SamAina FS: Let It Go - Last Part on Page 67

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Hi Friends - Here's another story from me. I am not sure yet if this would be an OS or a TS... but below is the teaser. Let me know your thoughts...

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As the group sauntered up the path beside the lake, Sameer kept looking at the roadside stalls wondering what to buy for Naina. He wanted to buy some pretty earrings. He turned thinking to ask her if she liked wearing long earrings, when suddenly her hand brushed against his. He bit his lip wondering whether she would mind if he held her hand for some time. It would feel good to walk that way, he thought.

Naina was busy in chattering with Preeti, he looked down at her slightly swinging hand, and slowly gathered courage to inch closer. A fraction of an inch remained... he took a deep breath... and suddenly he jerked as Munna shrieked.

"Hey bhagwaan!", Munna exclaimed.

Pandit also joined him, "gazab ho gaya, ajab ho gaya."

Sameer, Naina and Preeti looked on perplexed. "Kya hua?", Preeti asked frowning.

"Haan, yeh aise chilla kyun rahe ho?", Sameer added.

Munna pointed to a red painted structure, "woh dekho... aaj tak toh hum ise Naina devi bulate the. Yahan ke logo ne toh iska mandir bhi sthaapit kar diya."

All of them stared at the red temple gate which had yellow inscription of "Shree Maa Naina Devi Mandir."

Pandit clucked his tongue, and pumped his fists, "chal bhai... aaj tak mazak pe devi bulate the, par ab se toh roz naare lagane padenge - Shree Maa Naina Devi ki Jay."

Naina narrowed her eyes, "tum dono ki toh..."

Munna and Pandit ran around the empty street, with Naina in hot pursuit while Sameer and Preeti doubled over in laughter.

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I will add the story in a couple of days. Thank you for your patience and support.


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Let It Go

Part 1: Anticipation (Page 13)

Part 2: The Journey (Page 23)

Part 3: The Tale of Forever (Page 36)

Part 4: Let It Go (Page 50)

Part 5: Every End is a New Beginning (Page 67)

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mehraan thumbnail
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Yesss😳
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Wonderful teaser Mou. Can't wait to read full story. Pls update soon.
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Hi Mou,
It is pleasant surprise. 🤗
Story is intriguing and you added humour to it as well. Waah Waah. Yeh kab hua? 😉😆
Pls continue.
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Want Want Want !!!!❤️
Can't wait for this to start !!
Update real real soon !!😃

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Damn... I'm so so happy that u are back...🥳
I don't know wat u have planned... But this OS/TS needs to be changed to SS

Naina mata ka mandir🤔
Are they in nainital😲

Damn u mou... You are planning their college trip

Bring it on... Just bring it on...
As I always say...Jo show mein nahi milega... Wo mou ki stories mein milega
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So happy to see you back
So Amazing teaser
'Naina Devi' ...
Plz update soon
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So happy to see you back..
Awesome update
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Finally something coming. Don't keep us waiting for long.
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Teaser is intriguing
Waiting for OS😉

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