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I am glad to hear that.😳
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Originally posted by: Navyakanwat4

When will you updating next chapter


In a while :)
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01| Tum Pagal Ho?|

"Aapko kisne kaha tha mere peeche aane ke liye? Aapko bhag jana chahiye tha na." Bela lashed out at Mahir who had gripped her closer with one hand while his other hand held some support that he couldn't see but he sure knew, that shaking support would not save them for longer. Bela was frustrated at him, for jumping in the situation. He brutally destroyed her plan of killing him first, even if it was without his knowledge and later on, he showed up near her where she was about to kill the Mongooses that were attacking upon her. Neither could she come in her snake form in front of Mahir nor could she get away from those creatures by fighting in her human form. The only way she thought could help was slipping off the cliff and then, escaping through her snake form, but damn this man, Mahir, failed that as well by jumping along with her.

"Are tum pagal ho kya? Tumhe akele chhod kar kaise chale jata?" Staring at the woman in front almost in disbelief hearing what she was saying, he reasoned,dismissing her says about him leaving her and saving his own life.

"Mai apna khayal khud rakh sakti hu. Mujhe uske liye aapki zaroorat nahi hai." The sincerity and honesty in her voice screamed loudly. She was extremely frustrated with him, who was doing everything that was making her doubt if he really killed her Vikrant because it was becoming tough to accept that the man who could risk his life for someone like her whom he had met just a few daysback could actually kill somebody.

Beforeher intelligent mind could ask her stupid heart that was focussing on Mahir'sgoodness to shut up and before Mahir could come up with another reply, theshaking support broke, making them fall down. His hands were circled around heras tightly as they could. Despite the situation they were in, his face had anunusual calm and a little smile as he kept staring at her as if it didn'tmatter to him if he was going to die soon and as if she was the only one, whomhe wanted to see before he shut his eyes permanently. She wondered, why wasn'the screaming, why wasn't he panicking. He was a human who was supposed to beafraid in that circumstance, he was a murderer who was not supposed to behavekindly, but he seemed like hell-bent on making her prove wrong in everything.

Landingdirectly in one river down there with a great force, she was struggling to comeout but he was quick enough to catch her. "I have got you. Come." He broughther and himself out of the water. Lying on the grass, they took time to calmtheir laboured breathing. She wasn't going to stay silent with him even in thatstate but as she attempted to lift herself up, she was pushed back to herprevious position by him. "Please, not now." She was too tired to argue andgave in.

Oncethey were good enough to walk, they decided to search for some place to staylooking at the worsening weather. The storm was on its way. They needed to getat some safer place soon. Her Saree had got drenched and he offered her hisShirt which she had to take as her Saree was sticking to her body.

Whilewandering in the forest, Mahir saw a small house and they found a shelter tosave themselves from the heavy rainfall and the storm. The house was nothinglike a house but anyway, it was keeping them protected. The chilling cold madeMahir try to find some stones and dried leaves to ignite the fire. He winced inpain as the wounds on his hand and back started hurting more than he could bearwithout letting Bela see.

Hereyes shifted to him, hearing him. She remembered, she had had felt something inthe bad given by Sumitra when she was taking out the umbrella in it. Quicklypushing her hands in the bag, she checked it and found basil leaves. Holdingthem in her hand, she walked towards him. "Ye laga lijiye." She held out herhand in front of him, asking him to take them but his constant stare at herwordlessly, made her start blabber. "Maine nahi rakhe the. Sumi Maa ne rakhethe. Mujhe thodi pata tha aapko chot lagne wali hai. Pata to Sumi Maa ko bhinahi tha lekin-"

"Bela, Bela,it's okay. It's okay." He tried calming her down. "Tumhe ye sab karne ki koizaroorat nahi hai. Mai kisi se kuch expect nahi karta. Tumse bhi kuch expectnahi kar raha tha. So relax."

Hiswords always came out unrealistically beautiful whenever they were for her. For a moment, her heart refused toaccept that he killed her Vikrant. How could he? Could he, really?

"Aapkimarzi." Shrugging her shoulders, she dropped the leaves on the ground, near himand went back to her place, away fromhim.

"Esenahi hota." Unable to resist, she spoke from where she was sitting, watchinghim struggle to get his way with the leaves to his wounds. She again, got backnear him and took the leaves from his hands.

"Bela,mai kar lunga." He told her, when she was lifting his T-Shirt to apply theleaves.

