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Posted: 7 years ago

4- 2





Raghav was frustrated, he just came back from the temple to inform kalpi about the result. He knew she would be at the temple because she was their the last time when chandu twin died. He remember kalpi refusing to leave or eat because of their son.

Kalpi was their begging to Lord Ramji to bring back her other son. He tried everything to convince her, but she refused. Sighing Raghav walk back to the hospital. Vitthal asked how she was doing. Raghav sad says " she won't even look at me. "

Vitthal sigh " this is like the last time all over again. What are we going to do?"

Paki daughter listening decided to go and talk to kalpi. Paki asks her where she was going , but she got no reply. Paki knit her brow. She says her daughter acts more like her father. Always going somewhere and keeping secrets.

Sunnil grabbing her father hand asks if her mom will be alright. Raghav hugs her. " Your mother is just worried about your brother. How about you go and cheer her up"

When he said this she smile happily. Paki getting an idea decided to follow. Sammy tells her not to cause any trouble.

Meanwhile, abhi finding the location of dimple whereabouts got out the car. Turns out dimple came to what looks like an animal hospital. He noticed a car which came from the city. He smirk " I got you know"

Entering he searched around asking if theirs a woman by the name of dimple who checked in. The nurses said no. Just than abhi saw a figure enter a room wearing a designer heel. He excuse himself and enter the room. " I don't know why your hiding , but you need to come with me."

The woman turn around eyes widen " you?" They both said

Abhi says in head so model dimple was actually that pagal woman. He sigh , while the girl confused wonder why he was here.

Abhi move to the girl causing her to move back, hitting the desk. " Well now that I found you, come on let's go. Chandu wants to talk to you"

The dimple girl says " I'm not going anywhere"

Abhi was about to grab her hand, but decided to corner her instead." you have to, your boyfriend wants to speak with you"

The girl confused, wonder how he knew her boyfriend. " Did something happen?" She asked looking into his eyes

Abhi looking back, felt a pull. It was like she was seducing him with out making much effort. She was pulling him in with those innocent eyes which made him scared" I will tell you on the way" he said

The girl nod, she was about to move when one of the animals she was taking care of got up, and nudge her while trying to escape. The dimple girl surprise, moved forward causing her to lend on abhi chest.

Both froze not knowing what to say. She could hear his heart drumming, a soothing Melody. For a second, she felt drawn to it.

They didn't notice someone entering and watching them with anger until he grabs abhi " stay away from my girlfriend" he says before punching him in the face.

The dimple girl scream. While abhi falls on his butt. He felt something wet slide down his nose, and realise it was blood. Seeing this his heart starts to pick up.

The dimple girl says " his bleeding we should help him"

" I don't care, he was trying to make a move on you"

She tried explaining what happen, but remember something " you don't know him?"

The tall man frown " I've never seen this man in my life"

This confused her. She turned back to abhi who was still watching the blood before leaving with her boyfriend.

Unbeknown to all of them, the real dimple who was hiding in the room, made her ascape with her manager. Turns out it was her abhi saw earlier , she came to visit her grandmother who worked there. But when she saw abhi, the one her boyfriend had shown long ago in a picture. She had to hide.

She couldn't go back...not yet, not until she find herself again.

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Posted: 7 years ago
awesome update
hope kalpi will get her son soon...
is dimple have double role!!!
it's really interesting to be read more...
thanks for this lovely update
update soon Doll!!!!!
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4-3


Abhi now sitting in his car recall what happened few minutes ago. How his heart felt like someone was trying to rip it from his chest. This started when he went to the crime scene where his mother died. Raghav didn't know he had left the house that day.

When he reached, he saw blood everywhere on the wall and floor. He thought he saw a hand out from being covered. Seeing that caused something in him. All he knew after that is that he hates seeing blood.

Abhi about to start his car stop when his phone rang. " Hello" he says

" Abhi where are you? You must come to the hospital to get tested"

Confused he asks " tested for what?"

Their was a small pause before Raghav spoke " chandu got into an accident last night"

Abhi shock drops the phone. He repeats some words in Arabic , before picking up his phone. He listen as Raghav explains everything to him. " I'll be right there" he says before hanging up.

Meanwhile, kalpi still at the temple wouldn't move. She kept crying for her son while asking Ramji to help her. Just than paki daughter arrived. She ran to kalpi and hug her. She told kalpi not to do this.

She says it hurts her seeing her in pain. Still kalpi didn't blink. The girl says " chandu wouldn't want to see you like this, none of your children would want to see you like this...not even me" she wipes kalpi tears " ma... Please don't give up, chandu...we will find someone for him. Ramji would never take a mother away from her child. Please trust me ma"

Hearing this kalpi looks at her, " surbhi...my ...chandu...he will be alright...right?"

The woman now name surbhi nods. " Believe me ma...this is words coming from your daughter"

Kalpi hugs her and They both cry together. Surbhi says " everyone is waiting for you. Their all worried, "

" Your right, chandu will need me to be strong."

She thanks her again this time with determination. They were on aware of two pair of eyes watching their interaction.

Paki seeing the hurt look in sunnil puts a hand on her shoulder " your mom has no room for you in her heart. The only two that are important to her is my daughter and chandu. She doesn't even know you exist." She says

Sunnil turns away from the scene. She says " baba says
She will come around. She just have to wait."

