Ishra SS : Tujhko Mein Rakhloon Dil Mein last shot pg 81 jan/7 - Page 38

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Thank you Di for the PM... There were very limited works on Raman's memory loss track and your work stands among the crowd... I have read all the shots so far and felt you presented in a more sophisticated way as compared to the show ... To be honest, it's far more interesting... The way you brought Ishaan track and unlike the show, Raman is more sensible and is thinking at least...Glad , you have Mihir in your write up , he is such a confidant of Ishra... One more thing I could notice is how Ishima lashed out at her parents for not trusting unlike in YHM, where she never stood for her self respect...But simmi and param are no less demons and Toshiji is such an imbecile, who keeps falling in the trap everytime..,

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part8
superb update
ishita is upset that Raman dint come to meet ishu
Mihir assured her and told her about Ramans accident too
even romi spoke to Raman
ishu wanted to meet Raman and finally Raman came to meet him
loved ishus cute antics
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Tujhko mein rakhloon dil mein

Shot 9

Ishra were hugging their miracle baby Ishaan close to their heart and feeling contended. Raman looks at ishita and tries to break the hug making ishita too conscious about the discomfort raman has. She breaks the hug and says: Ishaan come to mumma its your milk time. Come

Ishaan shook his head and says: no. dodo... sirf papa.. saying this he cuddle more to raman making raman emotional seeing his baby love for himself. He looks at ishita and was about to say something but ishita took Ishaan from raman arms and moves inside the hall. Raman was just looking at her retreating figure.

He felt a hold on his shoulder he turns and sees mihir standing. Looking at mihir only one question start running in his mind that who is this man and why he is with ishita. Mihir smiles looking at the lines formed on raman forehead knowing well that his bhai is definitely getting jealous.

Mihir: bhai.. come inside, bhabhi is little bit angry on you as didn't visited Ishaan. He stressed at word bhabhi and looks at intently at raman. Listening to word bhabhi, all lines of worry or jealousy vanishes from his face he smiles at mihir and turns to go but stop and again looks at mihir

Mihir: kiya hua bhai??

Raman: you know me..

Mihir: obviously bhai. You are my brother. Not by blood but by heart. Mein aj jo bhi hoon sirf apki wajah say hoon warna meri to koi family nahe hai sirf ap aur ishita bhabhi hi meri family hai. He looks emotionally at raman and remember all those moments they have shared together.

Raman stresses his mind and got a vague flashes of his past with mihir. His head start spinning making mihir worried he holds him and takes him to near couch and makes him sit and worriedly asks: you are fine bhai?

Raman presses his head and nods his head. He was not getting anything. His all questions about his past are still unanswered and its bothering him. Ishita who has returned holding Ishaan gets worried seeing raman in this state. She fastly walks towards him and sits beside and says: what happened?

Ishaan too looks at his father and jumps into his lap cupping his face and says: papa tya hua?? (kiya hua papa)

Raman opens his eyes and looks at his baby who was worried for him. He smiles lightly and says: I am fine Ishaan.

Ishaan shook his head and kisses raman cheeks and says: ram bam boom...while he was moving his little finger and then he smiles widely and says: magic.. papa theek.

Raman and ishita chuckles seeing the cute antics of Ishaan. Raman too smiles widely and hugs him close to his heart and says: wow.. Ishaan knows magic he made papa all fine.

Ishaan victoriously smiles and says: detha.. magic.( dekha magic)

Ishita presses his shoulder and says: you are fine na? raman nods and says: absolutely. Mihir moves out of the hall knowing that both need some time together.

Ishaan: papa. Ishu gusssa

Ishra looks surprisedly at Ishaan.

Raman: why ishu is angry on papa

Ishaan: ishu missie missie papa. Sab pass papa. Ishu pass papa nahe. Ishu chot ladi. Papa nahe.( ishu missed his papa all kids has papa but Ishaan didn't have. Ishaan got injured but papa didn't came) He looks innocently at his father complains about his late arrival.

Both raman and ishita gets emotional seeing their baby sad. Both knows that Ishaan needs his father in his life. Ishita wipes her tears while raman cups Ishaan face and says: papa ko ishu ka nahe pata tha. Jaise pata chala papa ishu kay pass agaye.

Ishaan: ishu chood nahe jaogay na ( you will not leave Ishaan)

Raman shook his head and says: never. Papa will never leave his baby

Ishaan claps and gets happy and says: ishu loves papa.

Raman kisses his forehead and says: papa too loves ishu

Ishaan turns to ishita and says: mumma bhi papa ko missie missie thi. Aul loti bhi thi. Haina mumma. Raman looks at ishita and both shares an eyelock.

Ishaan: mumma kahi papa ishu pass jaldi aye day.

Ishita smiles and says: bus ishu itni si saari baatein. Papa bore ho jayegay.

Ishaan pouts listening to his mother and turns to raman and says: aisa hai papa

Raman: nahe papa kabhi Ishaan say bore nahe hosakty

Ishaan laughs and hugs raman. He cuddles more to seek the warmth of his father and rubs his eyes. ishita notice that Ishaan is feeling sleepy she caresses his hairs and says: ishu come mumma will make you sleep

Ishaan clung to raman and shook his head he takes raman hand and put it on his head and says: soyi soyi karwa do papa.