"Aapudhar dekhiye na. Har kaam akele nahi ho sakta. Aap bhi aye na mujhe bachane.Aapko zaroorat nahi thi tab bhi aapne apni jaan dali na mere liye, khatre mejabki mai aapse pehle hi keh chuki thi ke mai aapse kuch bhi expect nahi karrahi hu." She continued her work, of covering his injuries with the leaves asshe reminded him of the reality of their relation. He had just stayed quietwithout interrupting while she spoke the things that somewhere hurt him. She still doesn't trust him. The realizationwas enough to prick his heart but he wouldn't blame her. He would blame onlyhimself for whatever had happened with her. Her anger, her disappointment, herharsh words... everything... he was ready to take everything because she hadthe right.

"Bela,I know ke tum mujhse kuch expect nahi karti ho but tumhe pura haq hai mujhsekuch bhi expect karne ka kyunki mai manta hu, jo bhi tumhare sath galat hua wosab mere wajah se hua..." His voice trailed only to find her eyes looking awayas she took her hands off his back.

He is not good, Bela. He doesn't deserveany mercy. Don't fall in his trap. She chanted to herself, onagain realizing that she was falling weak in her revenge on him and she couldnot let that happen. Choosing not to respond to him, she got up and lied downon a cot there. He, on the other hand, slept down.

Sheshifted in her sleep. Once again! Once again, the moments of her with Mahir,were playing in her mind and she snapped her eyes open. She was remembering them even in sleep? The man was havingquite a strong effect on her and she hated it. She absolutely hated it.

She wasin his life to destroy him, to punish him, to kill him the way he killed herVikrant.

Butdamn it. Every time, something was happening and he was getting escaped as ifdestiny was on his side, the Almighty on his side, Shiv Ji were on his side.

Ah, stop it Bela. This was just his luckbut it won't save him every time. Shiv Ji isn't on his side. They are with youbecause you are right and Mahir is wrong. He is her to punish.

Shelooked at him, with burning fire in her eyes as she recalled Vikrant's death. Shedid it whenever she failed to gather the courage. Remembering how her Vikrantdied always ignited her rage but to her own surprise, her eyes softened themoment she saw blood flowing from his wounds and everything clouding her mindwas disappeared for the time being. She couldn't resist leaving her place andwalking closer to him. Closing her eyes, she softly placed her hand on hiswound as she sat on her knees. She was gifted with healing power.

She was healing his wounds.

She was soothing his pain.

Sheshut her eyes hard in frustration of the battle she was having inside. She wasnot supposed to be gentle with the man, she was there to kill. His pain was notsupposed to affect her. She was trying to ease the pain of the man who killedher love. Could she be more disgusted with herself?

She hadno idea what was happening to her.

She hadno idea what was protecting Mahir always.

She hadno idea why were her attempts going in vain always.

She hadno idea and that angered her.

Herrespect was torn apart, that night. Her love was murdered, that night. She losther everything, that night. How could she soften with the person who wasresponsible for her shattered world?

"Baskar Bela. Tu yaha ise marne ayi hai. Bas wahi yad rakh. Ye sab log ek jaisehai. Sab dikhawa hai. Sab jhooth hai. Sab jhooth." She muttered to herself, andleaned towards him to end his life. She was just about to kill him but the loudsound of thundering had him wake up and she fell upon him being startled. Once again, he got saved.

He was takenaback for a second or two, finding her so close to him. Wasn't she sleeping up there? He wondered glancing at the cot oncebefore he looked at her and presumed that she was scared. "Aap daro mat. Baslightening hai." He held onto her arm, lightly, assuring her with a smile.

Darna tumhe chahiye. With asmall push to her shoulder backward, she got herself off his touch.

Watchingher stiffening, he regretted doing what didn't please her. "I am sorry Bela."

"Tufanruk chuka hai. Hame chalna chahiye." Without responding to his apology, she caughtthe hold of her bag, rising on her feet. "Ye aap rakh lijiye. Ab mujhe iskizaroorat nahi. Mai thik hu." She handed him back, his Shirt and made her waytowards the door to get out of the place. She was utterly disappointed withherself for not being able to do what had she come there for. What would shetell Vish? Her unsteady steps mirrored her mental state.

"Bela,ek minute."

Shehalted her steps, hearing him. "Jee?"

"I amsorry."

"Wo aappehle bol chuke hai."

"Tabkisi aur cheez ke liya bola tha. Ab kisi aur, ke liye bol raha hu. Bela, maijanta hu jo kuch bhi tumhare sath hua hai, bohot galat hua hai and trust me,mai janta hu sab meri galti hai. Yuvi mera bhai hai, mujhe pata hona chahiyetha. Mai tab bhi tumhara well wisher tha, aj bhi hu aur hamesha rahunga. Maitumse vada karta hu, mai hamesha tumhara sath dunga no matter what situationis. Kabhi tumhe akele nahi chodunga. Kabhi tum par koi museebat nahi aanedunga. Until I am alive, I won't let you get hurt. Until I am alive, I won'tlet you happen anything."

