Purvir OS - darmiyaan part 4 UPDATED on Pg 2

So this is my first trial hope you all like it scope for improvement always welcomed 😊

After Pur gets call from pri

Pur:(tensed) y ain't mukki picking up the call tries hard to contact him and rushes to the hall where she collides with Prakashi

Prakashi: arre kidhar bhaage ja rhi he purvi.

Pur: ma vo bachho k school se Baar Baar phone aa rha he unka aaj annual day he Hume or mukhi ji ko school jaana he par mukki ji humara phone hi nhi utha rhe!

Seeing Pur worried Prakashi tells her to go to school first as Vir maybe busy with some work he will reach on time and the kids need her support, Pur unconvincingly agrees to go

The kids do well though missing their father's presence

After the play

Kids: haathi babbar Sher kyu nhi Aaye ?

Pur: babbar Sher ko koi zaruri kaam tha isiliye vo nhi aa paaye par dekhna Ghar pohonchte hi vo sabse pehle Apne Genda n khargosh ko hug karenge. Kids get delighted and all three went towards the car

Pur in car: humne bachho ko to mana liya par humara mann kyu nhi maan rha kyu aisa lag rha he ki Kuch to Sahi nhi he yeh bechaini kaisi..... She tries to divert her mind but it seemed as if it just stuck up n refused to work leaving her restless

Everyone reaches home (Vir is already there

With bandage on his forehead and yogi taking him to his room when Pur n kids enter)

Pur sees Vir and gets shocked. an unknown fear surrounded her heart stopped beating

Her world shattering down all this was even more painful than the bullet from which she got shot she screamed "mukkhi jiiii!!" And ran towards him and stopped right at his face while the kids hugged Vir tight and started crying Pur too wanted to hug Vir and escape from this horrific world she found crashing onto her but something was there clutching her soul and she couldn't fight it so she looked into vir's eyes to find some solace and Vir exactly did that!

Vir to kids : arre babbar Sher hu main mujhse to Sara gao darre he tum mere liye kyu darr rhe ho or vaise bhi jabtak mere sàath jungle k saare janwar he tabtak mujhe Kuch nhi ho Sakta and looks at Pur as if this filmy dialogue was only meant for his baawri and she too smiles through her teary eyes. Prakashi tells Pur to accompany Vir to their room and tells everyone to clam down and go to their respective rooms.

If you all like it then I will write part 2

It's lovely but if only Pur could hug Vir it would hv been great 😳

Originally posted by: Piyaazzz

So this is my first trial hope you all like it scope for improvement always welcomed 😊

After Pur gets call from pri

Pur:(tensed) y ain't mukki picking up the call tries hard to contact him and rushes to the hall where she collides with Prakashi

Prakashi: arre kidhar bhaage ja rhi he purvi.

Pur: ma vo bachho k school se Baar Baar phone aa rha he unka aaj annual day he Hume or mukhi ji ko school jaana he par mukki ji humara phone hi nhi utha rhe!

Seeing Pur worried Prakashi tells her to go to school first as Vir maybe busy with some work he will reach on time and the kids need her support, Pur unconvincingly agrees to go

The kids do well though missing their father's presence

After the play

Kids: haathi babbar Sher kyu nhi Aaye ?

Pur: babbar Sher ko koi zaruri kaam tha isiliye vo nhi aa paaye par dekhna Ghar pohonchte hi vo sabse pehle Apne Genda n khargosh ko hug karenge. Kids get delighted and all three went towards the car

Pur in car: humne bachho ko to mana liya par humara mann kyu nhi maan rha kyu aisa lag rha he ki Kuch to Sahi nhi he yeh bechaini kaisi..... She tries to divert her mind but it seemed as if it just stuck up n refused to work leaving her restless

Everyone reaches home (Vir is already there

With bandage on his forehead and yogi taking him to his room when Pur n kids enter)

Pur sees Vir and gets shocked. an unknown fear surrounded her heart stopped beating

Her world shattering down all this was even more painful than the bullet from which she got shot she screamed "mukkhi jiiii!!" And ran towards him and stopped right at his face while the kids hugged Vir tight and started crying Pur too wanted to hug Vir and escape from this horrific world she found crashing onto her but something was there clutching her soul and she couldn't fight it so she looked into vir's eyes to find some solace and Vir exactly did that!

Vir to kids : arre babbar Sher hu main mujhse to Sara gao darre he tum mere liye kyu darr rhe ho or vaise bhi jabtak mere sàath jungle k saare janwar he tabtak mujhe Kuch nhi ho Sakta and looks at Pur as if this filmy dialogue was only meant for his baawri and she too smiles through her teary eyes. Prakashi tells Pur to accompany Vir to their room and tells everyone to clam down and go to their respective rooms.

