Main tujhme apni jaan rakh doon,st 5 on pg 28,teaser on 31,11/1 - Page 3

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Congrats on the new story dear๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

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Interesting prologue๐Ÿ‘๐ŸผUpdate soon

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Ishita-what??yeh kya keh rahen hai aap , Raman??

Raman cried and said-yahin sach hai,ishita.shagun ne mujh par apni bachchi ke rape ka ilzaam lagaya hai.ashok sir itne gusse mein the,hona bhi chahiye .itna khauffnaak ilzaam hai yeh,sab mujhe aisi disgusting nazaron se dekh rahen the,ki main kya kahun.khud se nafrat ho rahi thi.he said and cried bitterly.

Ishita hugged him tight to condole him while he was just crying bitterly.

Raman-mujhe job se nikaal diya,police station le gaye,puch taach hui aur phir jab mihir mere bail papers laaya,tab meri bail hui.bail bhi bahut mushkil se hui.choti bachchi ka case hai naa,itna ghatiya ilzaam hai ki mujhe suffocation hone lagi hai.khud se nazarein tak nahi mila paa raha hoon.

Ishita-toh itna bada kadam uthane ka sochenge.mujhe akela chod kar jaane ka sochenge.she said looking at him with accused eyes .

Raman-i am sorry,main darr gaya tha,ki kahin tum bhi mujhe galat naa samjho.

Ishita-main galat samjhungi,really raman.aapko yeh lagaa ki main aapko galat samjhungi .aap jaante nahi hai apni biwi ko,mere liye mere raman hi sab kuch hai,aur mujhe pura vishwas hai apne raman par.itni ghatiya harkat aap kar hi nahi sakte,karna toh bahut dur hai,aap soch bhi nahi sakte aisa kuch.aap kisi aurat ko bhi galat nazaron se nahi dekhte toh kisi bachchi ke saath aisa karna,main soch bhi nahi sakti.

Raman-i am sorry,main bahut darr gaya tha,sabko nazarein,I couldn't take it.

Ishita-achcha chodiye yeh sab,mujhe yeh bataiye ki ria ne kuch nahi kaha,usne Ashok sir ko nahi bataya ki aapne kuch nahi kiya hai.

Raman-yahin toh baat hai,woh bachchi hosh mein nahi hai .coma mein chali gayi hai.

Ishita-kya,coma mein,but kaise??

Raman-mujhe jyada jaankari nahi hai,I think uske saath sach mein galat hua hai ,maine nahi kiya but kisi ne kiya hai .

Ishita-ohh phir??

Raman-ashok sir kal baahar kahin gaye the,jab main unke ghar gaya tha toh bas shagun thi,she tried to seduce me aur main usse push karke baahar aa gaya gusse mein.mere mansion mein aane aur baahar jaane ki video recording hai,usse dikha kar shagun mujh par ilzaam lagaa rahi hai.

Ishita-iska matlab ria ke saath sach much galat hua hai,uss bachchi ke saath kisi ne jabardasti ki hai aur shayad shagun jaanti hai ki woh kaun hai,taabhi aapko phansa rahi hai,uss ek insaan ko bachane ke liye .she said and Raman look at her.

Raman-haan,ho sakta hai.yeh toh maine socha hi nahi,soch raha tha ki shagun mujhse badla le rahi hai .

Ishita-nahi Raman,woh uss bachchi ke gunahgar ko bhi bacha rahi hai ,joh bahut galat hai.hum aisa hone nahi de sakte,we have to do something.

Raman-haan,sahi kaha tumne.hum ria ke gunahgaar ko bachne nahi denge.we have to punish him,uss choti si bachchi ke saath itna bura koi kaise kar sakta hai.ashok sir itna ro rahen the,unhe itni buri haalat mein kabhi nahi dekha maine.

Ishita-unki takleef samajh sakti hoon main,unki bachchi ke saath itna galat ho gaya,aur shagun bacha rahi hai uss insaan ko,kaisi maa hai.koi apni beti ke saath aisa kaise kar sakta hai??

Raman-ria shagun ki asli beti nahi hai,woh Ashok sir ki pehli biwi ki beti hai .shagun ne toh Ashok sir se sirf paison ke liye shaadi ki hai,usse toh ria pasand bhi nahi thi.itni naapasand nahi hogi,ki uska rape karwa de,but she don't like ria a bit.jab new year ki party mein shagun aur ria aayi thi,maine dekha tha how badly she was behaving with ria,jab ki woh bachchi shagun mein apni maa dhoondhti hai.

