FIGHT AGAINST DESTINY-PreRishFF Thrd2 Part 27 Pg-122 Updt. 24th May - Page 78

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Posted: 5 years ago

I don't know about being a great writer on this forum, I just continue the story from the episodes after which I feel I have lost the connect. I feel you are amazing with bringing emotions out from the characters, and I personally connect with that a lot. I had the same reason to write. Lost connection with the show jab Bajaj phase 1 end hua tha.

But you you have created a whole new story with amazing characters and a great backstory for each and every one of them. CVs left so many loose ends in the story hid past, his reason for his enimity with Basus (the most interesting part of the track) they wasted it all. Isliye I made an effort to create his own past that lead to Rishabh being a ruthless Bajaj.

Being completely honest I think Prerna character was best developed during the Bajaj phase only but the makers completely ruined it with their stupidity. During Bajaj phase she was a fighter but now I don't know what she is but the way you have developed her is amazing. Can't agree more with you here. She began as a person who stood for herself against mighty Bajaj but then God knows what happened and they convererted everything into a they only know what..🤔

I have also seen some subtle hints in the update regarding the upcoming story and if it is what it is then it will be a bomb so waiting for them.smiley20smiley2

Reallly... this intrigues me a lot. If you have time, I love to know what hints did you catch and where according to you we are headed. Who knows two of us are on absolutely different tracks and you might help me with something more interesting. I am sure the writer in you must have imagined a few things already. You could PM me if you would like to share.. no force though... thank you!

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Posted: 5 years ago
ofc tum toh dogi kaise 🤷‍♀️
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Sunn_shine

Apun red zone mein hai.. aur train ghar jane ke liye hai bus/bahar jane nahi . Yaha cab nahi milta abhi. Cycle hai nahi..motorbikr ke liye I am too short 🙈. Pair nahi jate ground tak.. isliye walking walking..

hum red zone mein nahi hai but humko red zone mein dikhate hai 🤪
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

ofc tum toh dogi kaise 🤷‍♀️

Wahi na.. courier service bhi band.. main kaise deta pareshani re bhaya.. 😭

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

hum red zone mein nahi hai but humko red zone mein dikhate hai 🤪

Ye to bhaut zyada wali nainsafi hai... rules bhi red zone wale hain hai ya bas on paper red bana diya??

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Sunn_shine

Ye to bhaut zyada wali nainsafi hai... rules bhi red zone wale hain hai ya bas on paper red bana diya??

kya kare ward itna bada hai pincode bhi, so kar diya. Issi liye buss Essentials are getting delivered buss.
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Sunn_shine

Wahi na.. courier service bhi band.. main kaise deta pareshani re bhaya.. 😭

keep quiet it's not funny. 😡 though the comeback was nice. 😡
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Posted: 5 years ago

It was such a lovely update.

Prerna's friendship with Tanvi was so good❤️ It's so lively and refreshing.

Menka looks nice. But still I can't bring to like her😒

Missed RB and Kukki so much...

It's such an amazing story and you are an awesome writer❤️ loving every bit of it😳

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Posted: 5 years ago

Nice update sunshine....

Waiting for rb kuki nd prerna meeting....

Nd prerna why she is so scared to face rb....


Waiting for next please update soon...

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Sunn_shine

hey nice to hear your back & ok. loved the update. Thank you sooo much, glad you liked it

I'm so glad that all characters will be interacting with each other more. Ohh yess they will be interacting lot more and quite often :) I hope I am able to keep it readable.

loved Tanvi & Prerna's meet. I actually gambled with this one. Wasn't sure how it'd be received. I am happy that it worked. Yeyyyyy..

can't wait for P & RB to meet now. I can't wait to continue with the update and write it either.

hopefully Prerna will tell them soon about her marriage & miscarriage, it'll be difficult but she needs to if she wants her family back. She has to and she will. I wanted to dedicate a chapter to establish her as Prerna with no connection to Bajajs, just as an individual. I have always missed Prerna with an identity and existence (it doesn't have to be grand) of her own in the show. So making an effort.. now I feel ready to finally explore PreRish in this story after so long. Thank you for being a part of this journey since the beginning :)

please update sooner.

I will try..

Thank you 🤗

i agree with all your comments especially the part about Prerna. it's a shame she's always been shafted in favour of the male leads...oh well. at least your Prerna is developing & progressing in terms of character development. can't wait to read more & looking forward to prerish moments.

Edited by oa2019 - 5 years ago

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