AvNeil SS ~ Colliding With Each Other...Again {Pt 7A} - Page 12

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Posted: 7 years ago
Nope😕
I just love chocolates anytime😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
now this reflects the promo, but they switched preference to other side branched out twists, I like this story and wish Cvs had not rushed and messed up post leap storyline, wish the leap was five years and not ten. I wish Neil had found her sooner
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: paayaal

Res coz I don't want to be not first...😛

Unres

Oh Sunheri it was such a sunhera chance for AvNeil to meet & u didn't let them take it...why??

Poor Neil...he came so close to the truth & still couldn't reach it...he sounds so...desperate/ broken.

At least he has told Ali whats the pull that Sukoon House has on him...

So Neil has decided to help the residents of the orphanage...he has actively chosen a path thats leading him to Avni...can't wait for them to finally meet after all these years.

Poor Avni too...breaking down like this on seeing her Neil outside her house...

Nivi...next update asap coz daag achhe hotey hain tadpana nahi😉


Both of them aren't at a stage to explain or listen. Dono 440 volt ka jhatka lagega, after seeing each other. Chances ke kya hain, aate rahenge baar baar 😉. Neil is treading the path whose final destination is his Avni. He will find her very soon, I promise. Avni is having the much needed breakdown, poor girl has been keeping so much to herself.
Sochna padega next update ke liye, should I break it into two halves or write it as one singlie long chapter.
Love,
Nivi
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: drbeth

Res... can't be first coz Paayal took dt spot.Sob sob.

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So finally Neil reached his destination but missed his manzil .Singer is to blamed here...kidding .She did handle d situation very nicely.Liked how Neil was eager to meet Jaan and how he could feel d something pulling him back to Summon house.

Avni saw Neil!!! The way she broke down on seeing him and how she was rushing out ...loved dt part.Shows how much she still loves him.

You made me miss Ali again.He is such a good frnd and d much needed companion to Neil ryt now.

Waiting to see how they finally meet.


Oye, nothing about the singer. He is my favorite 😳. Sunheri had to handle the sitation she was put in, aage kuan peeche khai types. She still loves him and desires him as much as he does, what is worse she knows he's alive and living somewhere. Ali is going to prove how much close he and Neil came after Avni's (fake) death. Although I empathize with Neil, the impact of Avni's death has affected Ali the most. Two times he has lost her isn't it.
I have planned something interesting for their meet, though not sure how interesting will it be for you people.
Love,
Nivi
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

now this reflects the promo, but they switched preference to other side branched out twists, I like this story and wish Cvs had not rushed and messed up post leap storyline, wish the leap was five years and not ten. I wish Neil had found her sooner


Thank you so much for the review! All I can say is mati maari gayi thi cvs ki who thought we will accept that horrendous track they were trying to shove. Feels so pathetic as a viewer, anyways lost hopes the show watching it as a neutral audience without connecting what AvNeil were. We can't blame cvs for the leap, it was the channel's call (due to someone ---- age 🤢). Neil isn't going to find her any sooner here too 😆.
Love,
Nivi
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Aphrodite_NV


Oye, nothing about the singer. He is my favorite 😳. Sunheri had to handle the sitation she was put in, aage kuan peeche khai types. She still loves him and desires him as much as he does, what is worse she knows he's alive and living somewhere. Ali is going to prove how much close he and Neil came after Avni's (fake) death. Although I empathize with Neil, the impact of Avni's death has affected Ali the most. Two times he has lost her isn't it.
I have planned something interesting for their meet, though not sure how interesting will it be for you people.
Love,
Nivi


I meant 'Sunheri' not d 'Singer'...dis autocorrect😡
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So finally he reached Sukoon house and is so restless even after reaching his hotel room coz of the strange pull towards the place . He had made it a point that he will protect sukoon hiuse even at the cost of his peace . Ali won't get his answers unless he himself goes there or Neil/him finds Avni to be Jaan didi .
Our Ali 💔😭 I expected Ali more than DD at least for the sake of promise he made to Avni .

Avni 💔 This is we wanted exactly onscreen when she first saw Neil . But 😡 i dont wanna go there . Much needed break down ! Makes me crave for similar scenes in show .
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

So finally he reached Sukoon house and is so restless even after reaching his hotel room coz of the strange pull towards the place . He had made it a point that he will protect sukoon hiuse even at the cost of his peace . Ali won't get his answers unless he himself goes there or Neil/him finds Avni to be Jaan didi .

Our Ali 💔😭 I expected Ali more than DD at least for the sake of promise he made to Avni .

Avni 💔 This is we wanted exactly onscreen when she first saw Neil . But 😡 i dont wanna go there . Much needed break down ! Makes me crave for similar scenes in show .


That's called soulmate connection, Sri. It's going to be Neil finding Avni first, Ali is going side with whom, read to know more 😉😆. Both DD (will introduce him in forthcoming chapters) and Ali are going to be there and have equal space in my story. Well let's not go about how pathetic the cvs are with Avni, it boils my blood to the core. Totally lost hopes on the show, watching it just for leisure time. I'm trying my best to focus on both Avni and Neil. Thanks for the feedback!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: drbeth


I meant 'Sunheri' not d 'Singer'...dis autocorrect😡

Sorry. Auto correct sucks 🤢
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Chapter 7 A


'Avni, please calm down. Stop crying, tujhe main aise nahi dekh sakti.' Sunheri ran her arm behind Avni's back.

