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Posted: 4 years ago

Star Commentor Award (Part 26)

Winner: khwaishfan ⭐️

Runner-ups: ferdouz

SpecialMention: sanum23

EarlyBirdAward (For readers having first 3 comments): Alamelu,sanum23, Umadevi97

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Part 27

Geet goes to Maan’s house to apologize... & maybe say ki she likes him coz negating things isn't helping her

She realizes yahan toh party chal rahi hai

She starts looking for Maan

After a good search and asking around all half-drunk half high people, she finally gets to Maan

She does find Maan, but she finds him snogging a girl in a dimly lit room

She freezes. As if the time has stopped for her

She wants to shake him, thrash him

But doesn't do anything

She walks out of the room

She thinks if Maan likes this girl then who is she to stop him?

Maybe it’s a one-night stand, who is she to interfere in his life?

It’s not like the girl is raping him...he also wants it

It would have been so much better to smack him and leave grandly. It will be much easier to ignore Maan in her mind then

But the thing is, she doesn't want to leave Maan

She has other plans

She will deal with this head on. But not while Maan is high

She goes back seeing the other girl coming out

She gets inside the room with Maan and locks the door

G- What the hell are you doing huh! You are messing up with your life? Are you a teenager to act so irresponsibly? I know you are better than this, Maan

She checks his pulse rate and examines him ki drugs li kaunsi hai...yaa is he only drunk

Uss hisaab se jo karna hai karegi

She stays locked up with him in the room till he sobers up a little

Geet ko samajh nahi aa raha thik se, as uske paas equipments nahi hai abhi...but koi ecstasy inducing drug sa hi lag raha hai

Geet ko toh itna gussa aa raha hai ki kya bole

Bachcha hai nahi ye. He seemed like a suljha hua banda. Arre pehli baar uske dad ko coldly threaten kiya tha iss hi bande ne. Isse kya ho gaya?

But she realizes that he needs help, and he needs help now and there is nobody in his life to help him apart from her

And nobody realized what’s going on in his life coz he is so closed of a person

She remembers the therapy she went for few weeks back-

She had given her blood samples ki uske mein kuch toh locha hai...why so much feels for that jerk

Geet ne therapy mein ye ho raha hai wo ho raha hai kaha

Doctor ne kaha ki....have you considered it’s just love?

Geet is like no...

G-My blood sample has abnormal amount of estrogen & pheromones

Doc-Yup, as I said love. Totally normal. You guys should date

Geet uthke chali gai ki doctor hi pagal hai

Abhi room mein baithe Maan ke saath Geet ko lag raha hai ki doctor thik thi.

She loves him and can’t see him in pain

But Maan ko nahi batana hai, faltu mein mazaak udayega

This is bound to end up in a heartbreak, aur karo pheromones ka overflow!

Geet thinks- my stupid lymphatic system!

She thinks ki batake waise bhi kya fayda hoga Maan ko...as if he feels the same...warna he wouldn’t have been eating up that girl's face today

Kaunsa wo mujse pyaar karta hai

Geet sochti hai, mujhe toh kabhi aise kiss nahi kia

On the other hand, thinks...eww gross ...sloppy

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When Maan sobers up a little and all-party people go, then Geet drags him

G-You are moving with me. Yahan bilkul nahi rahoge tum! This wicked company of yours is ruining everything

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Geet didn't mu him she love him and want save him from bad company but don't want to confess her love either

She thinks maan mazak banay ga if he get to know sbout her feelings

She also want to know what wrong happened in his life that he doing like this before he was not like this when he threatened her dad

She taking him with her waiting fr maan reaction

Edited by sanum23 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Congratulations To All Winners


Of Part 25


Well Done !!!!!


Part 26


Fascinating and Flamboyant


Maan seems to have a weak persona

it almost seems like he needs someone with him all the time

he needs stability in his life .

but Maan also needs some kind of confidence that he can be without

these friends that drinks and use drugs

for Maan been with a woman is not just passing time but its more

of he wanting to be accepted and liked by someone

Geet's parents want her to have someone in her life and she goes

and meet a doctor too and both have a pleasant evening

however Geet ignored Maan will he seemed jealous and hurt also disappointed too

oh Geet should interrupt Maan's plan of spending his time with this lady

Maan needs someone to pamper and care for him

it almost seem like he is alone but where is his mother


Well...i dont think Maan has weak persona...you will know why I am saying that...but yes he has abandonment issues. You are right that he needs stability in his life and

or Maan been with a woman is not just passing time but its more

of he wanting to be accepted and liked by someone

You are also right that he is alone

But maybe he is alone because of his mother only

Maybe the one person he valued the most has caused him abandonment issues and now he doesnt care what happens to him and he has no directionless

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 26

Welcome back di .... we missed you !! 🤗

Uh oh , geet’s parents are trying to arrange her marriage 😕 yikes !!!

& of course maan had to see them on their date 😔

But the worst part was that she ignored him ....... I know she is trying to suppress her feelings but that was hurtful 😒

Glad that she realizes & wants to apologize but what she finds is surprising !! 😲

As for the abandonment issues ...., are you referring to his mom???

Curious got more ....

thank you for pm & update

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Part 27

Wow back to back updates -thank you 🤗

Superb update !!! 👍🏼👍🏼

Glad that even though geet was suprised & disturbed with maan’s situation she back-tracked & came back 👍🏼

Shocked 😲 that she saw a therapist about her feelings for maan

Delighted that she realizes she is in love with him ...... time for a happy dance !!! 🥳

But our silly gal will not confess her feelings due to fear of ridicule & heartbreak 😕

....,,, she doesn’t realize that this is the cure for maan’s ailments

........ suprised that our lady doctor cannot make the right diagnosis 😉😆😆

I am super happy that geet is taken charge of the situation & forcing maan to live with her ...,. He needs to be steered in the right direction with love & guidance . 💕

Eagerly awaiting next update

Thank you for pm & update

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Posted: 4 years ago

She is taking him to her house,

She doesn't want him to be in bad company,wants to take care of him,he too is lonely, looking forward to further....

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 27

Woho, yeah now we're talking.... 😳 so Geet is taking the needed steps for Maan and herself... Nice I really don't want them ending up in a heartbreak... Waiting to see more... 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

Omg 🤣 yeh Geet is a specimen only 😄I loved the update.

She does a blood test to see if there is a locha 🤭😋

Finally she realizes she is in love with Maan.

Thank you learnt few new medical terms 😁

Yeh dono ka kuch nahi ho sakta 🤷

They will care for each other but will not confess the truth 🤦🏼‍♀️

She has already decided to take Maan along with her.

Waiting for Maans reaction.

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Posted: 4 years ago

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great update

geet not able to leave maan in this condition n with those wrong people

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Posted: 4 years ago

hi.... Nilanjana.... how are you?

appreciate the pm and update!

Hearty congrats to the runner ups.....


Part 27

Spectacular update.... awesomely written

Can understand Geet's reaction

her thoughts are reasonable

liked her determination to handle things head on

at least she stayed and confronted Maan

so she locked them in the room

did Maan take drugs...

great that she realised that Maan needs help and is lonely

Ha ha Geet is unique.... she took blood test as she things something is wrong

well the doc hit the nail on the block.... its love

glad she acknowledged that she loves Maan

well she does think too much

she wonders what Maan feels for her

loved that she told Maan he will stay with her from now onwards

adore her care for Maan

update soon

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