If you all like it then I will write part 2

I have already said in the edt, wonderful!!

Keep going.... please jaldi se next update de do...❤️❤️❤️

Pl update next part its wonderful ❤️

Afcorse I like plz do right second part asap pplz👏👏👏

Part 2

Purvir in their room

Pur is still trembling tears rolling down her eyes

Vir:(lifts her face) k hua ab kyu ro rhi he

Pur:(sobbing) Hume nhi pata

Vir :(makes her sit on the couch ) Ruk me tere liye paani Lata hu

Pur though couldn't see clearly because of tears filling her eyes holds his hand and stops him

Pur: rukiye....

Vir knees down and asks softly "bol"

Pur cups vir's face "Hume subah se hi ajeeb lag rha tha , sab ne Hume samjhane ki koshish ki par pata nhi kyu humara Dil maanne ko tayaarr nhi tha (as Pur speaks her voice becomes more and more restless meanwhile Vir was just listening to his baawri patiently) or jab humne aapko iss haalat me dekha to..hh aisa laga andar Kuch toot gya sab Kuch bikhra bikhra SA lag rha tha chaaro taraf Andhera siwaye Aapke. Hume samajh nhi aa rha tha ki hum kya kare (at this point she is even finding it difficult to speak as her voice doesn't come out) aapka haal puche ya khud ko sambhale humari to Jaise saans ki Ruk.... Shhhhhh! Bas Kar baawri Vir places his finger on pur's lips he was so moved by her words that tears rolled down his cheeks too finding their place between pur's fingers both were lost in each other vir's finger slid down pur's lips to cup her face and he kissed her forehead. He was as gentle with her as the sepals which protect the petals of the flower. Both closed their eyes,It was a small peck but to them it seemed time had stopped when his tears meet hers. The kiss ended with an eyelock wherein they could only sense warmth of each other giving them eternal peace...

*Purvir hug in part 3

Wow...it's superb... please continue🤗

Originally posted by: Piyaazzz

So this is my first trial hope you all like it scope for improvement always welcomed 😊

After Pur gets call from pri

Pur:(tensed) y ain't mukki picking up the call tries hard to contact him and rushes to the hall where she collides with Prakashi

Prakashi: arre kidhar bhaage ja rhi he purvi.

Pur: ma vo bachho k school se Baar Baar phone aa rha he unka aaj annual day he Hume or mukhi ji ko school jaana he par mukki ji humara phone hi nhi utha rhe!

Seeing Pur worried Prakashi tells her to go to school first as Vir maybe busy with some work he will reach on time and the kids need her support, Pur unconvincingly agrees to go

The kids do well though missing their father's presence

After the play

Kids: haathi babbar Sher kyu nhi Aaye ?

Pur: babbar Sher ko koi zaruri kaam tha isiliye vo nhi aa paaye par dekhna Ghar pohonchte hi vo sabse pehle Apne Genda n khargosh ko hug karenge. Kids get delighted and all three went towards the car

Pur in car: humne bachho ko to mana liya par humara mann kyu nhi maan rha kyu aisa lag rha he ki Kuch to Sahi nhi he yeh bechaini kaisi..... She tries to divert her mind but it seemed as if it just stuck up n refused to work leaving her restless

Everyone reaches home (Vir is already there

With bandage on his forehead and yogi taking him to his room when Pur n kids enter)

Pur sees Vir and gets shocked. an unknown fear surrounded her heart stopped beating

Her world shattering down all this was even more painful than the bullet from which she got shot she screamed "mukkhi jiiii!!" And ran towards him and stopped right at his face while the kids hugged Vir tight and started crying Pur too wanted to hug Vir and escape from this horrific world she found crashing onto her but something was there clutching her soul and she couldn't fight it so she looked into vir's eyes to find some solace and Vir exactly did that!

Vir to kids : arre babbar Sher hu main mujhse to Sara gao darre he tum mere liye kyu darr rhe ho or vaise bhi jabtak mere sàath jungle k saare janwar he tabtak mujhe Kuch nhi ho Sakta and looks at Pur as if this filmy dialogue was only meant for his baawri and she too smiles through her teary eyes. Prakashi tells Pur to accompany Vir to their room and tells everyone to clam down and go to their respective rooms.

If you all like it then I will write part 2

It’s great I want this scene in the accident track 👍

So we are getting hug in part 3☺️☺️☺️

Badiya likha hai piya👌👌👌❤❤❤

Oooooo Piyaaaaaaa....chura liya tumne mera jiyaaaaaaa!!

So well written! Keep going!❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️😍