Tere bin jee naa paaunga,st 6 on pg 36,teaser on 39,23/1 - Page 3

Fantastic and Shocking Prologue

Interesting prologue ....please do update soon

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Interesting take

Really nice prologue.

Looking forward to read the rest.

SHOT 1

Everyone got shocked hearing the doctor and Raman said-kya??ishita kabhi maa nahi ban payegi??

Doctor nodded and said-i am so sorry to say this,Mr bhalla,but aapki biwi kabhi maa nahi ban payegi.woh conceive toh kar sakti hai but pregnancy hold nahi kar sakti.woh apna term kabhi complete nahi kar payengi,issliye woh kabhi bachche ko janm nahi de payengi.she said blankly making Raman shattered while his parent too got shocked.

Toshiji-hey matarani,yeh kis gunaah ki saza di hai tumne mere puttar ko.ab kya hoga mere puttar ka,she said dramatically.

Mr bhalla-i think we should think about Ishita first.usse yeh news dena,that she lost her child and will never be able to become a mother,its not going to be easy.

Raman look at him trying to observe his words and realised that it will be really tough to tell this truth to ishita.

Raman-haan papa,u r right.itni badi news,kaise dunga main Ishita ko,woh toh tut hi jayegi.kab se sapna dekh rahi hai ek bachche ka.kab se intezaar kar rahi hai uske aane ka,usse itna bada sach kaise bataunga.

Doc-i know it's tough but u have to do this .u have to tell this to Mrs bhalla.

Raman-pata nahi kaise react karegi ,woh toh tut hi jayegi iss khabar se,main kaise sambhalunga usse,he said getting worried when nurse came and said-doc,Mrs bhalla ko hosh aa gaya hai aur woh apne husband ko puch rahin hai.

Doctor look at Raman and said-ab sab aapke haath mein hai ,Mr bhalla.ab aapko sochna hai ki Mrs bhalla ko yeh news kaise deni hai.

Raman nodded while he was uncertain about her reaction and was getting worried when Mr bhalla said-dont worry ,raman.jaise bhagwaan ji ne yeh dukh diya hai wahin iss dukh se hum sabko baahar layegi.

Raman look at his father and said-i am very scared,papa.

Mr bhalla hugged Raman tight and said-i know,yeh dukh bahut bada hai,apna bachcha kho dena aur upar se yeh news ki kabhi tum logon ka bachcha nahi hoga,it's not easy to digest .he was saying when toshiji said-ishita ko bachcha nahi ho sakta,mere puttar mein koi kharabi nahi hai.toh yeh mat kahiye ki iska bachcha nahi ho sakta.

Mr bhalla look at toshiji and said-yeh kya keh rahin hoon,toshiji.raman aur Ishita ek dusre se alag hai kya.

Toshiji-main yeh sab nahi jaanti ,bas itna kahungi ki mere puttar ko bachcha ho sakta hai aur jarur hoga.

Raman-maa,bas karo .yeh koi waqt nahi hai inn sab baaton ka ,pehle mujhe Ishita ko sambhalna hai.

Mr bhalla-haan Raman,abhi tu sirf ishita ke baare mein soch,baaki baatein ghar par hongi .har baat yahan nahi ho sakti .toshiji ghar chaliye.he said and toshiji just nodded.

Mr bhalla-puttar,hum ghar chalte hai.tu ishita ko le kar ghar aa jaldi se.he said and Raman nodded.

Mr and Mrs bhalla went out of the hospital while raman went to meet ishita.

Raman closed his eyes and shut it tightly to wipe his unshed tears and finally entered the room after composing himself.

He entered the room and saw ishita looking at the door waiting for him.she smiled fully seeing him while he too smiled meekly .

He walked to her and said-kaisi ho??

Ishita-dard ho raha hai,kya hua tha mujhe??

Raman -nothing much,everything is fine,he said looking away .

Ishita-phir bhi ,kuch toh hua hoga.main suddenly faint ho gayi aur ab yeh dard.bataiye naa Raman,kya hua tha??

Raman-kuch nahi,jaan.i think tumhe meri pampering chahiye,tabhi tum yun bimaar pad gayi.haan sahi bhi hai,these days I am not giving u time properly .he said trying to ease the situation.