Shewasn't prepared to take what he said. He had voiced it out earlier as well buther hatred for him never let her believe it but she could not understand whyhis words seemed so real today, why his promises seemed so genuine today. Shewas once again lost. It was when he gently gripped her wrist and began walkingout of that house, she realized, thingswere changing. Keeping everything aside, she wanted to consider the 0.1percent possibility that he might nothave killed Vikrant.

*

So I managed to write this. I know this is repeated but I had no choice. I had already started writing before this episode telecasted and then, the episode was too lovely to cut off so I included it.


Precap:

Mahir trusts Bela over Anu.

Anu leaves no stone unturned to expose Bela.

Bela comes to know about Mahir's innocence.


With love

-Harshada

Edited by IAdoreYou - 6 years ago
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The episode was itself beautiful and reading ur ud I was imagining the scene. Mahir is so gentleman that he is gradually increasing in me
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Nice update
Continue soon
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Nice update
Waiting for next part soon...
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awesome update harshu
really loved it
really impatient for the next update
precap is really interesting
finally bela will get to know mahirs innocence

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Harshada, you are as amazing as this story of yours.
As I said in one of my earlier comments, this story is something I will look forward to read. Even more than the actual show. According to me emotions play a vital role in any story. You have that correct and the story would be worth every single second that a readers invests while waiting for it, reading it. It just gives you an exceptional reading experience. And that's exactly how I feel about your writing. You have an amazing grip over the emotions. The flow of emotions, the turmoil that bugs them, everything is so smooth.


You gotta take it, you are amazing with this. I would say this especially when the scenario depicted in the chapter is similar to the one in the show. But you've highlighted their thoughts. That's the catch here. It made look so different and fresh. On a usual basis, I happen to skip the repeated parts but with this story, I couldn't. And that's because you focused on capturing their thoughts.

I am truly loving this. I hope, I get to read more such write up of yours. For now, I pray, you recover soon and your health issues aren't that serious for now. Till then, I will wait for the update. :)
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Originally posted by: -Tadibaaaz-

Harshuuu!🤗


Remember me sweetie? I have read your A/N above. I am so sorry to hear that you aren't doing well. Get well soon sweetheart! Take care of yourself properly. Don't stress yourself about updates.😈

Long time no see!😛 I missed your writing. I have few pending pms of yours in my inbox. Am so sorry for being so so late. Sorry wouldn't be enough.😕 Today I first time watched Naagin 3 and I loved Surbhi and Pearl. So I came to stalk this forum. And guess what! I have found you here!😲🥳 Am so happy right now!

Now coming to TS,although you have only posted a teaser. But I loved that as always. You create magic with your words.⭐️ I am so so happy to read something from you after a really long time. BeHir are so cute. I loved how you have shown Bela's inner conflict. It was fabulous Harshu. Loved it.

Please do not stress about updates. Firstly,you take care of yourself properly. Get well soon. Till then we will wait for it. Your updates are worth waiting.

Lots of love,hugs and kisses,
Rusha


Rusha 🤗🤗 So long, so very long since we last interacted.

Of course, I do. Have you forgotten that I never forget anyone? I don't even remember when we talked last. So I take that as you don't know what has happened to me. I was diagnosed with CVST in last october. In case you aren't aware of what CVST is, then it is Cerebral Venous Sinus Thrombosis, a life threatening blood clot in brain. I haven't been much on IF post that. Life has been crazy messy. I had a recent scan a few days back. The clot was supposed to be have gone by now but it hasn't and which is frightening.

You missed my writing and I missed the beautiful time I had on IF with you Sweethearts. IF is no more the same IF, is it? Probably I have lost my all interest in it. Oh don't worry about old PMs, Rusha. My whole inbox got deleted a while before. I have lost all the messages and trust me, they were so dear to me. It included precious conversations, sweet birthday wishes by you guys and so much more than that.

Oh Nagin 3 is all for Bella and Mahir aka Surbhi and Pearl for me. Honestly, this season lacks in charm of Nagins but I adore Bela and Mahir so my reason for watching the show is truly them. I am equally glad to have you here.

There you started with your usual kind words. Thank you so much. I am glad that you liked this small teaser. I have posted the full update. Read if and when time permits and let me know how you find it.

@Blue above - That means a lot to me.❤️

How have you been?

Much love and many hugs
-Harshada


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