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Just read all the chapters. Intriguing story line. You have given importance to all the characters unlike the show, kudos. I just loved the vibrant Anjali and Payal. And Kushi and Arnav are so cute. This Kushi has a confidence and sense in whatever she is doing. Waiting eagerly for next update

Yayyy I finally got to reread the story and continue with the bew chapters! Omg Abavi, this story has become hilarious from the end of Chapter 11 - mad family! It was always funny but it has become hilarious! Honestly, I thought I will comment after reading all the chapters but damn I couldn't stop myself from leaving a comment after reading this part where La's phone ring in Khushi's hand and Dadi seeing NK's picture...to which Anjali took a u-turn and tried to run back up the stairs!! Oh my god somebody sedate me, I can't stop laughing! 🤣🤣🤣 I loved that part so much that I decided to leave a comment straightaway..meaning I am not even done reading that chapter or the ones after it. It's the details I swear😂😂😂

I am so excited to read the rest!

Did I ever tell you how glad I am that you started writing this story again?! Because am I glad!

I haven't finished reading the last 4 parts but since I'm already writing, I am gonna say I like this Abhimanyu entry! It's so cute to see Anjali's reaction to him! My favorite characters are so Payal and Anjali, hands down 🙌

There have been so many times now when Arnav turned super rude towards Khushi though. I mean throwing her out of the car when going to the wedding? What was he thinking! I was a little upset with that behavior and Khushi's oblivious reaction towards it didn't make sense either~ I hope she addresses it in the future though! Arnav's behavior is too extreme toqards Khushi too....emptying the whole jug of water left me opem mouthed and shocked. Literally. 😱😱😂😂

P.S. Watching Lavanya with Aussie accent, interacting with dadi would be tea

Who needs a boring party when you can have an adventure with Khushi?

Originally posted by: Tris007

Yayyy I finally got to reread the story and continue with the bew chapters! Omg Abavi, this story has become hilarious from the end of Chapter 11 - mad family! It was always funny but it has become hilarious! Honestly, I thought I will comment after reading all the chapters but damn I couldn't stop myself from leaving a comment after reading this part where La's phone ring in Khushi's hand and Dadi seeing NK's picture...to which Anjali took a u-turn and tried to run back up the stairs!! Oh my god somebody sedate me, I can't stop laughing! 🤣🤣🤣 I loved that part so much that I decided to leave a comment straightaway..meaning I am not even done reading that chapter or the ones after it. It's the details I swear😂😂😂

I am so excited to read the rest!

Did I ever tell you how glad I am that you started writing this story again?! Because am I glad!

I haven't finished reading the last 4 parts but since I'm already writing, I am gonna say I like this Abhimanyu entry! It's so cute to see Anjali's reaction to him! My favorite characters are so Payal and Anjali, hands down 🙌

There have been so many times now when Arnav turned super rude towards Khushi though. I mean throwing her out of the car when going to the wedding? What was he thinking! I was a little upset with that behavior and Khushi's oblivious reaction towards it didn't make sense either~ I hope she addresses it in the future though! Arnav's behavior is too extreme toqards Khushi too....emptying the whole jug of water left me opem mouthed and shocked. Literally. 😱😱😂😂

P.S. Watching Lavanya with Aussie accent, interacting with dadi would be tea

Wow! thanks for this wonderful comment! You make me feel so good about myself!

Yeah, I know. Arnav who is otherwise a level headed, matured person behaves like a spoiled old brat around her - and that is what is making him wonder what is so intriguing about her that makes him lose his, well, basically his manners. But that doesn't mean it is right. And Khushi never fails to put him in place, in her own ways.

Ok, let me put it clear for the benefit of young girls out there, it is NOT OK to accept such behaviour from anyone, however good-looking and charismatic that person is. Give it back to them in good measures.

La's outlook is basically my panga on Dadi. And I made her favorite Grandson's GF flaunt her tattoos and bubblegum pink dyed hair with Aussie accent. 🥳

Welcome back, V! Will surely read the story :)

Oh darn it, meri nazar lag gayi. Situation became damn serious after that engagement announcement. The title "Calm before the storm" makes a lot more sense now😆

Okay but this part had me LAUGHING

“Then try this…” he said picking up another red dress, which he thought looked better than the rest

“No. What’s is it with you and red?”

“My favorite color” he muttered

“Oh…that’s funny” she said

“What’s funny?” he asked her with an incredible look

“Would you dare to wear a flashy red shirt for the party? Why would you want me to wear your favorite color?”

He let out an exasperated sigh

🤣🤣

Also, did I read Anjali Bond Raizada saying, why is Khushi missing Sallu's movie? Sallu.. damn...

Anjali should really just dress up like Bond. I am getting so many Qubool Hai vibes from this fic though! Mr. Almighty Alhampana, now James Bond

They saw them driving the bike, oh hell yeah!

Tell you what, I was having deja vu while reading some of the parts! When I was rereading the old chapters I had a vision of this reception scene, but I wasn't sure if it happened here or in some other fic I read.

It was totally this! Yayy! 🙌😁 You've written this before right? I've definitely read the dance and the engagement announcement before. Maybe even the book scene too from the last chapter?! 😆 It's so good though!! This Khushi is so adamant, smart, and refreshing!

