Kalpi: RAGNA FF: chapter 4 part 3 ; page 80

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Prologue

" im sorry mam, but raghav wont be waking up for a while."

Gauri, sad cries on kamla. " this is my fault, if i didnt say i was leaving raghav wouldnt have tried to stop me."

Kamla ressures her" dont blame yourself gauri, its no your fault"

Gauri wipe her tears, kamla says she will grab her something to drink. When kamla was gone, gauri stop pretending. She walk to raghav room and ask the doctor if he was sure raghav wont wake up. The doctor nod, while they were talking, they didnt nottice kamla at the door. Shock she quickly turn to leave.

She heard someone calling her, this made her call for a taxi. A young se ven year old girl look up at her Mom. " where are we going mam?"

" somewhere far away kalpi, i will inform your dad later." suddenly kamla heard a gun shot. She covers kalpi ears while she scream.

" what is that mama"

" its nothing" kamla panicking look behind to see the car rushing and bumping into them. She asks the driver to drive faster. The driver panicking press the speeding paddle. He did not nottice another car heading to them.

Kamla seeing this, look at her daughter before smiling at her. " live well kalpi" she says before throwing her out the car. " mama!!" kalpi scream

A young kalpi watch as the two cars crash. The car sent By gauri stop to make a call. Gauri tells him to make sure shes dead, she says no one can stop her from getting her sons inheritance n company.

Few weeks later...

Gauri after her husband funeral meets with the man that hold tu wills. The man says, " raghav has to stay alive in order for you to get his share. If he dies before 26, his share will go to his wife."

Gauri angrily hits her hand" you cant be seriouse, vishal"

" im sorry mam" he saya

Gauri got up to leave. She says fine, i will make sure his alive, but what person will marry a man whose in a comma" she grins

Vishal mouth drop. He watch as gauri leaves before rubbing ji temple. He look out a picture of his once family, before crying" kamla... Kalpi.." he saya

Elsewhere

A se ven year old kalpi was walking around tierd, she hasnt eaten at all, she looked dirty and she smell bad. She saw a group of kids eating and lick her lps. The boy watching her tells her to go away. Kalpi didnt leave instead she plead for her to eat. The Boy says" we had to steal to eat, if you want Food, get it yourself"

Kalpi turn to what he pointed to. It was a food stand. A man was selling ladoos. Kalpi turn to them boy" but stealing is bad"

The kids laugh" than stay hungry than"

Kalpi watch them eat once more, deciding she walk to them stand. She asks the man for Food. The man asks if she have money, kalpi shook her head. The man says no money no Food. He tells her to get away from his cart.

Dejected, she turn to leave, but stop when her stomach growls again. She asks the man one last time, and when he refuse she watch as the man turn to grab something. The group told her to gran the Food, kalpi turn around and quickly grab four ladoos. " sorry mister" she says before running.

The man chase after her while The children start yelling. Kalpi seeing a small whole on the floor, jump over it. She made sure the man didnt see. She stop a few feet away" please forgive me" she says

The man thinking he got kalpi walk to her. Kalpi grin, when he trip. The children cheer for her, while the boy grab some more ladoos. He walk to kalpi and puts a hand around her shoulder" stick with us kid, and you will live well"

" Whats your name, kid?"

Kalpi smile" kalpana"

The boy grin" im pak"

" pak? Is it for something" she says confuse

" i will tell you my full name once you gain our trust"

Kalpi smile, " deal"

To be continued...

Index

chapter 1

Prologue; page 1

Part 1; page 2

Part 2; page 3

Part 3; page 4

Part 4; page 5

Part 5; page 6

Part 6; page 7

Part7; page 8

Part 8; page9

Part 9; page 11

Part 10; page 11

Part 11; page 12

Part 12: page 13

Part 13; page 15

Part 14; page 17

Part 15; page 18

Part 16; page 19

Part 17; page 20

Part 18; page 21

Part 19; page 23

Part 20; page 24

Part 21; page 25

CHAPTER 2..

