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Posted: 6 years ago

Part 45

Maan turn his face to smile at her and then speeds away

Geet ne toh pakad liya kass ke Maan ka kandha…her soft fingers touching the soft skin of his nape and neck

Maan ghuma-firake bahar wale lambe raaste se lekar gaya

He take sher to some Dhaba that was away from the city and where he wouldn’t expect to be seen by anyone who would know Akhil so that no one would recognize them

Wahan khaatiya par baithe

Chottu ayaa order lekar gaya

Geet was also feeling good

Wo idhar udhar dekh rahi thi

Then she takes out her mobile

-Click-

Maan pe flash

He blinks and looks away

M- Why'd you do that?

G-Why...pic is nice

She smiles

M-My pics can scare kids

Geet laughs

G-No....

She looks at him, examining

G-You are handsome excluding the hideous hairstyle

M-What? Just the hair? Oh..crap!

Maan says flinging back and lying on the khatiya

G-Huh? What happened?

M- This look took some real pains you know

She laughs...

Haste haste…uthke Maan ke side mein aake baith jaati hai

G-Look?

M-Yeah...

G-Let me do your hair

She ruffles the hair ache se

He catches her hand and holds it close to his heart

G-Karne do naa

M- You are obsessed with my hair. How about I give you a haircut, hmm?

He interlinks his finger with hers

M-God! Your hands are so small

He says looking at their joined hands

G-No, they are not

M-Soft too

G-That I know

M-Why is that?

She shrugs

G-Well they didn’t grow and harden...I guess...from the time I was little. Is it good or bad?

M-Good. Definitely good

He puts her hand close to his cheek

M- Yup…its good

G-Cactus.....

Ungli ghasti hai cheeks pe

He smiles...

M-It'll be better by the evening

G-More cactus

M- You got something against greenery?

G-Apna hairstyle change karlo ladkiyon marengi tumpe

Does gesture of dying and lays on khatiya

M-Now that is what the whole point of the look is

G-Huh?

M-I don’t want attention or girls. I just wanna work

She spurs herself on her elbow

G-Ohhhhh. So who is your boyfriend?

M-No one.As I said I just wanna work, not get into all these things...

G-Oh please! Everyone likes attention and everyone hates oily champu hair

M- You don’t hate me, my colleagues don’t hate me

G-I hate

She says poking his chest trying to make a hateful expression

M-Really?

She nods

M-Well then I’ll change it when you change something in yourself which I don’t like

G-Oh there’s something you don’t like in me? Tell me

Uthke baith jaati hai crossing her arms

M- You know what it is

G-What?

M-I’ll tell you some other time…let’s not spoil the good time. Lo khana bhi aa gaya

Maan gets up and moves away a bit

Geet shrugs

G-There won’ t be any other time

Geer uthke apni side baith jaati hai

M-There is the evening the night and the morning

G-yeah yeah. Jaldi khao tumhe office jaana hai naa

M- Nope

G-No?

M- Nope. Nahi jaana

G-oh....ghar jane ki itni jaldi. You are really close to your family. Kab nikal rahe ho?

M- Aaj office nahi jaa rah…wo aaj kuch zyada kaam nahi tha isiliye half day le liya socha tumhe aaj achhe se pareshaan kar leta hoon fir tum chali jaogi, main kise irritate karunga

G-Kal kab nikloge?

M- Afternoon

G-Waise kabhi bataya nahi tumne ghar kahan hai tumhara

M-Gorakhpur

He mentions the name of the city he grew up in

M-Tum miss nahi karogi apne ghar walo ko?

G-Karungi

She says sadly

G-Par...

She sighs

M-Par?

She shakes her head

G-Tum miss karoge mujhe? Kuch saalon baad bhul jaoge yaa kuch mahino baad

M-Didn’t I just say I would

She clicks her tongue

G-Dekhna..out of sight out of mind


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Edited by NilzStorywriter - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

Part 45

amazing update! well written!

great that Maan took Geet out to a place far away!

fabulous moments!

nice convo! Geet teases Maan!

update soon

Edited by khwaishfan - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

Nice part

Maan took off fr Geet

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Posted: 6 years ago

Awsm update

They share a beautiful bond

Loved their conversation

She is still trying to change his champu look

😍😍

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Posted: 6 years ago

Lovely

Why geet is hell bend in going ? Both of them talk in riddles most of the time n they don’t understand others point

when Will love track begin for maaneet or u r nt planning at all?

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Posted: 6 years ago

I don't want their moment to end😍😍😍 they are so close and comfortable... who will say that they known for only few days ...

Loved their conversations ... light hearted and meaningful ... she is very serious about going .

About his hairstyle hmm why I feel this secret gonna reveal soon

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Posted: 6 years ago

Nice update..

Waiting for next update..

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Posted: 6 years ago

maan took geet out side of dehli so there wont be any onw who will recognize them . both enjoying their time.

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Posted: 6 years ago

So less time for them... She going too soon

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Posted: 6 years ago

Awesome update .

She really hates his hair style but she still don't know his motive

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