Khushi is so strong here! Kudos to her! She didn't bluntly deny going to the party and didn't go at the same time! Hell yes for the smartness! If I were on her place I would've punched Arnav for suggesting me to be his date 😳kidding...... well, kind of.. lol

So, few mysteries still left unsolved. First, how come they are not homeless yet? Whatever happened to selling the property in a short amount of time to save their asses? 😆 I think I missed out on something~ lol. Next, who is Aman?!! Can he be Khushi's unrequited childhood love of some sort? Because he's in military and he chose the country over her, and hell if that's not the most heartbreaking story!

Khushi deserves better than having an affair with an engaged man though 😆 I am sorry, but I am so looking forward to the friendzoned Arnav right now. I don't care if its his Dadi's doing or what, but he is engaged, and Khushi deserves a friend, and I don't know... they should be together after he breaks off the engagement!:\ This is a little messy situation~ I am looking forward to how you gonna handle it though! 😉😆😆

And to reply to your comment, it's true! No need to take shit from people who are good looking. I really like how you are handling Khushi and Arnav's relationship right now... well mostly Khushi. She's sophisticated, smart, dramatic, fun, and knows what is best of her. This is a dream character! Great job Abavi (Is that what you go by? What can I call you?)!

P.S. I miss Payaliya climbing windows!

Hey Tris, Thanks for this amazing comment! My replies in red

Originally posted by: Tris007

Oh darn it, meri nazar lag gayi. Situation became damn serious after that engagement announcement. The title "Calm before the storm" makes a lot more sense now😆

Okay but this part had me LAUGHING

“Then try this…” he said picking up another red dress, which he thought looked better than the rest

“No. What’s is it with you and red?”

“My favorite color” he muttered

“Oh…that’s funny” she said

“What’s funny?” he asked her with an incredible look

“Would you dare to wear a flashy red shirt for the party? Why would you want me to wear your favorite color?”

He let out an exasperated sigh

🤣🤣

Also, did I read Anjali Bond Raizada saying, why is Khushi missing Sallu's movie? Sallu.. damn...

Anjali should really just dress up like Bond. I am getting so many Qubool Hai vibes from this fic though! Mr. Almighty Alhampana, now James Bond

Oh really? thats interesting. I haven't seen Qubool hai though.

They saw them driving the bike, oh hell yeah!

Tell you what, I was having deja vu while reading some of the parts! When I was rereading the old chapters I had a vision of this reception scene, but I wasn't sure if it happened here or in some other fic I read.

It was totally this! Yayy! 🙌😁 You've written this before right? I've definitely read the dance and the engagement announcement before. Maybe even the book scene too from the last chapter?! 😆 It's so good though!! This Khushi is so adamant, smart, and refreshing!

Yeah, I had written and posted this before, But the site got taken down and I had to re-write those parts again.

Khushi is so strong here! Kudos to her! She didn't bluntly deny going to the party and didn't go at the same time! Hell yes for the smartness! If I were on her place I would've punched Arnav for suggesting me to be his date 😳kidding...... well, kind of.. lol

So, few mysteries still left unsolved. First, how come they are not homeless yet? Whatever happened to selling the property in a short amount of time to save their asses? 😆 I think I missed out on something~ lol. Next, who is Aman?!! Can he be Khushi's unrequited childhood love of some sort? Because he's in military and he chose the country over her, and hell if that's not the most heartbreaking story!

I am saving the mystery for the right moment. 😳

Khushi deserves better than having an affair with an engaged man though 😆 I am sorry, but I am so looking forward to the friendzoned Arnav right now. I don't care if its his Dadi's doing or what, but he is engaged, and Khushi deserves a friend, and I don't know... they should be together after he breaks off the engagement!:\ This is a little messy situation~ I am looking forward to how you gonna handle it though! 😉😆😆

And to reply to your comment, it's true! No need to take shit from people who are good looking. I really like how you are handling Khushi and Arnav's relationship right now... well mostly Khushi. She's sophisticated, smart, dramatic, fun, and knows what is best of her. This is a dream character! Great job Abavi (Is that what you go by? What can I call you?)!

Call me Vi

P.S. I miss Payaliya climbing windows!

Noted!

Hi Vi,

I soooo loved loved loved the update. Bike ride was totally a surprise and an extremely pleasant one at it and the icing on the cake is Anjali, NK and La seeking and recording them. I cannot wait for Payal and Akash’s reaction, especially Payal’s.

Now, I just hope what Payal’s parents don’t come up with a very unpleasant surprise.

Hi V!,

Update thaango miss! I mean pls do update! ;)

Cheers

just caught up with the updates... they were hilarious... aww the bike ride was just too ...he let khushi drive... both are aware that they feel something for each other...khushi is trying to friendzone him...arnav is aware of that too!!

oh no they are caught red-handed! wohoooo

lovely date... good they got to spend sometime together!

oh sheetal...feel bad for her...she is waiting and here arnav is getting into khushi! not that its arnav's fault...he clearly what he feels for her and not to expect anything but still

eagerly waiting for the next!!!!

when is it by the way??