AvNeil OS: Some Home Truths (Based on Current Track)

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HighOnSarcasm

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Sd1978

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Posted: 7 years ago

Go on pls! Would u pm.when u update?

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HighOnSarcasm

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Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Sd1978
Go on pls! Would u pm.when u update?

Hi,

This is just an OS that popped into my head & I typed it down...

I have no plans for it beyond this point...

Besides this was just my way of trying to make Neil see beyond the anger.

In case this goes any further, I'll def PM you. But I don't that'll be happening.

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HighOnSarcasm

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Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Himani128
Why did you stop here😭

Hey,

This is at this point of time just an OS. The idea popped into my head & wouldn't leave me alone until I'd written it down!

I just wanted to write down a scenario where the only person who knows the complete truth, Sunheri, pushes Neil to leave his anger behind and seek the actual truth!

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darsh333

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Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

This was just like the episodes these days🥱

You have written it down well Paayaal😊

Keep writing more girl!

Would love to read a happy os of yours😊

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HighOnSarcasm

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Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: darsh333
This was just like the episodes these days🥱
You have written it down well Paayaal😊
Keep writing more girl!
Would love to read a happy os of yours😊

Thank you.😃

I just had this irresistible urge to write down a scenario where Sunheri will finally loose her cool at Neil & drive home a few points that just might make him stop being this hostile & use his cop brain to find out the truth...

M simply tired of an either angry irrational Neil or crying destructive Neil...10 years of drinking has seriously killed his thinking cells! I just want some intelligence displayed somewhere...

I do have an ongoing SS with docritu99 called 'Love at First Site'. You can check that out. Otherwise there is a host of other not unhappy stuff that I've written that you can read at my page Writer by Chance.

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Wingsoflove_2

@Wingsoflove_2

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Posted: 7 years ago

Y did u stop it there.

Awesome one.

Atleast isse toh chori karo nayalak cvs.

Inke creativity se bohath darr lagta.

At least tum log ache os derahi ho.

Thank u so much for this Payal.

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HighOnSarcasm

@HighOnSarcasm

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: rilsaf
Y did u stop it there.
Awesome one.
Atleast isse toh chori karo nayalak cvs.
Inke creativity se bohath darr lagta.
At least tum log ache os derahi ho.
Thank u so much for this Payal.

Hey Safana,

Yeah...this one is not for the CVs but for me...

Sunheri is the only one who knows the complete truth so she has to be the one pulling the plug on Neil's irrational behavior!

Also, I want Neil to behave as an intelligent adult that he is.

But then again, these are my wishes...m not expecting anything from the CVs. They will anyways do what they want to...so y break our heads there.

Thanks for the kind words.😃

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darsh333

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Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: paayaal

Thank you.😃

I just had this irresistible urge to write down a scenario where Sunheri will finally loose her cool at Neil & drive home a few points that just might make him stop being this hostile & use his cop brain to find out the truth...

M simply tired of an either angry irrational Neil or crying destructive Neil...10 years of drinking has seriously killed his thinking cells! I just want some intelligence displayed somewhere...

I do have an ongoing SS with docritu99 called 'Love at First Site'. You can check that out. Otherwise there is a host of other not unhappy stuff that I've written that you can read at my page Writer by Chance.

Thinking cells of Neil Khanna are gone😆

Naah..i meant a happy on based on the current track!😊

Love at 1st site..will read it at the weekend..i had read your prologue..will not miss that SS of you girls for sure! I loved Dus Din aur ladki in SS!😃

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HighOnSarcasm

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Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: darsh333

Thinking cells of Neil Khanna are gone😆
Naah..i meant a happy on based on the current track!😊
Love at 1st site..will read it at the weekend..i had read your prologue..will not miss that SS of you girls for sure! I loved Dus Din aur ladki in SS!😃

Yes it seems so doesn't it? Anger has completely taken over Neil Khanna...

A happy one on the current track...😆 I'll have to think about it...I don't think even the CVs know the way out!😆

Thanks😃...will be updating the 4th ch tomorrow. You can read them all in a go. It's not a long SS...will be over by next week mid!

Awww...thank you. We loved writing that one! Had an absolute blast while working on it.