ARSHI's Story SILENT CONFESSION- Chapter 4 posted on 6/10 page 16

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sweetydoll32

@sweetydoll32

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Posted: 8 years ago

#141

Is arnav an undercover cop? Super update dear please update soon..

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kshubhangi

@kshubhangi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#142

Khushi had me in fits. This girl is one of the teenagers and very expressive.
Interesting story

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Minnie

@Illuminatus.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#143

Thanks for the delightful update.

The naughty Khushi and the village handsome Arnav seems like a wonderful combination.

I wish you could just keep writing forever.

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Labitha

@labi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#144

Another cute and funny part.

So Arnav, the ganwar, has even started to appear in her dreams.

Loved her antics in breakfast table.Typical teenager.Diet and health conscious.

She seeks attention from everyone, especially from her mother.You have described teenager's particular behaviours through Khushi beautifully.

Loved that small moment between them in the terrace.

In the ending, I think Khushi was shocked seeing Arnav as he looked more handsome and stylish, totally against all her thoughts.

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Param

@pup03

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Posted: 8 years ago

#145

Mind blowing story.. Khushi is such a brat.. Arnav's past is something very intriguing thing.. well waiting to know more about him.. is he the Abhaas whose fan Khushi is and have been hunting him.. loved reading all four chapters.. it is very unique story.. 😊