BeHir TS - | Until I'm Alive | [Part 2 on Pg 9]Completed

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Until I'm Alive



| Prologue|

"Bella... Bella."

Her eyes shot at him as he continued calling for her in his unconscious state.

She didn't know what was he. She didn't. His gestures were making her fall weak in her revenge. Despite being in tremendous pain, all that was in his mind was she, Bella. She had to kill him because he had killed her Vikrant. She had vowed to take revenge of her Vikrant's death but Mahir was surely making it difficult for her. If she had met him in different circumstances, she might just would have ended up admiring him for his qualities and humbleness.

"No, no, no. You can't fall weak. You have to kill him." She chanted to herself to regain the courage to finish Mahir's life and leaned towards him.

"Mai tumhe kuch nahi hone dunga."

She pushed herself back right after his words fell in her ears. The images of their marriage, his comforting words, her fall over him, he picking her in his arms flashed before her eyes and she ran away from him.

"What is happening to me? Why is this happening to me?" Falling on the ground, she clutched her head unable to bear what was going on in her life. She couldn't let Mahir stay alive but she couldn't bring herself to kill him either. It was messed up.

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This is my version to make Bella think a little sane (and deep) and bring Mahir's innocence in front of her, soon as I don't know when we will get that in the show.

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-Harshada

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice start👍🏼
I liked it and am waiting eagerly for the upcoming chapter.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Loved it
Eagerly awaiting the next update

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Posted: 7 years ago
#4
Nice start...
Waiting to read more...
Continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice start...
Loved it..
Continue soon...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#6
Awesome Start😊
You're an amazing writer😉
Please continue soon and pm me😃
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Super update
Continue soon
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Nice start
Update soon
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Beautifully written.. Looking forward to the next update
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I really liked how you have highlighted her confused state with such ease. Honestly, I am eager to know your version of this story because somehow I feel this would be way more pleasing for me as a reader ;)

Thanks for writing and sharing this piece of work. Do update the next one soon.

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