BeHir OS *BROKEN HEARTS* - Page 2

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thanks everyone...will see what I can come up with RE turning this into an FF
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Posted: 6 years ago
#12
Hii first of congratulations for ur new os cum ff
And secondly all the best
Coming to this part it was something which u picked situations from naagin I guess
But must say nice attempt
Bela for her love wanted to leave mahir
And mahir on the other hand was amandant to fight together
Touchy were the bits where kuhu accident happened and how the baby was saved
Do continue and finish the ff
Looking forward for the story so update soon 😃

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice concept
Do cont.
It's awesome to see the revengeful mahir in this ff atleast as its impossible 2 see in the show
Waiting for next part
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Posted: 6 years ago
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You have written it so well, must continue this one 😃

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