AvNeil SS Note Pg 4 (14 June)

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Neil is not in love Metali he still loves Avni but got married to Metali just as self assumed punishment for not trusting supporting and accepting Avni after he found alive or even found out about Mowgli. Except Neil no one knows abut Neela death truth in khanna house. For now not even Ali, Aman and DD eventually they will.


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey Kanika!

It's good that you posted this here too. I've voted and commented for the first chapter on Wattpad. Update it here soon. I'll comment here from the next update. Because I love IF more than Wattpad. 😆

Waiting for the second chapter...😃
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Glad to know you updated the story here also. Commented on Wattpad for the first chapter. Post it on IF also.
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Totally an uncalled concept . I am intrigued how he will end up with Avni and she will accept him . Thanks for updating here .
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PART 1: Situation


Khanna House


It been six months of Neil Metali's wedding. Shweta goes to to Neil room in morning to call them for breakfast. She see Metali sleeping on sofa and Neil on bed she shocked further she goes to wake Neil and notices him hugging a photo tightly. She tried to take it and saw Avni and Mowgli's photo. She tried to wake him up.

Avni let me sleep please I came late... Neil says

Shweta was shocked that she realised there nothing right between Metali and Neil they are married but their is no relationship between them. She comes down.

What happened Shwetaji. Prakash says

Nothing is alright. Shweta says

Did Tillu say something to you. Bebe says

No Bebe but there nothing right between Metali Neil. Shweta says

Are you that relationship which never had love Tillu was just full filling his promises made to Metali. He still loves Avni will always love her. Bebe says

Bebe is right. Prakash says

But bebe... Shweta says

Metali comes there.

You were saying Shweta why did you stop. Bebe says

Truth will remain truth. Prakash says

Good morning Be... (Metali bends down to touch her feet Bebe moves away) Good Morning pa... Metali says bending down again to touch his feet

Metali let me remind you for you I will always stay Uncle for you unfortunately are my son Tillu's wife thats it. Prakash says moving away

Good morning Uncle. Syesha says

Mishti beta come have breakfast with us. Bebe says

Ji bebe. Syesha say bending down to touch her feet

Beta daughters don't touch feet the hug. Bebe says

Metali feel bad and make a face

Ji bebe.. uncle... Syeasha says

It not Uncle beta you would call me daddu if not daddu call me Nannu Avni is my daughter. Prakash says

And me uncle. KK asks

What ever you want. Prakash says

Superman. Syesha says

Mishti.. Neil says hugging her

Bro... KK says

KK you also came. Neil asks

Tillu where are you going. Shweta asks

I have work. Neil says

You and Metali work in the same place if she still so can you be. Shweta says'

Metali and I work in police force sure Mom but not the same place cases and if you haven't realised I am commissioner and she is just a inspector. u work with DD as ACP under me not Metali. Mishti how come you are here today in morning come sit. Neil says

Superman I had gone to meet Angel and Mowgli. Syesha says

Avni Bhabhi send gifts for Prakash Papa and Shweta Aunty it is their anniversary. KK says

See my daughter remembers some people don't care. Prakash says

But why Avni didn't come herself. Neil says with smile

Neil Self Talk] At least Dad's anniversary I could see her it been so long I haven't seen why did she move away whenever I go there to meet them she is never there.

She is actually busy with some work. KK says

Prakash's phone rings he pick it up

Happy anniversary Papaji.. What are your plans. Avni asks

Avni puttar. There are no plans. Prakash says

Why papaji. Mummji and you should go for dinner. Avni says

Yes dad Avni's idea is good Mom and you should go for dinner. In any case I have a late night yet again. Atleast you two can enjoy and don't worry about Bebe I will take care. Neil says

No beta.. Prakash says

No means what you have celebrated. Avni says

If Uncle doesn't want why are you forcing him Avni mind your own business. Metali says

Metali shut up now if you can't plan for Dad on his marriage anniversary don't you shout on Avni ever again. Neil shouts on Metali

Shweta is shocked with anger Neil is showing to Metali just because he shouted on Avni

