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Posted: 7 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: kusharberry

harshu i hope u remember me

please do take care of ur health dear
even though i love ur writings a lot and impatient to read it but please first get alright then only update iam sure u will be fit soon may god bless you take care dear


Lina🤗 Oh now you are also being like Rusha. I agree that I have got a blood clot in my brain but guys please, I am yet to lose my memory. 😆

Oh health has been real bad and the unfortunate thing is, that I can't do much about it. I did update Lina and it is so good to hear from you after such a long time. Thank you so much for the lovely wishes. I hope you have been well.

Lots of love
-Harshada

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: -shenz-

Honestly speaking, it saddens me to read that this might not be updated sooner. But then I think about your health conditions. I would suggest you rather take care of yourself. That's of utmost priority for now. This can wait. We, readers can wait. Health conditions are not to be ignored. Especially, when I read that yours is rare and life threatening, I would request you not to ignore it. Please, take care of yourself and I hope you have a speedy recovery. Till then, take care. And get well soon.

Also, just in case, if you fail to update soon, like you stated, don't force yourself to give a long update. Do things as per your condition then and do not beat yourself up. That never helps.

About the the cliff falling scene, it depends on you whether you wanna write it or not. You can simply soip it, if it's the same. Like working backwards from having fallen from the cliff and then one liner or two thinking how they had fallen off the cliff. Insert emotions, if need to be and your work is done. ;P

This is just a suggestion, rest, it's upto you. You are the aithor, you know your story best and what works best for your story. :)

The one shot, I won't mind. But I will again stress for you to concentrate on your health for now. That's more important.


PS: you took the responsibility to update your readers about the delay, it's worth appreciating. Not everyone does so. This shows how considerate you are. :)


Firstly, please let me know your name so that I can address you properly. I got a chance to write so I did, and updated and I know, that you have read the update too. I'll respond to your other comment too, in a while.

Oh you really shouldn't think about my health conditions. Thinking about them holds the capacity to make anyone to feel depressed. They are that terrible. Thank you so much. I really appreciate your concern and genuine wishes for me. Health conditions should never be ignored and I ain't ignoring it but the sad thing is, I can't do much about it. That's true. Mine is rare and life threatening. If you want to know more of it, please read the first few lines in my reply to
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Thank you for the kind wishes. I believe that prayers and genuine wishes work. I am sure yours, would do, for me. You are very sweet. Thank you.

In reply to your PS, I would say that is kind of you to appreciate it though I don't think I did anything great but it feels good to hear from you. Thank you for taking out time to write to me.

With love
-Harshada

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Posted: 7 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: --sanchita--

The episode was itself beautiful and reading ur ud I was imagining the scene. Mahir is so gentleman that he is gradually increasing in me


Thank you so much. I am really glad that you enjoyed reading this.😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Khyana

Nice update

Continue soon


Thank you.😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: Navyakanwat4

Nice update

Waiting for next part soon...


Thank you Navya😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: kusharberry

awesome update harshu

really loved it
really impatient for the next update
precap is really interesting
finally bela will get to know mahirs innocence


Thank you so much, Lina. I am glad you enjoyed reading.
I know, next update is awaited one. I hope I will be able to write it soon.😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thank you very much Riddhimaa. I am glad that you liked it.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: -shenz-

Harshada, you are as amazing as this story of yours.

As I said in one of my earlier comments, this story is something I will look forward to read. Even more than the actual show. According to me emotions play a vital role in any story. You have that correct and the story would be worth every single second that a readers invests while waiting for it, reading it. It just gives you an exceptional reading experience. And that's exactly how I feel about your writing. You have an amazing grip over the emotions. The flow of emotions, the turmoil that bugs them, everything is so smooth.


You gotta take it, you are amazing with this. I would say this especially when the scenario depicted in the chapter is similar to the one in the show. But you've highlighted their thoughts. That's the catch here. It made look so different and fresh. On a usual basis, I happen to skip the repeated parts but with this story, I couldn't. And that's because you focused on capturing their thoughts.

