Ariya Caught in Revenge

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mubash1607

@mubash1607

Inactive

Posted: 6 years ago

#871

Loved it dear...

Superb story...

Thanks for pm

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Sana Tabassum

@sana1819786

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 6 years ago

#872

awesome epilogue dear

loved the story a lot yar

epilogue was also as mindblowing as story

commissioner ki tho bolti band hogayi in logoke karan

bechare ko heart attack aana hi baki reh gaya tha

and arjun he is too much yar bechare ne sam ko gharse nikal wadiya

and khud apne pyaar ke saath maze kar raha hai...lol

amazing end dear

I am really sorry ke I haven't commented on this story properly due to being busy

do come with new mind blowing concept soonish

thanks for pm

bye take care

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Ariya Kazi

@Aayat.ariya14

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#873

officially the superb updt... gonna 2 miss it.. plz come back soon with the new 1.. thanks for pm.. Ah! tc...

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Jai Shree Ram

@Aquabutterfly

Rocker

+ 18

Posted: 6 years ago

#874

Brilliant epilogue 👏

Poor commissioner...almost got a heart attack.

Arjun and Sameer are back to being normal. And Arjun ne bechare Sameer ki grihasti mein aag laga di. Kehta hain na...har ek friend kamina hota hai 😆

Thanks for the pm

All's well that ends well...it was one heck of a story 👏

I travelled emotionally with it and slowly fell in love with it. You have written it so beautifully that anything I say now wouldn't do justice to your efforts.

Keep writing more stories because as a reader, I always look forward to it. I'll be waiting for another one of these wonderful masterpieces.

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Shivanya

@IfritAmbrose

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 6 years ago

#875

Loved the update Bloomie

Kaise chupata hai Arjun apna prankster roop apne serious mode mein!!

Bichara Rathode, uske biwi se pitne ke din khatam hi nai hote.. I guess jab tak Arjun hai aisa toh kabhi hone se raha 😆

Loved my Riya..her style uff

great story!

P.S. Please write a new one soon with more badass Riya shocking everyone!

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Mdmadona

@Mdmadona

Rocker

Posted: 6 years ago

#876

Sam ko ghar se nikal diya lol bechara sam arjun bhi na

Com sir reaction was so funny glad ki heart attack nahi aaya lol

Riya toh arjun ko ungli pe nacharahi hai lol

Ariya gonna get married lovely

Beautiful n brave ariya made for each other couple

Epilogue 2 bhi mil jaye toh acha hoga unki shaadi bhi toh dekna hai

Aag ke baad sasha ki condition baaki hai aur sakshi ka case bhi

Awesome update

Loved it:)

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Shreyashi Chakraborty

@shreyashi19mld

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#877

Awesome mindblowing outstanding epilogue

Love it dear

Waiting for new one

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RiyaA123

@RiyaA123

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 6 years ago

#878

Awesome epilogue

But like I said before... I loved the story so its hard to let go now

Loved it

Keep writing

Thanks for the pm

Waiting for a new story from u

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cuteariya

@cuteariya

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 6 years ago

#879

loll it was really hilarious epilogue🤣

awe riya was really worried to go inside commissioner sir cabin

samjun made her understand nothing will happen😊

poor commissioner got almost heart attack just like arjun said when he told him riya is his mangetar🤣

it was really hard for commissioner sir to think right way🤣

loll arjun even threaten commissioner that he won't give him the proof against shirke if he won't settle the cheten case😆

awe it was really hard for sameer to believe that ts was riya's plan😆

finally arjun logged complain against sakshi otherwise riya will leave him🤣

oh god it was really hilarious when riya said they forgot to get married🤣

loll arjun exposed sameer affair in front of aisha🤣

poor sameer had to runaway from office🤣

finally everything perfect in everyone's life😃

loll aisha throw sameer out of house poor ETF chief😆

awe end with ariya's romance☺️

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Suzie

@etfr

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 6 years ago

#880

Super dooper hilarious yet awesome epilogue.

Loved it.

Bechara commissioner sir.. bs heart attack nahi Aya.. hahaha. He understood why Ariya Jodi shouldn't be a shock as they are just made for each other.. both are same.. rebellious and no fear of anything..

Arjun is scared of Riya..hahaha.. Riya se Darr ke maare jaldi se Sakshi ke khilaf case bhi kar diya..

Haww... Sam tou Gaya.. itni gf!! Arjun always have solutions.. to irritate Sam. Hahaha.. Gosh!! My stomach hurts.

Hilarious yet Lovely happy funny ending.

Superbly written.

Thanks for PM