Raman gets up and start walking to and fro holding Ishaan and lovingly pats his head soon Ishaan fall asleep while ishita was emotionally looking at the father and son. Raman sees Ishaan sleeping peacefully he turns at ishita while ishita too gets up and signs raman to follow her.

Both enters a room raman looks around and sees all room was filled with photo. Some photo were only his while others were with his picture with ishita and some of Ishaan childhood. He carefully makes Ishaan settles in bed while ishita put blanket on Ishaan and dims the light and says: apne kuch kehna hai

Raman : haan. Muje tumse mere sawaloon kay jawab chahiye

Ishita: poochiya

Raman: kiya tumne ananya ko... Ishita looks down unable to answer his question.

Raman: jawab do ishita.

Ishita: jo guzar gaya wo guzar gaya.

Raman: ye mere sawal ka jawab nahe hai ishita

Ishita: I cant answer this question apne kuch aur poochna hai.

Raman forward his hand and looks at ishita. Ishita gets surprised seeing rama forwards his hand to her. She looks on. Raman says: wada karo mere sawal ka sach sach jawab dogikoi jhoot nahe

Ishita put her hand on his and says: sirf sach.

Raman: I want to know about our past. Our relation. Sab sach sach batana. Kuch nahe chupana.

Ishita nods her head and says: sab bataongi.

Raman attentively looks at ishita and says: I am listening

Ishita: I am your second wife.

Raman shockingly looks at ishita

Ishita: shagun is your first wife. And adi and ruhi are your and shagun children.

It was another shocker for raman. Ishita continues to say: mihir is shagun brother. Shagun and you got divorced as she left you for ashok. Shagun got adi custody and you both were fighting for ruhi custody. I was your neighbour. Ruhi choosed me as her mother. And we both got married for sirf ruhi kay liye.

Raman closes his eyes and he gets a flash of their argument of sirf ruhi kay liye. Ishita says: you got married to me to get ruhi custody aur mein jo khud kabhi maa nahe ban sakti thi got a daughter in ruhi. We start our life just as ruhi parents but slowly we become friends and falls in love with each other. Shagun too changed.

Raman: lekin pihu..

Ishita: humari beti hai. We got our pihu through surrogacy. Shagun was pihu surrogate mother. Aur bhi bohat kuch hua humari zindagi mein lekin wo sab jana apky liye itna zarori nahe. We were happily living with our family two years ago.

Raman: aur Ishaan

Ishita: jab muje jail hui at that time I was pregnant.

Raman: kiya mein tumhari pregnancy kay bare mein janta tha. Kiya ghar waly janty thy.

Ishita: ghar pay to sab mujse nafrat karty thy. Adi ruhi kabhi milne nahe aye. Simmi ne pihu ko hostel bhej diya aur ap apni yadasht kho bethy. I told you about my pregnancy but after that you never came to meet me.

Raman: aisa kaise hosakta hai. How can I leave you in that state.

Ishita: mein ne adi say poocha tha usne bataya you had an accident that day and you lost your memory. She tightly holds his hand and says: bohat mushkil tha wo waqt raman. Agar mihir aur ashok muje nahe bachaty to mein aur mera bacha jail mein mar jaty. Ishaan was a miracle mein kabhi maa nahe ban sakti thi. Log muje banj kehty thy tana dety hai. Ishaan bohat important tha mere liye raman. Wo apka hissa tha uska hona muje apky hone ka ehsaas deta tha. I was so scared that time raman. I needed you. She cries remembering the tough phase of her life.

Raman hugs ishita and tries to console her while ishita was saying: I needed you raman.. and I still need you.

Raman: Ishaan kay paida hone kay baad why you didn't told me anything

Ishita: mein theek hoti to batati. Ishaan theek hota to batati raman.

Raman: matlab.

Ishita: when mihir and ashok bailed me they took me to Mumbai for treatment as I was in very bad condition. I got admitted in hospital. Doctor told that they will do a premature c section as it is the only way Ishaan can survive. I told mihir to call you. He called and told that he wanted to talk to raman about me but simmi didn't let him talk to you saying you don't want to talk.

Raman looks shocked. He says: simmi cant do this.

Ishita: its up to you raman you trust me or not. But belive me raman I tried to reach you but destiny has decided something else. I know you will feel bad but I don't trust simmi. Ap simmi aur param pay trust na karo. Do saal phele bhi simmi galat thi aur wo aj bhi galat hai. Raman shockingly looks at ishita.

Otherside, Param enters his room and sees simmi worried. He asks: simmi why you are worried.

Simmi: param jee raman bhai has distanced himself from all of us and don't know where he has gone I am sure he has gone to meet that ishita. After all now they have Ishaan. Meri bachi cheen kar wo banjh kaise maa ban gayi.

Param: arry simmi chill kar na. humain josh say nahe hosh say kaam lena hoga. Ab hum agar Ishaan ko kuch karain gay to humare liye problem ho jayegi we have to do something else

Simmi: per kiya karain gay param jee

Param: tu dekhti ja kal kiya hota hai.

Simmi looks at param and thinks: pata nahe apka plan successful hota hai kay nahe muje bhi kuch aur plan karna hoga.

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