan is silent
He truly doesn’t have answers to her questions
He doesn’t know if he can commit so much.
He doesn’t want to make false promises that I will marry you and all.
He hasn’t even had a serious relationship ever.
He doesn’t know if he is capable of it
He doesn’t want to coerce Geet into anything and then hurt her
He feels that she is right, that she deserves better
For future, he knows either he should better himself or forget about her
For now, he can’t promise on anything
G-You don’t have to answer
She mutters slowly sounding defeated
Tabhi Maan’s mom knocks at the door asking him to get ready for the flight
G-I’ll be outside. You get ready
He nods
She knows, maybe this is the last time she will be seeing him
Who toh London jaa raha hai. Ab kya pata mulaqaat hogi yaa nahi
She tiptoes and plants her lips on his giving him a warm deep and beautiful kiss that feels like a current flowing along her whole body
She comes into reality and realizes the kiss was in her imagination
In reality, she is standing like a statue without moving as if her legs have got stuck to the ground
Maan is looking at her with a perplexed expression
Geet drags her feet and pulls herself out of his room trying to hide her cocktail of emotions
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Geet makes her way out of his home
Geet Maan ke ghar se walk karke jaa rahi hoti hai main gate tak, toh dekhti hai Maan aur uske ghar wale car mein baith rahe hain
She silently witnesses Maan drive off in his car
It felt as if he took a part of her with him
She questions herself- Did she let him go?
But what was she supposed to do, kidnap him again?
She thinks kis haq se wo kuch kare.
Tab toh impulse involved tha...
Ab usko pata hi nahi kya involved hai
Maybe feelings…maybe ego
Geet ko pata bhi nahi London mein kahan jaa raha hai, kaunsa rehab
Will he be able to contact her?
Will he even contact her?
Edited by NilzStorywriter - 4 years ago
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