Beta Sunny and shweta will go. Tillu will also come late I will be alone you come here puttar then there will be no problem. Bebe says

Then the party at home why Papaji you can't do this much for your grandson. Avni says

Mowgli will come here. Bebe says

Ji Bebe since he has got to know that it's his Daddu and Dadi marriage anniversary he wanted to come there. Avni says

You saying this now. Shweta says excitedly

Now there should be a party. Tillu please come early. Bebe says

Ji bebe I will try. Neil says

See DD is also here. I will leave Now. Neil says

Puttar eat something kuch kha le. Bebe says

I will eat in Office. Neil says

Syesha what is this. Prakash says

Prakash Papa that Avni Bhabhi has send allo prathe for everyone. KK says

ngel was saying Supermen loves them just like Mowgli and Daadu. Syesha says

Neil Self Talk] Now Allo parathe and in the evening Avni wow today I will come before time

I will leave. Let's go DD. Neil says

Neil. Metali calls

Neil ignores

Neil. Avni says through phone

Neil smiles and walks back

What's wrong Avni. Neil asks full of concern

I needed a favor. Avni say

You are fine please say something. I will come there and pick both Mowgli and you myself. I will leave right now. Neil says

DD lets go. Neil says

Neil... Avni says

I am coming. Don't worry. Neil says

I will also come with Neil. Metali says

You better not interfere in my life. Neil says rushing out

Avni Puttar what happened. Bebe says

Nothing Bebe. I was just saying Mowgli is coming with Suhanari and he might get late at party so Neil should take care of him. Avni says

Puttar. Prakash says

Papa I have to go I will talk to you later. Avni says and cuts the phone.


School Teacher Hostel


Avni. Neil asks

Sorry sir she is not here at the moment. Receptionist says

Mowgli... Neil asks

Mowgli has gone with Suhenari mam. Receptionist says

Neil Self Talk] Mowgli has gone with Suhenari. Where has Avni khain gone.

Sirji, Bhabhi is not here and Mowgli is gone with Suhanri. Bhabhi would be with him. DD says

Don't know what's happening... does matter let's go home I have to help in party preparations. In the evening we will meet Mowgli and Avni. Neil says

DD types on his mobile.

Bhabhi we are leaving from here. Where are you.

I am the Khanna house I came to meet Paapji and Mummyji. Avni types back

DD Self Talk] Bhabhi is at home good Sirji will meet him there. He miss Bhabhi I find out what is reason of Bhabhi going away from here again why did Bhabhi her being here will effect Sirji. And why suddenly Sirji wanted to join the force Duce to his track record he not got the job back but a promotion of being a DCP and made me ACP. Also got Metali demoted to an inspector and transferred to under breach in Mumbai itself.


Khanna House


Papa. Mowgli says

Tiger. Neil says

You came so early. Shweta says

Bebe where is Avni. Neil asks

Metali is still not back.. Shweta says

Mumma had some work so she left a while ago. Today is Daddu dadi anniversary. Mowgli says

Metali went late so might come late Tillu. Shweta says

That you are mentioning her for the second time why did she go late. Because I can clearly see this all is done by Avni I know her choices very well all decoration and setting are done by her so why did you daughter in law go late does she not understand her responsibilities as police officer. Neil says

Tillu. Shweta says

Mataji I want to talk to you please come. DD says

Whats wrong DD can't you see how Tillu is treating Metali. Shweta says

What did you say to Bhabhi. DD ask

I told her that she needs to stay away from Tillu that tillu can stay with Metali. Tillu past can't come in between Metali and him. Shweta says

Wonderful MRS SHWETA KHANNA are you even my mother how could you treat Avni like that why do you have make choices for don't you realise you always make the wrong choices first Riya then when thing were starting to become better you brought Juhi and now Metali yes we are married but I don't love will never love her. AVNI IS MY ONLY LOVE I WILL ALWAY ONLY LOVE AVNI. MARRYING METALI IS A ONLY A PUNISHMENT FOR FOR LIFE FOR NOT TRUSTING SUPPORTING AND UNDERSTANDS AVNI WHEN SHE NEED HER NEIL THE MOST. I have no problem with it and if you you daughter in law or anyone else has a problem I DON'T CARE. DID I MAKE MYSELF MRS SHWETA KHANNA. Neil says in anger