'Ten years Sunheri, it has been ten years since I have seen him in person. God! How frail and famished he looked...' Avni fell on the hard floor with a loud thump, unconscious.

'Avni..' Sunheri patted her cheek, trying to wake her up. Sunheri dragged Avni till a chair, managing her erratic heartbeats. She quickly scanned the room for water and found Neil's half-filled glass on the coffee table. Grabbing the tumbler, she sprinkled few drops of water on Avni's face.


Few moments of blurred vision, Avni opened her eyes and found herself on floor with Sunheri beside her. Her eyes were watery, she refused to utter a syllable. Silent, she walked to her room and shut it tight.

****

Neil paced around in his room, debating within himself if he should talk to Sunheri about his plan.


'Ali yaar, help me please.' Neil threw an exasperated look to Ali who was typing an e-mail to his client with rapt attention.


'Neil, why do you want my suggestion? If you feel it is correct, do not hesitate to ring up Sunheri. Besides you already convinced Karan, isn't it. You need not worry about his approval either.' Ali replied, shutting the system down. Neil nodded with a sigh. He fished out his mobile from pocket and dialed Sunheri's number.

****

In Afternoon


Avni and Sunheri were in the kitchen preparing their lunch. Avni stood away from the rest, quiet and sunken; lost in her own puddle of thoughts while chopping vegetables at hand.


'AVNI' Sunheri screamed and Avni jolted from her thoughts. She threw Sunheri a quizzical look while Sunheri dashed towards her.


'This' She pointed to Avni's hands and the latter looked down to find her fingers were under the mercy of knife instead of lady's finger she was chopping.


'I was just...' Avni began but was cut off by Sunheri, 'How can you be so care...'

Sunheris phone on the counter rang, grabbing the ladies' attention. Sunheri gave her an exasperated look before reaching her phone.


Seeing the caller name made Sunheri nervous; she saw the impact Neil had on Avni even after many years, she did not want any bad to befall on Avni due to Neil's presence. But she cannot ignore him either for she knew he was stubborn as hell. Flashing a smile to Avni, she left the arena stating it was an important call. Avni nodded being the clueless self and indulged herself in cooking.

****

'Hello' She addressed him very apprehensively.

'Hi Sunheri' Neil greeted her back. 'You sound anxious, kuch hua kya?' He asked.

'Nahi, nahi. I did not expect your call at this hour, was surprised.' Sunheri replied, stammering.

'Hmm, that is alright. If you are free now, can we meet somewhere? I want to discuss an important thing with you.'

'kya'

'It is not possible for me to explain over phone other wise I would have definitely done that. Please kya hum kahi mil sakte hain aur abhi milna hai mujhe'

'Okay, I am texting you an address. I will be there by fifteen minutes, hope it's fine with you.' Sunheri stated and she ended the call. Leaning against the pillar, she sighed deeply.


God! What are you putting me through. One side is Avni who is no less than my baby sister and other side is Neil her husband, who doesn't know about her existence. I am stuck in between, absolutely clueless what to do. Why did Neil call me? Did he get to know about Avni? If so, please save Avni from his wrath, Almighty.

****

Re-entering their house, Sunheri headed to kitchen for informing Avni,

'Avni, I have a very important task at hand. I need to go now. Main Tara aur Sitara ko bol dungi tumhari madad karne ke liye.'

'But where are...'

'I will tell you once I come back. It is urgent.' Sunheri's words silenced Avni. The former headed to her room and fetched her handbag and marched off towards the park.

****

She sat on a bench, waiting for Neil's arrival. She was tensed, would be an understatement; her hands were sweaty and shivered while her mind was filled with all possible negative thoughts she wanted to avoid.


'Hi' She heard his voice from behind. She faked a smile at him while he took a seat beside her.

'Thanks for coming.' He stated, she gave him a grim nod.

'Why did you call me?' She asked.

'Sunheri, I hope you will not misunderstand me after hearing out what I have to say. I thought a lot about this after going to my room. See Sukoon Ghar is indeed a beautiful place, bohot well maintained hai aur bachchon ke liye bhi aaramdayak hai. But you people need a better place, a safe place where you don't have tension of these goons. This is the most crucial stage of life for those children and they should not be affected by this nuisance. That is why I want to help you guys.

Hum tumhare Sukoon Ghar mein film shooting karna chahte hain. I discussed with KK and he was ready to be a part of it. Till the shooting ends, there will be strict security. Nobody can trespass at your house. And for accepting, you will be paid the advance and rent as well. With that money, you can search for a better place to live. Dekho please mana mat karna, bohot mushkil se maine directors aur producers se baat pakki karvayi hai.'


Sunheri did not know what to reply. She was glad he did not know about Avni's lie. But if he were given the permission to shoot at Sukoon House, he will come to know about Avni being alive. To support Avni or to accept Neil's suggestion, she was at cross roads.


'I... I don't know what to say, to be frank. This was so sudden and unexpected. I...we need little time

to discuss about this with the other three co-ordinators as well.' She replied.

'You can take your time but please let me know your decision quickly. Otherwise, I may not be in a position to convince them again.' Neil stated.


'Okay' Sunheri stood up and walked away.

****


Edited by Aphrodite_NV - 7 years ago

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