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This is update starts before Ali and Aman come to meet

In Between 1

Jaan what's wrong. Neil asks

I am fine. Avni says turning away

Avni start cooking breakfast she is cutting some her finger.

Jaan. Neil says runs towards her

I am fine I used to it. Avni says

Jaan please stop hurting yourself I can't see you. (Avni burns her hands) Jaan enough I can't see you hurt. Neil says

Just leave let me be. Avni says

No I can't. You can leave to hid away your pain your pain hurts way more. Neil says

Avni fall down crying. Neil has never seen her so weak.

I have hurt you enough. Please leave me alone. the night is over. Avni says

Night is not us you are my Wifey. You are my strength. You are going to act like this I will not able to live a day. Neil says

I have hurt you enough I still can't forget that day I saw you broken because of me. I deserve the hate

Jaan you were there. Neil says hugging here tightly

Avni nods


Neil Self Talk]For now let me leave this topic she needs my support I will ask her letter. First I have make her stay back here I will not be able to live without her for single second and if I have Metali to to even decode Metali's character because I know there is huge game plan Metali has she gives Juhi vibes I know for know Avni doesn't realise which isn't wrong I also didn't relaise it for long now I do. I need Avni she is my strength I can fight through anything without her beside me.

Neil please let be you asked for night now you are getting married to Metali. Avni says

Jaan enough of Metali thing you know very I don't want getting married to her please don't keep saying this I hate it. Jaan (Make her to look at him) Metali is not what she seem she has used your past once to keeps us away she can do alot more just get me she gives JUHI vibes. I know you wouldn't believe it that. Neil says

If you saying that I trust you Neil. But what will she get from it. Avni says

Jaan 10 years you have changed yourself so much or just want to ignore it all. Neil says

Neil but... Avni say

Metali always had a thing I never reciprocate it now that I like proposed her she will do anything to keep up to me probably the only person to to support her would be Mom. Neil says wiping her tears

But what could it be. Kamini has already Mowgli... Avni says

Shh! Jaan nothing will not happen neither you Jaan nor our son Mowgli. Neil says

Neil if something bad happens. Avni says

Both of us are together and don't worry I have my contacts I will get to root of it. Jaan you don't worry I will make up for the 10 years we lost

Khanna House

Where is Neil. I have't seen here since yesterday. Metali says

He would be in his room sleeping. Shweta says

Ahh tu sun merae mera Tillu ko kaam se kaam sakoon se ssone toh de. Bebe says

Bebe is right let him rest. Shweta says

Sakoon House

Jaan what are you thinking. Neil says getting her closer

Neil if you are right then we also have to do something. Avni says

What do you want to do. Neil says puts Avni on his lap

Neil last time you called Metali to help us with Dayawanti if I am not wrong her name was METALI DUA now it ACP Metali Dubey something we are missing here wither that was fake or she married or widowed. I don't know. Avni says

I am not sure Jaan if she ever got married but when i was in academy there was this guy who loved her Rahil and confidently his surname was Dubey but he passed away 8 years back. Neil says kiises her on cheek

How long has Metali been around you after I went. Avni said

Jaan 8 years ago she resurfaced 2 years after you went. Neil says

Till we are not sure we can't accuse Metali but we can test this theory on her. Avni says

Avni turns to face and kiss him on the lips.

Neil let me make food before everyone come that we can eat. Avni says

Khanna House

Tillu where had gone. Shweta says

I had some work. Neil says

Where are you going have breakfast. Bebe says

I already have Bebe. Neil says

(Neil's Room)

Bima. Neil says

Ji Sahaab. Bima says

Clean this place. Neil says

Carefull Bima yo know how costly is this. Metali says

This is scrap you can throw it. Neil says

Tillu Metali has got this for you. Shweta says

So now I throwing it away. Neil says

But it was a our engagement frame. Metali says

Metali Dubey our engagement... let me correct you Metali Dubey your engagement which I simply did out of anger you can still walk out Mrs Metali Dubey. Bima is the cleaning done. Neil says

Ji sahaab. Bima says

Neil lock the room

(Hall)