Ishita-thats really sad.aapko pata hai iss samay ria ki condition kya hai??

Raman nodded in no and said-tumhe lagta hai sir mujhe apni bachchi ke aas paas bhi phatakne denge.

Ishita-nahi denge,but we need to know about ria.uski tabiyat kaisi hai,uske thik hone ke kitne chances hai,we need to know.

Raman-haan pata toh karna padega,but kaise pata karenge.

Ishita-let me think of something ,pehle aap yeh bataiye,aapne kuch khaya hai subah se yaa bas,she was saying when he said-main arrest ho gaya tha, interrogation hua mera.kaun khana puchega mujhe??

Ishita cupped his face and said-aap baitho main chai aur snacks laati hoon.aur main hamesha aapke saath hoon.kabhi bhi khud ko akela mat samajhiyega.

Raman hide his face in her arms and said-tum saath ho tabhi toh aaj bach gaya,warna itni insult ke baad sirf suicide hi ek raasta dikh raha tha.

Ishita-uske baare mein toh sochiye bhi mat,kyunki aapko sirf apne liye nahi,balki ria ke liye bhi ladhna hai,shagun naa sirf aapke saath galat kar rahi hai,balki usne ria ke saath bhi bahut galat kiya hai .hum usse jeetne nahi de sakte,we have to fight for u and ria.hum ladhenge aur jeetenge bhi.

Raman-agar woh log mujhe phir arrest karke le gaye toh??

Ishita-main wapas laaungi aapko,don't worry raman.main aapka saath nahi chodungi .I will prove u innocent.kyunki mujhe bharosha hai apne pati par aur mere iss bharoshe ko main haarne nahi dungi .

Raman look at her and said-i love u ishita,tumhara bharosha mujhe jeene ki raah dikhata hai,mujhe vishwas dilata hai ki kabhi kuch galat nahi hoga.

Ishita-aur agar hua bhi toh hum mil kar usse thik kar lenge .main chai laati hoon.

Raman-main mihir ko phone karke pata lagane ki koshish karta hoon ki ria kaisi hai .

Ishita-thik hai,main jaa rahin hoon kitchen mein,aap koi galat kaam nahi karenge,khud ko hurt karne ke baare mein dobara nahi sochenge.bas itna yaad rakhiye,ki koi hai jiski saansein aur zindagi aapse judi hai.aur khudkushi karke aap sirf shagun ko jeetange,joh nahi hona chahiye.uss aurat ko jeetna nahi chahiye.she needs to be behind the bars for trying to safeguard such people.usse saza milni chahiye,aur woh kaam hum mil kar karenge.promise me ki aap mera saath nahi chodenge.she said forwarding her hand.

Raman hold her hand and said-kabhi nahi chodunga,kabhi bhi nahi.he said smiling and both hugged each other tight determined to fight and win against shagun together.

That's all for now,enjoy.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Fabulous update di

Loved how ishita is standing beside raman like a true soulmate ๐Ÿ’•

This shagun is disgusting ๐Ÿ˜ค๐Ÿ˜ค

She is doing this cheap thing just to trap raman๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก

Ishita is his strongest support โฃ๏ธ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป

Loved her determination ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿป

Lets see how ishra will win against shagun

Ty 4 d pm too

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Posted: 3 years ago

Awesome update

Loved it

Update soon

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Posted: 3 years ago

Interesting start di

Totally loved it so much

Loved the way how ishita is standing beside raman like a perfect soulmate. Shagun is disgusting. She done this cheap thing to trap raman. So, ria is not biological daughter of shagun. She is ashok daughter. Now Ishu is raman's strongest support system. Loved her determination. In all this mess, she doesn't share the good news of their life.

Thanx for the pm

Updt soon

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Posted: 3 years ago

Nice start

Interesting concept 

Wht was the good news though 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Awesome chappy Di 

Disgusting shagun

Update soon Di 

Thanks for Pm Di 

Sorry for the late reply Di 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Awesome update 

Shagun is such a disgusting person 

How can a mother do this

Shagun is ria step mother

Hope ria get well soon

Nd ishra find out truth 

Eagerly waiting for next part 

Plz continue soon 

Nd thanks for pm

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Posted: 3 years ago

Wow New story n love the 1st part hope Raman will proven innocent as ishita is always with him n hate this shagun n hope sab theek ho jaye soon