I am truly loving this. I hope, I get to read more such write up of yours. For now, I pray, you recover soon and your health issues aren't that serious for now. Till then, I will wait for the update. :)


And it is really sweet of you to say that. Thank you so much for taking out time to write this sweet comment. I know. I have read that you are looking forward to read this and I am just hoping that I don't let down your expectations. That does mean so much to me.

True that. I second you on that. If I have to be honest, I write silly stories which actually have no stories. My stories are high on emotions and low on everything else.

@Bold above - When you say that this is worth investing time in, I think I should not regret writing this. You are being too kind, really. Thank you doesn't sound enough to convey my gratitude but I don't know what else to say.

I think you gotta take it that you are too lovely with appreciating my writing because I don't think that I write any good. 😆 I take that as a compliment that you read this despite this being a repeated part.

I am glad to hear that you are liking this story. I guess, you will because my obsession over Mahir and Bela doesn't seem to be fading anytime soon to me. Your prayers would be the best thing that I can have because I won't lie, I am badly in need of them to survive. Survive is the word. I am at a critical point of my life where there is no guarantee of what can happen next. So I just hope your prayers work for me and I get out of this, safe and healthy.

Thanks again, for dropping by.

With love
-Harshada
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Posted: 7 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: IAdoreYou


And it is really sweet of you to say that. Thank you so much for taking out time to write this sweet comment. I know. I have read that you are looking forward to read this and I am just hoping that I don't let down your expectations. That does mean so much to me.

True that. I second you on that. If I have to be honest, I write silly stories which actually have no stories. My stories are high on emotions and low on everything else.

@Bold above - When you say that this is worth investing time in, I think I should not regret writing this. You are being too kind, really. Thank you doesn't sound enough to convey my gratitude but I don't know what else to say.

I think you gotta take it that you are too lovely with appreciating my writing because I don't think that I write any good. 😆 I take that as a compliment that you read this despite this being a repeated part.

I am glad to hear that you are liking this story. I guess, you will because my obsession over Mahir and Bela doesn't seem to be fading anytime soon to me. Your prayers would be the best thing that I can have because I won't lie, I am badly in need of them to survive. Survive is the word. I am at a critical point of my life where there is no guarantee of what can happen next. So I just hope your prayers work for me and I get out of this, safe and healthy.

Thanks again, for dropping by.

With love
-Harshada

Firstly, my name, it's Shahnaz (pronounced as Sheh-naaz) and I mostly go by my pen-name Shenz. You can opt to address me with any name that you wish to ;P

Secondly, I read about your health conditions and I just hope and pray you have a speedy recovery and a healthy life ahead.

Thirdly, coming to this reply. It's always good to appreciate good. I believe in reviewing things that I read, at least on a platform like this. And this is worth every penny to review and appreciate. Because I don't think I can come across flaws when it comes to this. You have mastered emotions. And I am cent percent sure that there's not a single way that I would be left disappointed with this story. If anything, I would be elated to read your work.About expectations, don't stress yourself with that. :)

This isn't silly! yes, it's high on emotions but not silly, neither is it low on anything else. Every story has a basic element to it. Yours has to be emotions. And it's no harm when you are so good with it.

If you are writing something, you should never be regret that decision of yours. According to me, you should always write for yourself, then comes the rest of the world. Frankly speaking, I've never been too kind. Blunt and straightforward at times but then, there's nothing that's not worth appreciating about this write-up. So, it's just my way of letting you know how amazingly do you weave your stories. And you shouldn't be thanking me either. You deserve each and every praise that comes your way.. in fact, even more.

That's where you are wrong, I am not lovely. But I get it when you say that you don't think you write good enough. I say that all the time :P Every writer says that, at least on this forum most of them do. What I can tell you is, you are good. There's a charm to your write up that is hard to find. I had to read that part even though it was a repeat, because it was not. It highlighted a different side from what we saw on screen. And I would have melted, if this was what they played on screen. But Alas!

There's nothing to not like about this story.. Thankfully. Because my obsession over the two isn't dying anytime soon either. You will survive and come out healthy and safe. I along with all your loved ones, friends and readers are praying for you!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#50
love it love it!!👏 continuuee

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