This is not Love- MG (Part 59, Page 149) ||Thread I - Page 86

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Posted: 4 years ago

Geet get to know what maan mom thinking about her and she sending maan London in rehab but he is not school going boy he's business man how can his mom force him more over he is not addict bz in geet home he didn't get any drugs or etc and was behaving normally

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Posted: 4 years ago

Star Commentor Award (Part 44)

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Part 45

G-I am a bad influence??? You had a gun!

Maan wanted to say, ‘well you had a chainsaw’ but doesn’t say anything

G-why weren’t you picking up my calls? I was so worried!

M-I don’t have my phone with me

Geet chup ho gai

She looks down

G- I didn’t know this would happen…I thought you need your family

M- You couldn’t even stand to be with me for even a week,huh?

G-That is so not true! You don’t get me! I…was afraid...I take relationships seriously...I take heartbreaks also seriously. I was saving my heart from a heartbreak…I thought about this logically

She shakes her head

G-This doesn’t make sense...at max we will date and break up after a while...

She sighs

G-You know naa, I am not at all good at moving on

She pauses for a moment for Maan to say something, when he doesn’t,she continues

G-Have you had any long-term relationship? Can you promise me any different?

Maan is silent

He truly doesn’t have answers to her questions

He doesn’t know if he can commit so much.

He doesn’t want to make false promises that I will marry you and all.

He hasn’t even had a serious relationship ever.

He doesn’t know if he is capable of it

He doesn’t want to coerce Geet into anything and then hurt her

He feels that she is right, that she deserves better

For future, he knows either he should better himself or forget about her

For now, he can’t promise on anything

G-You don’t have to answer

She mutters slowly sounding defeated

Tabhi Maan’s mom knocks at the door asking him to get ready for the flight

G-I’ll be outside. You get ready

He nods

She knows, maybe this is the last time she will be seeing him

Who toh London jaa raha hai. Ab kya pata mulaqaat hogi yaa nahi

She tiptoes and plants her lips on his giving him a warm deep and beautiful kiss that feels like a current flowing along her whole body

She comes into reality and realizes the kiss was in her imagination

In reality, she is standing like a statue without moving as if her legs have got stuck to the ground

Maan is looking at her with a perplexed expression

Geet drags her feet and pulls herself out of his room trying to hide her cocktail of emotions

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Geet makes her way out of his home

Geet Maan ke ghar se walk karke jaa rahi hoti hai main gate tak, toh dekhti hai Maan aur uske ghar wale car mein baith rahe hain

She silently witnesses Maan drive off in his car

It felt as if he took a part of her with him

She questions herself- Did she let him go?

But what was she supposed to do, kidnap him again?

She thinks kis haq se wo kuch kare.

Tab toh impulse involved tha...

Ab usko pata hi nahi kya involved hai

Maybe feelings…maybe ego

Geet ko pata bhi nahi London mein kahan jaa raha hai, kaunsa rehab

Will he be able to contact her?

Will he even contact her?

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Geet ko be saath le jao London nein ache se neurologist ko dikhana iska dimak patha nahi kaha se yeh stupid ideas lekar aata hai. She did make a good point though like he has never been in a long term relationship and he knows he cant promise her because even he does not know, but I wonder if will actually make it on the plane and if he does will this distance benefit them.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Well, he does run a company but his business is spread across the world and you will know more about him in coming parts

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: sanum23

Maan told what is going on in his life but he's not under age that his mom order him he running business and famus man she can't force him to go rehab if he not addict

But how geet now help him bz his mom not going to listen her suggestions


Your doubts will get clarified when you know more about Maan in the coming parts

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

thanks for the pm

Congrats to the winners for Part 43


Part 44

Astounding update.... terrifically written

great that Geet decided to go to Maan's place

I do not get good vibes from his mom...

why was Maan staying in the guest room?

is his mom remarried?

so she is stunned seeing the grandeur of the house

the fact that he stayed at her place speaks volumes- Absolutely!

at least allowed in the room

she cannot help but notice how hot he looks

oh so Maan has taken his anger out on the furniture

seems like Geet wanted to impress Maan's mom-galat insaan ko impress karne ki koshish..lol

not surprising that Maan accuses Geet

so his mom is taking him to London and then to rehab

of cos she is upset hearting that he is going to London

liked that she is willing to speak to his mom

can Maan not go to rehab in India- ab India m toh ek toh Geet h (the bad influence), uske upar why London you will know in coming parts

as expected Maan's mom assumes Geet is to blame for Maan's condition

Gosh she thinks Geet is a gold digger

Geet's reaction hearing what his mom thinks is reasonable

does his mom not realise what her actions have done to Maan?

ha ha one has a gun and the other a chainsaw --hahahaha jodi made in weapon shop!

update soon


You will know more about Maan & his mom in coming parts

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: sanum23

Geet get to know what maan mom thinking about her and she sending maan London in rehab but he is not school going boy he's business man how can his mom force him more over he is not addict bz in geet home he didn't get any drugs or etc and was behaving normally


good point...but pyaar dear....Maan loves his mom irrationally

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Posted: 4 years ago

Ohh maan going to London maan geet seperate 😞 geet also correct maan is not serious for her

Now what will happen how they will meet again

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Posted: 4 years ago

Hi Di,

Wow this three updates are so painful and heartbreaking... Geet ki ek stupid mistake keliye dono ko saza mil rahe hai... Geet is really an idiot arre books me humesha solutions nahi mil sakti... Ab bekar me dono ki dil thod liya.... Crook now she's doesn't even recognize the feeling that she's having for Maan is love... Jalli Geet books padne ke jagah tum Maan ki dil pad leti na aisi situation me kabhi dono bhicharne nahi pade.... And Maan's mother... How can she think that Geet is a gold digger and a bad influence... Kis angle se unhe Geet buri lagi.... Ab Maan ki man me kya hai woh toh Maan khud hi jaane..... Now Maan London gaya ab Geet ka kya hal hogi.... Hal-e-dil mera pucho na sanam.... 🥺

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Posted: 4 years ago

So much unknown so many questions very few answers that either can give.

Is this a permanent separation

No forwarding number or address


what’s going yo happen


is destiny going to bring them when they have a better comfort with their own self?


waiting eagerly

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