Paki scoff " your father is lying to you. Who was the one that was mostly there in your life was it your mom?...no...it was Raghav. It won't be long before surbhi takes the small space she has left for you. And kalpi makes her...her permanent daughter"

Sunnil hearing this told her to stop. She says "her mom may not give her the affection she wants but I'm sure after I bring home the trouph for my team, she will love me"

Paki says " that's just a dream , please wake up and see how selfish your mom is. "

Sunnil now angry asks why she's bad mouthing her mom. She says what did her mom ever do to her. Paki upset says " you won't understand because your young. When your a little older you will understand how selfish your mom can be."

Sunnil watch as paki walk away. She was about to as well when her mom calls her and asks why she was here. Before she could answer surbhi beat her to it. " You must have came to pray for chandu"

Sunnil says " No...I mean...that's not why"

Kalpi became upset. " Your brother is lying in his death bed , if your not hear to pray for him than why are you here" she asks

Sunnil says " ma...I...I..ccam-"

Kalpi says " why can't you be more serious like your brother and surbhi. Their so worried about chandu while your walking around doing nothing to help."

Sunnil hates when her mom accuse her of something. This makes her so upset. " Ma...please..don't say that. I'm worried about Bhai just as much as everyone here" she says in a shaky voice

Kalpi apologetic says " I'm sorry sunnil, I'm just tierd"

Surbhi urged them to walk back so they can find some way to help chandu. When they reached abhi was back, but unfortunately he didn't match. Kalpi asked if their were any good news. Raghav says no.

Suddenly the doctor came back. Everyone held their breath. " We found a match" he says " but this person lives far, we will have to contact and make arrangements"

Kalpi happy thanks Ramji. Everyone hug one another. Kalpi says " give me the phone number , I will call."

And so kalpi calls the number , when someone answered she explain her dilemma to the old woman. The woman denied her request. Kalpi begged and plead, but the woman says she won't do it to her grandson.

Kalpi than says "at least talk to your grandson about it. My son...my only son will die if he doesn't get that kidney."

The woman sigh, " fine...he just came I will call you later."

Kalpi hesitating thanks her before hanging up. Everyone asked what happen, and she explained. They all became happy. Kalpi by the glass window looks at her son. She says in her head " don't worry, ma will get you well again. Once that's done, I will find out who did this to you"

The next few days they waited for the call, but nothing. She kept calling the number but no one answered. Kalpi became worried. One night while they were sleeping she got a text to meet up. She Quickly she puts her shoes and grab her key.

Raghav had asked where she was going, and she said she will be back. She grab her documents for the kidney transplant and left the house. Paki seeing her leave wonder where she was going so late.

By the time kalpi made it, the sun was almost up. She stop by the temple and saw an old woman with burns on the side of her face. Kalpi respectfully greets her and hand over the documents. The lady sigh she says " my grandson is the only one left of my family. His trying to go aboard to become a surgeon"

Kalpi says " I can help him with that, after my chandu is save"

The woman turns away and looks at ramji she says " the world is very strange, people are selling humans for profit, doctors are becoming selfish for money. They all have each other's back, but if my grandson goes into surgery, who to say that he will come back alive." She says

She looks at kalpi " you rich could easily end my grandson life to save your own. Taking all his parts and lie saying their was a complication , and than donate it to a more rich family who needs it. Who will have my grandson back when that happens"

Kalpi understanding her problem says she won't let something like that happen. She promise on her life. The woman understood kalpi emotion, she was about to agree, but her fear got the best of her.

Kalpi took her pen out. In a hurry " quickly sign, I don't have much time"

The woman shook her head, " I can't, I'm sorry, but just like how your chandu is important, I can't take the risk of loosing my grandson." She says walking from her and head down the stairs.

Shock...kalpi ran after her. She grab the lady hand pulling and tugging. She beg her to save her son. But the lady nudge her telling her to leave her.

Kalpi pulling while the lady pull back cries. The lady pulls one more time causing her to fall down the stairs and hitting her head hard on the concrete floor. Surprise, kalpi ran down the stairs while asking if she was alright.

She saw a pool of blood coming from her head. This made her step back. " I...I..I..didn't do it...it...was...an... A... A..ccident" she says scared.

She quickly grab her paper from the lady, and grab her phone to call 9/11, but when she heard voices coming she panicked. She saw a letter in the lady pocket and quickly grabs it before leaving. When she got in her car, she shakily held the wheel, while using another phone to call her private ambulance.

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Posted: 7 years ago
such a quick and quite update it's really interesting
pakhi is try to use kalpi daughter against her hope she didn't fall in her trap
and hopefully kalpi give affection to sunil
now what will kalpi going to do?? miss ragna moments Darling
thank you for updating update soon Darling
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Posted: 7 years ago
Great update hope that lady is fine
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update
Its fabulously written
Update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: vanajaragna

such a quick and quite update it's really interesting
pakhi is try to use kalpi daughter against her hope she didn't fall in her trap
and hopefully kalpi give affection to sunil
now what will kalpi going to do?? miss ragna moments Darling
thank you for updating update soon Darling



I understand , but I said this chapter won't have a lot of Raghav moment. It will focus more on the drama, and kalpi concern for her son causing her to become a grey character. How a mother will go through so many length to get what she wants. Beside s They won't have time for romance, knowing their son could die at any moment. This is a ragna story and what they have to do as a parent . 1-3 kalpi was in her pre-adult stage, where she can have all the romance in the world, but not anymore. Don't worry though, they will have some romance, but it won't be all the time.
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Posted: 7 years ago
It's has been long time that you updated hope your fine

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