Why are you locking the room. Metali asks

Because I fell like don't you question me ever in you have no right. Neil says

Tillu she... Shweta says

She no one at all she not even worth to call a women forget I regret in my ego and anger on Avni I proposed this she even worse then Juhi and for a fact Riya was 100 times better then her. Neil says
I don't what happened to you suddenly what that frud illgimated... Metali says

Don't you dear say anything about MY WIFEY MY AVNI there no one better then her. Neil says

That women lied to faked her own death. Metali says

What ever Avni did she did for us. Our happiness our safety. Metali always remember you are getting married to Neil not only because he has moved on but because Avni has also move on. Shweta say
How fun mom no one moves on from who is their true love. Before you mention I moved on from Juhi. Two completely different people and situation. Juhi was not love it was just pure guilt of not being save her AVNI WAS IS AND WILL ALWAYS BE MY LIFELINE. Neil says

Our wedding. Metali asks

Oh that the wedding has been delayed by 1 whole week all the other use less function you want \

Metali which I personally don't have interest in. Metali and Mom any one of you hurt Avni by any means I will not spare you I will personal put you in Jail.Neil says

Tillu where are you going. Prakash says

Some where I get some peace. Neil says

Avni ke paas jaa raha hai. Bebe says

Tillu. Shweta says

Neil ignores and leaves to Sakoon house. Metali goes to a room a starts crying

Sakoon House

Neil Self Talk]I reach Sakoon House I see Tara Sitara in the kitchen. So they all are are back. I go to Avni room. The first two things I see Avni hugging some guy and I see a suitcase packed righty next to her. She can't be leave I surely not going to get married to Metali if she goes aways from me.

Avni. Neil voice coated with jealousy insularity

Ali and Avni turn towards Neil

Neil you came back i thought. Avni says

Avni run and hugs Neil tightly. Neil reciprocates the hug with same intensity

Neil Self Talk] She actually thought I will return she is the on stressing on me marrying Metali not me. I want marry her again and stay with my Avni and our son Mowgli and make up lost 10 years

Avni where you going you can't leave again and go. Neil says

Neil please let me pack I am not taking Mowgli away I am not shifting away. Avni says

Didn't you hear me you are not leaving me going again. Neil says

Neil let me pack please. Avni says

Avni you coming home with me it done. Neil says

And doing there attending your wedding seems interesting doesn't it Mr Neil Khanna. Sorry to say
Di is going no where with you not today nor ever I am here I will take care of her now. Aman says

Aman pushes Neil. Neil fall but doesn't get defenses

Let's go. Neil says

Leave my sister now. Aman says pushing Neil

Avni gets worried and Neil notice but doesn't hit Aman back

Neil. (Avni supports Neil pulling him up) Aman what is wrong with you. Avni says
Nothing is wrong if this man thinks he keep hurting you and you have no one to support he mistaken. Aman says

Neil please go I will talk to you latter everyone will be waiting for you it is Metali and your sangeet today. Avni says

That will happen when it has people can wait so can Metali. You are coming with me. Avni I willl take care of everything just come. Neil says

Didn't I make myself clear Di isn't going any where with you. You have already hurt her enough. you are such spineless person you snatched a son from his mother. (Aman starts bashing him) You know Di she can never hurt you on purpose but you didn't leave one chance to hurt her. Aman says

Avni pulls him off Neil

How dear you hurt my Neil like that I didn't expect this from you Neela would never liked this she gave her life for saving Neil my Neil this what you do this is respect you have for Neela Maa's sacrifice. Ali you, I always thought you would guide him Aman to do right you are not even stopping him the way he was going he killed Neil. Avni said

Avni what wrong in what any brother would have done the same and let's get this Neela maa did.t save this man she save her Avni husband who love her more then anything. Ali says

Enough Ali I don't know what got into you if Shweta Aunty wants him to move with Metali what's wrong in that it been long I left he has right live his life. Avni says

Mom... Avni I thought. Neil says

You know very well how Avni still lives with her past wounds which have scared her the last 10 years very badly that forced her to keep her only son away from her. I say
Suhanri Tara and Sitara told you this... Avni asked

Does that matter Avni or should I say NEILajana. Ali say

Ali that actually. Avni says

NEILajana means you kept me with always NEILajaana. (Tries to stand up) Ahh. Neil says

