DECEPTION~Dark FF Ch 8(a) updated!!! 25/07

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Hello guys!
I have long been away from IF. I also had to leave my FF incomplete. But, I am back with a refreshing Dark FF (because I love them😆). Hope you like this and surely will complete this one as well as update frequently.

Teaser

Anika's POV

I looked towards him as he lifted the veil falling on my face with earnest request. I was ready to plead, beg, and implore anything...anything he wanted me to do if he would stop this. I knew only he could stop this.

Unfazed and cold, he lifted his fingers painted in vermilion and moved towards the partition on my forehead. The lights went off and so did my last hope. I closed my eyes to shed the ocean of tears I had been holding till now, knowing that my life is going to change forever.

CHAPTER 1: The Sufferer - Page 1

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/147369270

CHAPTER 2: Memory Lane - Page 2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/147391735

CHAPTER 3: The accusation - Page 3

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ishqbaaaz/4992625/deception-dark-ff-ch-8-a-updated-25-07?pn=3

CHAPTER 4: The punishment - Page 5

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/147430964

CHAPTER 5 : The Cure : Page 8

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/147518644

CHAPTER 6: The Revenge-Part (a): Page 11

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/147684893

CHAPTER 7: The Revenge-Part (b): Page 13

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CHAPTER 8: The Escape - Part (a): Page 15

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ishqbaaaz/4992625/deception-dark-ff-ch-8-a-updated-25-07


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Interesting teaser. Looking forward to reading more😃
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Awesome promo
Waiting to read more
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Intriguing and interesting mysterious prologue
Continue soon
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CHAPTER 1: The Sufferer

Anika's POV

He was holding my wrists. Not merely holding them, he was literally piercing his fingers into my soft skin. Was he angry? Furious? Enraged? Did he have the right to throw his anger on me? Forget about throwing, did he even have the right to be furious in the first place?

I was the victim. The sufferer. Their scapegoat. I have been used by everyone throughtout my life, so much that I only breathe today not live. But, this was something unexpected. My vision was blurred by my tears.

Sub-consciously, I was moving towards a jet black Mercedes which cruised down the freeway, travelling South. We did not utter a word. I was feeling haunted as the car drove through mysterious asphalt strips with spindle trees on either sides until we finally reached our destination The OB Mansion.

The mansion loomed proudly behind creaky iron gates. It stood in the middle of a huge piece of land. It was like a country of its own. Rows of trees on either side swayed to the chilly winds blowing. I couldn't imagine how far I was from the city.

We got down from the respective sides of the vehicle. Once again he came to my face. He had calmed down a bit after the hour long ride.

Shivay: You must be knowing right what to do next. You are "very, very experienced Miss Anika. Oops, I beg your pardon, Mrs Anika Shivay Singh.

Once again tears welled up my eyes and before I could retort. He grabbed by hands and dragged me through the stone path towards the mansion.

He kicked open the main entrance and dragged me through the stairs straight towards his bedroom. Once inside, he bolted the doors and took heavy steps towards me. To say the least, I was petrified. In all these months, I had never ever seen or I had imagined that the Shivay who appeared to be so calm and pacific outside was such a beast in real.

Each step he took towards me, I took way from him until there was no way I could move. He pinned me to the wall, caged by his arms. He took deep breaths, hot deep breaths which was literally burning my skin. My heart was wailing inside but I could only manage to sob in his presence. I was so scared. After what seemed like ages, he finally spoke.

Shivay: You will stay here, in this mansion till I find Tia, not as my wife but as my servant. If you ever utter a word about this marriage to anyone, you know very well the loving people you will loose as a result. Now, you will have to pay for what you have done.

He completed smashing the wall beside me. I managed to nod in a yes and he pointed his fingers towards the door where a servant was standing with my bags.

Silently, I moved towards the outhouse where the servants of the mansion lived. The man instructed me to take rest as of now and the remaining instructions pertaining to work will be given by their head servant tomorrow.

Author's POV

"Find her, no matter what!, he barked. He threw his phone on the floor breaking it into pieces and walked up to the window from where he could see Anika crying inside her room.

"You are the reason, I have failed today. The damage is done, Anika. Things will be worst now. Wait and Watch!", he pulled the curtains slowly as her weeping figure disappeared from his sight.

Link for Chapter 2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/147391735

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Posted: 7 years ago
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That was absolutely outstanding! A dark ff on shivika is what we are craving these days! I am really looking forward to reading this story. Plz continue.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: jaansahiba

That was absolutely outstanding! A dark ff on shivika is what we are craving these days! I am really looking forward to reading this story. Plz continue.


Thank you so much for your encouraging words. Will update frequently😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome start! Feel sooo bad for Anika😭. How can SSO be too ruthless😔.
Do continue soon! Looking forward to read how shivika's story will shape up here.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: adnilover

Awesome start! Feel sooo bad for Anika😭. How can SSO be too ruthless😔.

Do continue soon! Looking forward to read how shivika's story will shape up here.


Thankyou. Will update soon. All the actions of these characters will be justified as the story will unfold. Keep reading 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Love your first chapter, please update soon

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