Tillu stop. Bebe says

Bebe please let me go I am just going to my room. I am home only. Neil says

Tillu what did you just say you need to explain. What going on between Avni and you. Bebe says

Sunehari Self Talk] Neil knows everything that means Avni told him to get Metali as he had promised Metali and that what Shweta aunty wanted

Bebe actually Vidyut blackmailed Avni 10 years back that's why she left. Suhaneri says

Is that it Suhaneri. Bebe says

Vidyut was shooting me Neela maa got shoot saving me. Neil says

Neil Self Talk] Sorry Babe I cant't tell you the whole thing I cant let Avni go even further away from me.

[I]Neil goes to his room. He tries to find Avni's photo frame which he has couldn't find it. He get angry

Bima.. Neil shouts

Ji Neil sir..Bima says

Who came to my room I told you not to touch my things. Neil says

Mowgli beta come here. (Mowgli is little scared as Neil is angry. Adds look at Shweta) Beta I am sorry I am shouting some people don't understand privacy. Neil says

Papa why did you marry Metali when you could marry Mom again. We would live togather as a normal family. Mowgli asks

Beta when somebody commits a crime they needed to punished if I had way not hurtinh my Avni I would have taken that but I couldn't find one. Neil says

But can't Mumma and me live here and you can send Metali some where. Mowgli says

Good idea but for now I ahve a gift for you today is you daadu's annavaisary. Neil says

Gift. i will call Bebe daddu Chachu and Sunehari Di. Mowgli says

See Beta we all are here. Bebe says

Neil takes take him.

Where is my gift Papa. Mowgli asks

This is your new room. Neil says

I love it but downstairs room I was staying in. Mowgli

That was just temporary in any case those are guest rooms you are my son you part of Khanna Family so you will stay here from just between Bebe and my room. Neil says

I get your stuff up here. Suhanri says

Suhanri if you plan stay tonight you can stay here with Mowgli. Neil says

Neil Self Talk] If Avni doesn't come tonight for the party once Mowgli sleeps with Suhaneri I will leave it doesn't if metali stays or doesn't in my room still leaving in this house I just waiting for kicking him out of my life and this house.

Mowgli you put thing properly here it is for whenever you come here. I will just be Papa has some work. Neil says

Neil goes to his room again. He empty out Metali things and throws everything out.

Tillu what are you doing. Shweta asks

Can't you see I am cleaning my room of unwanted things and people as well I wish I could the this house. The only reason Metali is this house still is because MY WIFE AVIN NEIL KHANNA has not forgiven me yet the day she forgives me completely for my crime METALI DUBEY WILL BE OUT OF MY HOUSE MY LIFE as only MY AVNI HAS A RIGHT OVER ME MY ROOM MY LIFE. NO ONE ELSE. Neil says

But Metali is your wife now Avni is your past. Shweta says

She may be your Daughter in law MRS SHWETA KHANNA but not my wife. Will never be doesn't seem like you noticed nor did I take pharas with her or fill her mang with sindoor or made her wear a mangalsutra. So we are not married. We might be living together the world may be in impression that Metali is married to me but she is not. You want her to be you daughter in law be it LIVING UNDER THE SAME ROOF AS HER IS A PUNISHMENT FOR WHICH I HAVE AGREED TO SUFFER. Always remember she is my punishment I am suffering AVNI IS MY LOVE AND MY EVERYTHING understood. Neil say

Shweta is completely shocked

Neil sir where do I keep all this. Bima says

Wait. (Bebe and Prakash come there. He picks a few boxes) Bebe didn't you give this to MY AVNI (Looks at Shweta ) How did Metali get her hands on these. Neil asks