Neil please keep sitting you hurt badly. (Neil held on Ali hand to stand) Neil.. Avni says
Aman again tries to beat Neil Avni comes in between

To hurt my Neil you will will have hurt me understood Aman

Shh! enough is enough this wedding is being called off right now. I am calling Dad now. Neil says

Neil... Aman will you it and stop creating so much commotion Mowgli is in next room think how he feel about his Mamu tried killing his father. Avni says

Di. Aman says

Leave now. Avni says taking out the first aid

Avni please think please come back home I will call of the marriage. Neil says cupping her face

No.. You have fulfill your promised to Metali. Avni says

I promised Neela Maa and you to keep you happy and give you a happy family. Neil says

But your mom wants you to move on she wants me out of your life. Avni says

I don't care. Neil says

Please Neil understand. Avni says

You say you value Neela Maa promise still you hurt Avni so much you didn't even try to talk to her understand her you have hurt her enough now you no business your mom as well as you don't deserve Avni you all just deserve that stupid Metali. Ali says

Ali please. Avni says

What wrong am I saying.. Ali says

Ali what you know very well I love Avni not Metali yes I was using her to hurt Avni because I was hurt. I am not what I do was right It wasn't ... Neil says

Oh so you have realised you were you didn't do a mistake but crime you should have not lost your trust on Avni if you actually love her. Ali says

If I know what happened and why Avni did it I would never do it. Neil says

Then why are you still getting married to that selfish Metali before also she tried to separate Angle and you Superman. Syaesha says

Mishti keep out of this you are too young. Avni says

Please angel you have done what you could keep me happy and secure let me at least try I know you can only be happy with. Why do you want pay my father Vidyuts crimes. Hear me out Metali is

No great in ant respect I don't get what Shweta Aunty see in her she simply selfish. Syaesha says

Vidyut did what. Ali asks

Vidyut drugged Dad. Neil say losing hand on the secret

Neil... Avni shakes her head

Ali Self Talk] Clearly Avni was the stronger one I should happy she was childhood friend but I was not because one fact which I could simply decode that means Prakash Uncle was drugged by Vidyut who made made him shoot Neil and Neela Maa came in between to save Neil.

Avni tell me what Neil is saying is lie you didn't do all this only to save Prakash Uncle. I says

Papa. Avni says

Ali Self Talk]When will you grow up Avni did you even once think if Prakash Uncle gets to know what will happen you saved from jail and law but did you even once think about the guilt he will be in for making his only son suffer for 10 year and making you take such a decision. For him both Neil and you are same. How could you do this did not once think of this . Avni once. Ali say

Ali I had no option I would have come you don't know how hard was to leave Neil when I saw him breakdown in front of Vidyut's house. Avni says

Wifey you were there then those death certificate. Neil says

What death certificate I don't know. Avni says

Did any one know about your plan. Neil asks

No. Avni says

I calling off this wedding now you are danger someone it behind your live Wifey. I need you save. Neil says

Avni why are now you are letting go Neil just because of Shweta Aunty. Everyone here understands why Uncle is important to you but why let go Neil. Is your love for him so weak it can't stand against Shweta Aunty. Ali say

Neil we have go with it Metali loves you and you are marrying her. Avni says

Ali, Wifey you want to marry me Metali because my mother wants it right fine I will do that I told you before I will repeat again being with Metali in any capacity and even if it just friendship because she has no self respect as I have observed ...Neil says

Why are you telling Sir, to marry Metali. DD asks

Because that what his mom wants. Avni says

\Then why don't you get married too. DD asks

DD. AvNeil say together

What wrong in that. DD says

DD Mowgli is my son and Neil is the father I don't need a man in life. Avni says

But.. DD say

There no but it is done deal am I clear. Avni says

Bhabhi then get married to Sir why can't you that give one reason don't even say it is just Shweta
Aunty. DD says

Avni.. Vidyut is dead you know that. Suhanri says

Wifey not again please don't you say you have caused danger in live I accepted it happily I love you I accept you as you are. Neil says

Kab tak Bhabhi why are letting that dayawanti effect you so much still. DD asks

DD is right please don't do this. Di. Aman says

Aman you keep out of it. Avni says

Aman your anger still rules at time here is prove. Ali says looking at Neil

Ali seriously how could you if something happened. Avni says

Its is better then marrying Metali. Neil says

Neil please. Avni says

Bhabhi why was suhanri saying you leaving had something to Neela Maa muder and Prakash uncle has something to do with it.DD says

