SS 69 (I found SS 68 back in the basement :p) - Page 10

Thanks nisha madam🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻 Superb

Iam also reading this story for second time

Iam in thread 35🙈🙈🙈

II!!! Tell him you miss him 🤦🏻‍♀️ But No, how can you ever tell him that!

Adolescent Agony

“Ghar peinna saara khaana kiwen banaya?” Ranjan growled

“they wanted to go out for pizza”

“Bas jee Dilliich vi ghar khaanakhaan di lode nahi haigi”

II fixed herself a plate of rotisand paneer.

The troop returned Sahana ran upto R&B and screamed to be picked up

“Puttar ghar pe khaana bana chuki hai”

“the boys were upset I didn’t bringthem with me to Sam’s”

“TO? MAIN lekar gaya seega”Ranjan looked at the boys sternly

“U know, they miss me”

“Hore? Yeh miss nahi karti tujhekadi plan banayi” he scoffed

II giggled briefly

“Nivi did u wash ur hair afterthe pool party? U slept until 3 and went off to eat pizza” II felt her hair

“I don’t want o wash now Ammaa..pleez”

Sahana was playing hide and seekas the boys circled around R&B

The dogs patiently sat under thetable for roti crumbs

“Can I talk to u pleez” R&Bsaid quietly

“Not right now, I have to cleanup” she mumbled

“Jaa puttar, Gudiya mainnu de,” Ranjan reached

Sahana leaped out of his arms toDadu’s

“Hoye shabaash”

“OSHABASH” Ved repeated

“Aaaho” Ranjan laughed

“Amma Daddy gave me permission togo to Maldives” Nivi said haltingly

“EPPO?” Ii was shocked

“For Dusshera break” Nivi saidmore confidently

II followed him up

“What?”

“Really?”

“I mean, you have all theparenting squared away, I have to take care of stuff downstairs

“Enough II” he said bitingly

“what do want me to say?” “She bypasses me and asks you everything, you approve and I hear from her about it”

“I am trying something different with her II” he begged exasperated

“does it remotely include the mother?”

“U need to quit that jealous rant”

“I am not ranting, I am just shocked the kids rely on the parent that’s never here”

“Oh great pot shot”

“Its NOT… THINK about it da, I spend 24 days a month, everything consequential happens in the other 7”

“We HAVE TO change that” he nodded sitting down with a beer

“U don’t want dinner?” she sulked

He grinned

“Phew… I thot u wont care”

“Get lost” she cursed

“U carry on with Nivi. She hates the sight of me, bring her up and tell her she has to wash her hair and see herdo it” II was tearful

“She is just getting under your skin, will you let me handle it? PLEASE?”

“I am SICK of her anger, defiance and misbehavior”

“NO. I AM NOT WEAK. I don’t need you” she wiped tears hastily

“Who said anything about weak?”he stood up angrily

“You are being condescending and acting like a know it all”

“I AM TRYING TO HELP” he warned

“U shouldn’t, I want to see how far she pushes me”

“Really? II?” he approached

“YES”

“Then don’t stay up all night worrying, and calling me about it”

“Oh… so u don’t want to even hear my voice?”

“I DON’T if u want to manage heron your own”

“Uve made it easy, just tell me when I can call and for what”

“Stop it”

“We are saddled with the kids, Iam too tired to leave you, you love Paris too much to leave me and raise your kids in Delhi” she spat

He leaned on the wall and drank his beer, hand tucked in his pocket

“By lumping Nivi and me as a team and hating on us is not going to help”

“Ive tried the opposite that doesn’t work either, newsflash for u”

“Don’t pamper her”

“Gee thanks. I didn’t know”

“Cut out the sarcasm”

“I am not afraid of her, I will be tough, I told Vanduka I am sending her over there”

“To LIVE?” he was horrified

“YES” II nodded

“U are OK if she runs away?”

Ii froze

“Oh so YOU are teaching her?”

“U ARE INSANE” he grit his teeth

Nisha madam i don’t want to see them fighting

It hurts to see their fights

Nivi should listen to her mom

I know its story but still your writing makes me feel real

Again superb writing 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻

Omg but it's true, half the fights between parents happen due to kids. And the travails of raising a teen, uff less said the best , in my house too daily drama😐😐

This is atrocious. I am with II this this time. It's really not fair that the kids don't see the effort put in by their mother. I don't understand teenagers. I was one too. No one can go to this extent. This is pure haughtiness. II deserves to be obeyed. It's not like she is being authoritative. She needs to be understood. The father daughter duo cannot always say it's easy for us to communicate rather than with u! Sorry?! Even the youngest doesn't want to attach to the mother! Where is this going???

II is not fierce anymore. She seems tired and worn out. She needs some tlc too. The guy comes for 15 days a month Max and owns up every achievement as his doesn't work. Seeking permission from o e parent is okay..not to the extent where that same pattern is putting their spouse to shame in front of the kids. Not happening!

Originally posted by: Ashu25

This is atrocious. I am with II this this time. It's really not fair that the kids don't see the effort put in by their mother. I don't understand teenagers. I was one too. No one can go to this extent. This is pure haughtiness. II deserves to be obeyed. It's not like she is being authoritative. She needs to be understood. The father daughter duo cannot always say it's easy for us to communicate rather than with u! Sorry?! Even the youngest doesn't want to attach to the mother! Where is this going???

II is not fierce anymore. She seems tired and worn out. She needs some tlc too. The guy comes for 15 days a month Max and owns up every achievement as his doesn't work. Seeking permission from o e parent is okay..not to the extent where that same pattern is putting their spouse to shame in front of the kids. Not happening!

Ashi you are right!

We all have been there where we know one person permits us and hence we approach them. But not at the cost of making the other cry or feel like they have no authority!

Nisha the family and dude must realize how much II does in a day, sometimes people forget it. Do something to at least make Nivi and dude realize/ remember/ refresh their memories and II needs some TLC best send her on a trip to Madurai without any family

I agree the story itself delivers the state II is in. They way she communicates with her mother truely shows how she is ignored and how blatantly the husband and children deny her right to be around. Am aghast. I wonder if RB had such a childhood?? II's mother is very casual here saying it's okay ...no it's not. I am sure she wouldn't have done the same if II or Vandita did anything of this sort!

It's really not correct that the family simply puts her aside and enjoy each other's company. How long??? Also, I request the author to really drill in some brain for the next episode. We need an impactful scene where the family truely appreciates II of her deeds and not a nod from RB.

It's high time he acknowledged her as the main in the family. We have been associated with this take since 5 years and I feel I have the right to ask of the author what I feel must be presented. Am not really happy with the things going around with II.

The whole family is a mess. Mopping up each act may not be possible, a realisation once for all is a must.