I gave it to her she... Shweta says

These are my wife's and will always stay Avni's no matter they are out memories so don't you ever try giving them to to any one else. Bima take everything else and leave it downstairs and come back fast I need help putting this place in order. I send DD for some work till he come I will need help. Bima in the room downstairs Mowgli had had put some pictures of Avni and all others in Sakoon take those out carefully don't tear any of them he is very found of them. Get them here to me. Neil says

Neil rearranges what he thought was chnged

This is last time MRS SHWETA KHANNA THAT YOU ARE CHANGING ANYTHING IN MY ROOM EVER ONLY MY AVNI IS ALLOWED TO THAT. Neil says

Tillu ... Shweta says

Please leave. Neil says to Shweta

Tillu you promised her. Neil says

I promised Neela Maa so did you do you even remember... Taking about promisese I value Neela maa's promise more. Neil says

Avni has moved on. Shweta says

Did Avni say that... Neil says

Tillu you need to understands... Shweta says

To move on according to you one has get married did she get married... Neil says

No but she has reason her work. Shweta says

I don't. Neil says

You still want live with her memories. Just like Juhi. Shweta says

MY AVNI isn't Juhi and our memories which give me meaning live and be happy. Avni hasn't moved on she in very deep fix which she doesn't know who come out of it I will help her so what if we are not married now. Neil says

But... Shweta says

Get lost and remember you promised Neela Maa to support and love Avni always no matter and this what you are giving her. And if we not together even now is all because of you. Next time you hurt MY AVNI be sure I will leave this then stay with your dear bahu. Now leave me alone. Neil says


Kapoor House


Angel. Syesha says

Mishti clam down it's not a party here there will be media you dress comfortably. Avni says

Why aren't you come. You know Bebe and Naanu will love you there. So will superman will love it. Syesha says

Mishti you are not... Avni says

Bhabhi please come no atleast for Mowgli at least he will have his full family in place. Without you there he wouldn't be happy. KK says

I don't have anything good to wear. Avni say

Avni Self Talk] I wanted to go I will get meet Neil it been so long. 3 months I now I keeping myself away but I wanted to meet him talk to him I love him after.

Here Di wear this. Aman says

Aman. Avni says hugging

No crying now I am back so is Ali bhai. Aman says

Avni. Ali says

Ali. Avni hugs him

Go get ready we are waiting. Ali says


Khanna House


Sirji. DD says

Finally you are back. You took for ever. Neil says

Neil had filled the whole wall with Avni and his, Mowgli and his and Avni and Mowgli pics

Wow Sirji you changed the room in no time. I wish Shweta aunty would have got to know before and understood. Okay I know she still doesn't but she. Now it look like Bhabhi and your room again. DD says

DD. Shweta says

DD get the frame here. Neil says

Neil puts right in center surrounded by light to make bright always even in dark. Then Neil takes off the wrapping paper on it.

Shweta is shocked Bebe Prakash and DD are very happy.

This my happy family. MY AVNI MY MOWGLI AND ME. Neil says happily

Tillu you have done a great job. Bebe says

Ji sirji. DD says

Tillu puttar when did you get this picture clicked all the three of look so happy. Prakash says

Mishti's birthday party. Neil says

I wish there were more. Bebe says

If Avni comes today there will be alot more. Neil says

What about Metali. Shweta says

You can never talk good can you shweta.. You and dear bahu can click as many pics as you want I am not interested nor is any one else. Bebe says

Bebe. Shweta says

Bebe as always is right. Neil says

Tillu why don't you talk Avni and tell to come here. Bebe says

Bebe as much as want her to come I can't force she has been insulted enough when she was her MRS SHWETA KHANNA already so I can't force her. But I hope for Mowgli she comes comes


Kapoor House


Avni was getting ready in room. She notice a bracelet on her arms and smiles

Few days after Mishti birthday party Avni had gone to the cliff she met Neil for first time. I was their first meeting. She was looking on the horizon.