Because it does... Neil says

Dad was drugged by Vidyut and that state he fired on me but Neela Maa came in between to save me. Neil says

DD Self Talk] Clean and clear I was shocked to save Dadji Bhabhi sacrificed 10 years of her life and now because of Shweta Aunty she was ready sacrifice her happiness. If Bhai (Neil) become as adement as Bhabhi then they can get married but I know Bhai to well he has caused to much pain and suffering in past few day he will not force Bhabhi.

DD please don't tall anyone. Avni says

Bhabhi, Sir and you can still get married. I say

Wifey (Neil cups her face) why are doing this why can't we get married and be happy did something happened. (Avni hugs Neil tightly) Wifey what happened... (Neil starts getting hurt) Did Metali say something did she hurt you any way...Neil says

Mumma stop crying. Dadi is bad. Mowgli says

Tiger what did Dadi say. Neil ask

She made mumma cry she is bad. Mowgli says

Neil hugs both Avni and Mowgli.

WIFEY THIS IS MY FAMILY NOT WITH THAT METALI. That brings me to a question in my academy days Metali surname was Dua now it Dubey. DD you know you responsibility find out everything of Metali in last 10 years. Wifey you are coming with me. Neil says

Neil I have... Avni says

Wifey no arguments. Neil says

Bhai the sangeet function. DD asks

Neil Metali...Avni says

Thanks for the reminder Mom and Metali wouldn't let me forget it you know.

Neil Self Talk] Jaan will not say anything till the plan is there I know that. Tiger is also coming with us.

Neil where are taking me tell me. Avni says

DD you go start your investigation. Neil says

Neil do you realises you have left police force 10 years back. Will you stop ordering DD. Avni says

This will never change Bhabhi. Love you Bhabhi. It just you who can order Bhai . DD says

Suahnari you want come along. Neil says

I will come. Suhanri says

Tara Sitara get Mowgli things he shifting in with Mammus. Neil says

Both nod and leave with Sunehari. DD also leaves for Police station

Let's go check what your anuties are packing Ali says

Aman Mowgli and Ali leave. Neil is leaving to Avni pulls him back

What was all this. Avni says

What?? Neil asks

Why didn't you not attack back on Aman at all. Avni says

Why would I he was right in doing what he was he was just protecting his sister. Jaan I would done the exact same thing if it was Kareena. Neil says

Aee you Mr Neil Khanna no one that no one hurts my husband you understand kuch jo jata toh. Avni says

Husband and all. Neil says

Aur kya obviously so what you give divorce. Avni says

You were right there is something with the name she is afraid of coming out. Neil says

Once DD figures something out we will have some more information. Avni says

Jaan do still have that CD and latter or it is Metali's possession. Neil asks

It with her. But we can recreate and say it was the same if necessary. Avni says

Jaan Di. Samrat says

What happened Sam. Neil says

Neil uncle I had gone to Metali house to meet her. Samrat says

Samrat you are fine. Avni asks immediately

Yes Jaan Di I wnt with Karan and Syesha so don't worry. Samrat says

I found this. Samrat says

What is this. Avni asks

That CD you received in Kashid with this letter. Seems like she plans to use it again. Samrat says

She will not get the opportunity at all. Keep it save and we will use it at the right time. Neil says

Samrat leaves

What are you planning. Avni says

Jaan sangeet hai Metali aur mera shaadi ka remember abb gift toh dena banta hai. Neil says

Neilu. Avni says pecking him on cheek

Jaan chale everyone would be waiting. Neil says

...

Footnotes

1. Word Count: 3374

2. This is a day after Neil get's to know about the truth.

3. Next few updates:

A) Will be different people prospective Aman, Bebe, Prakash Ali DD and Shweta respectively.

B) It will show you how the whole [B]Neil Metali marriage functions takes place. There will two major difference then what the show one Avni[ is very much there and so is Bebe.

C) Here there will 2 days difference between Neil getting to know the truth and Neil and Metali's sangeet.

D) There will be also parts on explore Mowgli's relation with Aman, Ali, Neil and DD.
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