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Posted: 7 years ago
#21
Superb
I loved the prologue n cs
Maaneet married recently yet to enter km
Yeah n Meera married before
All 4 are really young
Very much excited to read first chapter...

Post soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#22
Hi di!!. Concept of arrange marrige looks lovely. Waiting for your update
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome Cs love it interesting to see how it goes
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Will you be updating today?
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Posted: 7 years ago
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i think i gonna need help.
this concept is my fav so i don't want any injustice with it . i typed one updated but i'm highly dissaponted with it .
i have 2 tracks in my mind but i an unanle to decide what to chosse😕🥱
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ramjanki

i think i gonna need help.

this concept is my fav so i don't want any injustice with it . i typed one updated but i'm highly dissaponted with it .
i have 2 tracks in my mind but i an unanle to decide what to chosse😕🥱


hmm choose what will go well with both characters... also you can keep other track for another story/ another time
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Keepdreaming


hmm choose what will go well with both characters... also you can keep other track for another story/ another time

that's the thing i'm confused with . 😭
mujhe samaj nhi aa rha part post kru y nhi or rewrite it again
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ramjanki

that's the thing i'm confused with .😭

mujhe samaj nhi aa rha part post kru y nhi or rewrite it again


if you are confused then try to edit it little bit ...no need to delete or just saved the other part
and write again then compare both
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Note : before reading i want to let u know that this story gonna revolve around a strict family from both side . dearies we always not get a happy enviorment in real life generally it is seen that our every moment get judged be it of bride or groom .


Chapter 1



S- meera bahu anytime maan is going to be here with his dulhan . prepare everything fast . i don't want any loophole

Meera gulped her salive and nodded in yes and prepare everything.
When yash come their

Y- calm down meera what so hurry
M- leave yash if dadi saw u here n then i am gonna be in problem .
Yash frowned but left knowing his dadi is not going to like him around meera when so much people are around .

..

Maan forward his hand finding geet feeling difficulty to come out bcoz of heavy lehnga causing her to look toward him . when he blink his eyes assuring her to hold causibg her to place her hand on his.

As soon guards saw his car entering in km he informed savitri immideatly .

When maan and geet come on door they find many relatives waiting for them . on savitri order meera did thrir aarti & then the post wedding rituals .

Geet was about to put foot forward when it suddenly twisted causing her to about to fall but maan was fast enough to hold her by her waist . when one old relative whisper
R- kaisi bahu lai ho savitri ? abhi toh grh pravesh bhi mhi hua !
But it was audible to savitri only
Maan make her stand immidetly knowing his relatives and dadi they will taunt her for sure .
Savitri didn't like it at all . that's totally opposite to manner .

S- meera bring geet inside
Meera hold geet hand and guide both of them inside .
After that completing all rituals geet guided toward room .

..
When maan enter in his room he found geet sitting on his bed waiting for him . that's gonna be difficult . he don't know about her may be she have expectation but he is not ready untill he come to know about her.

Maan take a deep breath & move toward her who was looking like a scared kitten .
Geet try to control her heart beat almost on the verge of getting a mini heart attack. First she never ever for once share a single word with him .
Leave words she haven't even look at his face properly . only his one pic she has that too in business attire . from some magzzine.
Neither she know what to do nor what to expect.
When she hear him calling for her
M- geet ?

Causing her to look at him through veil .
M- u can change . the day was tiring u must be tired there is washroom go & change .
Geet look at him . he didn't even open her veil . was he forced?
That was the first question come in her mind!
What happen?
Did she do something that make him angry?

M- u'll change their . i'll change here only.
Causing her to get up absent mindly. . with thousand of fear taking place in her mind & heart .

She come out only to find he changed himself into a lose shirt & pajamas .
that's when she see him properly
he is handsome she must admit

geet smaked her head for thinking like that
G- jhalli aisa bhi koi karta h?
Agar unhe pata chal gya toh?
Kya sochenge voh?

Maan look at his dulhan in wonder . he was aware since the moment she come out then suddenly she smaked her head and murmer something that was not audible to him

He look at her in wonder what happen so suddenly that she behave like that? But she looked cute . no wonder his dadi was hell bent on him marrying her .

M- tum thik ho?
Maan asked causing her to stop in track and bite her lower lip to hide het embaracment
So she was caught .

Maan come toward her hold her by her waist and pull her toward himself
Causing her heart to go dhak dhak
He free her lip

M- u'll hurt urself .
No need to get embarraced .
it's ur house too

causing her to look at him
M- come it's late now
She just nodded in yes and followed him .


Maan settle himself on one side but when he saw she didn't make a moment he said
M- come geet u can sleep here
Geet look at him & then bed and settled on other side .

Seeing her getting uncomfortable he lay on his side and switched off light .

She look at him before turning to oppsite direction she lay and closed her eyes .
Having many questions but both didn't know how to break this uncomfortable silance .



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If u want this story to continue then do let me know ur view

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Posted: 7 years ago
#30
I love your note
now gonna read

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