Avni. Neil says

Neil you here I was leaving. Avni says

Neil holds her and pulls her close

Why did you come here. Neil says

Actually I wanted to be alone. Avni says

Avni look me in eye and say what you said. I know you will never forget this was the place we meet first today was day. Neil say

Neil please let me go. Avni say with tears in her eyes

Avni don't be hard on yourself please I can't see MY AVNI cry what ever you did you had no option I had I could leave my anger and ego and hear you out I should have understood I was wronged I didn't trust you. But I will always love you kyun Avni hai toh hi Neil hai. Neil says

Avni turns back and hugs him tightly. They both sit there taking support of each other and spend time.

Neil... Met... Avni says

Neil puts a figure on her lips

It just US. MY WIFEY AVNI NEIL KHANNA and me ...Neil says

I love you Neil. Avni says cupping his face they have eye lock

She kisses him on his lips. He pulls her closer making the kiss deeper. She starts biting his lower lip he open her mouth. they kiss for a while a separate. Her hand move down to his chest his breath hitchs

Wifey. Neil says

She looks up at him.

I wanted to tell you something. Neil says

Neil I am sorry I lost control I forgot...Avni says

Neil pecks her on lips

Wifey there no need of it is your right. I just wanted tell you for few months I was working unofficial with police. Neil says

Did you join back. Avni asks happily

Years back you meet ACP NEIL KHANNA here WIFEY today you sitting on the lap of DCP NEIL KHANNA no matter what NEIL KHANNA WILL ALWAYS LOVE HIS WIFEY AVNI NEIL KHANNA. Neil says

Some clear their throat. Avni tries to move away he pulls her closer to him tightly. They both look at source

DD. Neil and Avni say togather

Sirji congratulations. DD says

DD you came here only for this. Did Mishti rise a panic. Avni says

I came looking for both of you Sirji was not in home nor in office neither was picking my call. Bhabhi you were not picking any ones call so I was worried. DD says

Neil if you hold me tighter I will not able to hance proving their concern right. Avni says

Wifey.. Neil say losing his grip a bit

Neil now Metali and you will working to gather. Avni asks

No Wifey she has been shifted to another branch and has been demoted soon to inspector she been misusing he authority for the wrong reasons. Neil says

DD, Metali demoted and transfer did you get promoted. Now you are ACP. That why you had come to meet me first at hostel then at Mishti's. Avni says

Ji Bhabhi. DD says

When is party. Avni asks

Bhabhi party. DD says

Both Neil and DD smile

How about this Saturday... Karan's house... Ali and Aman will also be there. Avni says

Why not the Khanna house. Neil asks

Neil please... You can come there too. Avni says

Okay but next party will be in Khanna house only. Neil says

Next will see when next happens. Avni says

Wifey I have something for you. Neil says

Neil you knew I will come here today. Avni

I know it been a few weeks of the wedding and all but that doesn't mean I will forget you I know and remember every thing about you and US and mind it will always be US we were we are and we will always be one. I know how difficult it is for me to even breath in same place as Metali she is such selfish person she has no self respect if there would have been some one else she would have walked out on me after knowing after my wife is alive I love her if that's not enough I have a 10 year old son. Wivey don't compare this Juhi Mishti and you. I was over Juhi I was in love with you. Neil says

She smiles in mirror remembering all this

Avni hurry up. Ali says

Wow Angel you look beautiful. Syesha says

Di shall we. Aman says offering his arm

They leave for the party


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Edited by AvNeil_TV - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ashi3

Hey Kanika!


It's good that you posted this here too. I've voted and commented for the first chapter on Wattpad. Update it here soon. I'll comment here from the next update. Because I love IF more than Wattpad. 😆

Waiting for the second chapter...😃


Thanks Ashi will update the second part soon
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Originally posted by: Aphrodite_NV

Glad to know you updated the story here also. Commented on Wattpad for the first chapter. Post it on IF also.

Love,
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Thank Nivi. First chapter post will post the second here soon
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Originally posted by: AgnesFan

Totally an uncalled concept . I am intrigued how he will end up with Avni and she will accept him . Thanks for updating here .


Hey posted the first chapter

do read will post the second soon

-Kanika
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Originally posted by: plmzaq

Superb update

Love it
Continue soon

Thank will update soon
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Nidhi thanks will update soon

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