Ishita-stop joking,boliye naa,kya hua tha??

Raman-kuch nahi,thoda bp low ho gaya tha aur kuch harmonal problem tha,toh injection diya hai tumhe,wahin dard kar raha hoga.

Ishita-ohh ok,I thought koi good news hai.she said smiling while his face fell hearing her.

She rested her head on his chest and said-jaan,it has been three years since our marriage,hamari good news kyun nahi aa rahi.

Raman caressed her hair and said-ab yeh main kaise bata sakta hoon,naa main doctor hoon aur naa bhagwaan.

Ishita-mere bhagwaan toh aap hi ho,u know pati parmeshwar.achcha jaan,do u think hume test karwa lena chahiye.she said making patterns on his chest.

Raman-for what,bachcha??

Ishita-ki hume itna time kyun lag raha hai,matlab why I am not conceiving.

Raman-hota hoga kuch, lagta hoga time .why u r being impateint.

Ishita-impatient??it has been three years,simmi aur miku ki shaadi hamari shaadi ke baad hui and they already have kids,hamare bachche kab honge.

Raman-ho jayenge,stop thinking about it .and let's go home,u know I don't like this smell.

Ishita-haan,ghar chaliye.waise bhi it's late.khana bhi banana hai.

Raman-dont worry about food,neelu bana legi.tum aaj sirf rest karogi.sabka itna dhyaan deti ho ki apna khayal rakhna bhool jaati ho.issliye aaj tum sirf apna khayal rakhogi.

Ishita-aaj bahut pyaar aa raha hai.

Raman-woh toh hamesha hi aata hai,aakhir tu meri jaan joh hai.

Ishita-toh aaj aap rakhiye mera dhyaan,aaj office mat jaiye naa.

Raman-as u say,aaj office nahi jaaunga.

Ishita-wow ,itni jaldi maan gaye.mere workaholic pati aaj office nahi jayenge,kaise mere bhagya jag gaye aaj.main marne wali toh nahi hoon naa.

Raman-shut up ,kya bakwaas kar rahin ho.he said while she laughed and said-ghabraiye mat,itni jaldi aapka peecha nahi chodungi .churail hoon main ,churail.joh ek baar peeche lag jaaye toh saat janam tak peecha nahi chodti.

Raman hugged her tight and said-main chahta bhi nahi ki tu mera peecha chode,tu jaanti hai naa,tere bin nahi jee paaunga.kitni bhi kami ho zindagi mein,koi bhi kami ho zindagi mein,agar tu saath hai toh sab hai aur agar tu nahi,toh kuch bhi nahi.he said and pecked her temple softly while she closed her eyes feeling his soft touch.

Ishita-pata nahi kyun aisa lag raha hai ki Raman kuch chupa rahen hai mujhse.she thought closing her eyes while Raman thought-i know I am lying ,jaan.but kya karun,I don't know how u r going to react hearing the truth,tumhe khone ki himmat nahi hai mujhme.tumhe sach bataunga ,aur bahut jaldi bataunga,but now,I had to lie,sorry jaan.he thought and hide her tightly in his arms.

That's all for now,enjoy.

Emotional story continue soon

Starting mein itni tragedy

Ab pta nhi aage kia hoga

Very emotional and interesting update

Poor ishita

Eagerly waiting for next update plzzzz soon plzzz update soon

Awesome update di

Toshiji is behaving like a typical MIL🙄😑

Raman was just worried about ishita🥺

He just couldn’t muster the courage to tell her the truth 😣😢

But ishita knows him well......she can feel his lies😭

Lets see how he will tell her the truth

Ty 4 d pm too

Fabulous start di

Totally loved it so much

Doc informs bhallas about ishu can't become mother again. Toshiji is behaving like a typical Mother-in-law. Glad that mr.bhalla and raman is with ishu. Raman was just worried about ishita. He couldn’t have the courage to tell her the truth. Ishra conversation was nice. She is desperate to become mother. But ishita knows him well......she can feel his lies also. Hope some miracle should happen.

Thanx for the pm

Updt soon