Part 1; page 27

Part 2; page 29

Part 3; page 29

Part 4; page 30

Part 5; page 32

Part 6; page 33

Part 7; page 35

Part 8; page 37

Part 9; page 38

Part 10; page 39

Part 11; page 41

Part 12; page 42

Part 13; page 44

Part 14; page 45

Part 15;page 46

Part 16; page 47

Part 17; page 48

Part 18; page 49

Part 19; page 50

Part 20; page 51

Chapter 3

Part 1; page 52

Part 2; page 54

Part 3; page 55

Part 4; page 56

Part 5; page 57

Part 6; page 58

Part 7; page 59

Part 8; page 61

Part 9; page 61

Part 10; page 63

Part 11; page 64

Part 12; page 65

Part 13; page 66

Part 14; page 68

Part 15; page 69

Part 16; page 70

Part 17; page 71

Part 18; page 72

Part 19; page 73

Part 20; page 74

Part 21; page 76

Preview for chapter 4

Chapter 4

Prologue: pg 77

Part 1: page 78

Part 2: page 79

Part 3: page 80

Edited by Kanie01 - 7 years ago

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Antara

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Superb dear very interesting dear please may I request u please please complete it there are lots of incomplete story

I m sorry dear if I said something wrong

It's amazing please update soon

Welcome dear

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naam11

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Nice start... please update soon.

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MadhuGupta

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Nice. Please update next part soon.

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naharkhan123

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Interesting start plz continue update

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Kanie01

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Part 1

15 years later...

A huge celebration was going on. Gauri was making sure everything was perfect for her step son. She walk to the room where the bride to be was, and smile. " you look so beautiful paki. My son is the luckiest man on earth."

" thank you gauri-ma" she blush shly

Preeto says of course " she took after me"

Gauri laugh at her friend, paki remembering something says " I saw one of the maids heading to the secret room you said not to enter."

Gauri surprise thank her and turn to leave, she was upset because she specifically told them not to enter that room, only the nurse. Preeto turn to paki " what secret room?"

" it's on the third floor, it's where she have her alone time, and moan over her family."

Preeto frown " poor thing, I can't believe her husband died the same night her son went into comma"

" yeah I know, but I wonder why they don't just pull him out of life support. I heard he will never wake up."

Meanwhile, Gauri was upset, she specifically told everyone not to go on that floor. Years past and raghav has matured and will soon reach his 40s, he could have killed him now, but stupid vitthal says raghav has to give her the property.

Luckily she found a loop whole to this, and today she will make an announcement. After all no one knows raghav is still in a comma except paki, her mom, and vitthal. Everything will change today.

Gauri heading to the door saw the maid " what are you doing up here, did I tell you to come here?"

" n-no m..a..m"

" than why are you here?"

The nurse nervous says " I was lost mam, forgive me"

" your one of the new maids "

She nods, Gauri rub her temple " go down and pack your things because your fired."

" what?" She says shock

" did you not hear me, leave" she says angrily

The maid quickly ran down stairs crying. Gauri mumbles under her breath. Suddenly she heard noise in the room. Confuse , she open to see a very weak raghav trying to stand.

Surprise, she ran to him " raghav, y-your awake"

" mam?" " w-what happen to me"

" dont talk now, i will be right back." She says helping him on the bed.

When she step out, she curse. " why is he awake? The medicine should have been working. And where is his nurse" she growls

While thinking, she suddenly smirk. Wait a minute, this could come in handy, she thought. She quickly went down, and grab her documents from her office, before making her way upstairs. When she reentered, she saw raghav trying to get up again.

" beta, don't strain yourself. Your probably confuse right now. Let me help you"

Raghav nod. Preeto showed him a paper. She says it's his medicine paper, she needs him to sign so he can get better. Raghav confuse and head spinning, nod.

Gauri grab a pen and hand it to him. She direct him on how to sign. Once done, she thank him.

To be continued...

Gauri finally got what she wanted, what do you think will happen next, what about sweet Raghav, will he ever wake up. Well until next time bye. ( please leave a comment on what you think will happen, thank you)

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naharkhan123

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Superb update hope raghav get well soon nd take revenge from gauri nd kalpi where is she ? Plz update soon

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Kanie01

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Originally posted by: naharkhan123
Superb update hope raghav get well soon nd take revenge from gauri nd kalpi where is she ? Plz update soon

Thanks for th comments everyone, an nahar kalpi is coming, right no raghav is in no condition to move, gauri is making sure to keep it that way. Vitthal is a family Friend , he will playa a role to and who ca guess the son marrying paki

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